Character tropes to avoid in your writing
These are tropes that have appeared time and again, meaning that they have lost their impact and become predictable. I would suggest avoiding these tropes unless you have a kickass plan to subvert them and surprise the reader. (Please keep in mind that this is only my opinion)
1. The comedic relief friend/sidekick
This character is goofy/clumsy/witty/sarcastic and has very little to say or contribute to the plot despite punch lines to break the tension.
Don’t get me wrong, comedic relief is great and I love funny characters. But “funny” should not be the character’s only true personality trait.
Make your funny character also be skilled in something relevant or have hidden depths. Just don’t let them be a walking joke book with no personality beyond that.
2. The abusive character with a sad backstory
This character often comes in the form of a brooding bad boy who is an asshole to everyone around him.
There’s nothing wrong with a character who suffers from PTSD or has gone through some shit and is now distrustful/withdrawn.
But being a victim does not justify being an abuser. If your character is basically just an abusive asshole all the time, don’t expect your readers to root for him/her just because they tell a sad story. If the character is shown to work on his/her problems and truly repent (or take a break from their significant other to sort themselves out), you might be able to make this work.
However, I would try to avoid this trope. It sends a dangerous message.
3. The teenager running the show
Look, I love YA books, especially dystopian, apocalyptic/fantasy YA. However, I’ve grown quite bored of the teenager running an entire rebellion with efficiency and confidence.
Not too long ago, I was a teenager and, honestly, I would have sucked at running an organisation or standing up to a corrupt government. Now, I’m probably not protagonist material, but I think most teenagers would be just as inept.
Have adults in charge, with youths working alongside them. (Unless of course your novel revolves around an adult-free environment)
Or, at the very least, show your teenage character struggling with difficult decisions or messing up the admin.
Seriously, most teenagers can’t even run a school committee without supervision. Be realistic.
(PS. I have nothing against teenagers; I just think they could use a little help committing treason)
4. The self-righteous leader
Your protagonist will not always be correct. Not everyone has the same morals and you cannot assume that your character’s is infallible.
I’ve read many books in which the leader of a group follows their own ideas without much consideration for the opinions of those around him/her. The reader is supposed to agree with this approach, to follow the flawless moral compass of this perfect character.
To me, this is boring and just makes the character unlikable
Have your leader listen to the other members of the group, perhaps even making decisions that go against their initial ideas because they have the ability to be persuaded by good reasons. Being open-minded is actually a great quality for a leader to have.
Make your protagonist struggle with certain moral dilemmas/difficult decisions and ask other people’s opinions.
This trope is even worse when the leader goes ahead and makes elaborate and dangerous schemes without telling the rest of the group.
5. The token “diverse” character
This character is LGBT+ or a POC and will never be the main character. He/she is often the best friend who must constantly use phrases that remind the reader that he/she is POC/LGBT.
This character’s interests and well-being will always be less important than those of your protagonist. In fact, most of the time, this character will die to advance the protagonist’s arc.
Adding diversity to your work is such an important thing, but doing it in this slapdash way is insulting.
Why can’t your main character be black/gay/transgender or have a disability etc.? Why can’t characters that aren’t cishet white males play an important role in saving the day or have the happy ending?
Seriously, the “black best friend” character has been done enough times.
There are probably a lot more character tropes I find annoying, but these are at the top of the list.
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