“When the”
The Bondswoman’s Narrative by Hannah Crafts is a fascinating narrative about how Crafts survived the hardships of slavery. The book was found and edited by Henry Louis Gates Jr, who decided to keep in the parts where Crafts had struck out words and chose replacements instead. Usually, when edits are made, the strikeouts are taken out completely, but not so in this case. I found this strikeout, in particular, to be thought-provoking because Crafts struck out the first ‘when the’ but then continued the sentence with the exact words, showing that she had some sort of change of thought. My initial impression was that she changed her mind and decided to go along with her sentence, after all, thereby keeping the first two words in the sentence. The more I thought about it; however, I realized that she could have been considering writing a different sentence entirely. It makes me wonder what she could have considered describing instead of that sentence. Perhaps she would have told her old master negatively or focused more on the portraits. Of course, we’ll never know what she could have been thinking, but it is an exciting idea to sit and ponder.
















