(..What exactly was I doing last...? I can't seem to remember...)
(..I remember the garden and... Hm.. It seems everything stops there...)
(..That still hasn't answered my question of...)
..Where am I...?
???- You.....
SUMIRE- ..?....
—She turns her head. Looking behind her. A black silhouette appears*
???- ..You....
SUMIRE- ..You...
—The silhouette slowly walks towards Sumire her arms stretched out.*
???- Y-you...
*TRIP*
???- ...!!...
*THUMB*
SUMIRE- ..Uwah...!
(..Is it safe to approach...? A part of me just can not leave someone on the ground...)
—Sumire approaches the women, getting on her knees she puts her hands on hers.*
SUMIRE- ..Are you alright...---?
???- ——You...!!
SUMIRE- ..!!....
(..This women... Is... She is wearing my face...! Yet it's distorted!)
..Kyah...!
—The women pushes Sumire to the ground.
???- Mine... Mine...! Mine mine mine...!!
What you have is mine...!!
SUMIRE- ..Kyaa..!! Unhand me...! Get off of me please...!
*SWAT*
*CRUSH*
???- That heart.. It belongs to me...!! Give it back to me..!!
You are not worthy of such a gem... It belongs to me...!!!
SUMIRE- ..Kyaaaahh....!!
——THE SCREEN SLOWLY FADES TO WHITE——
???- Sum...
Sumi...
Sumire...!!
*SLAP*
*SCENE CHANGES TO SUMIRE'S BEDROOM*
SUMIRE- ..!!...
..Haah...!! Unhand me at once... Get off...!!
???- O-oi..! Calm down will ya..?!
SUMIRE- No... No no no...!! Noo....!!
—Sumire quickly scoots further away.
SUBARU- Hey..!
SUMIRE- ..Don't touch my body...!! You will ruin his plans... You'll ruin his plans.... You'll ruin his plans...!!
..Chu.... Kuh...!
*SMACK SMACK*
SUBARU- Stop doing that..! Quit it..!
—Subaru takes hold of her arms.
SUBARU- Cut it out..!
SUMIRE- Stop it...! I am filthy... I am a disgusting filthy human stop it...! Uwahh...
SUBARU- I haven’t done nothin'!
Oi.. *SNAP SNAP* It's me look.
SUMIRE- ..Mm...
..Subaru-sama...
SUBARU- Yeah, I carried your heavy ass here when ya passed out.
SUMIRE- ..Heavy..?
Let go of me please... I can see the filth from your hands going onto my wrists...
SUBARU- ..Eh..?!
—Subaru lets go of her arms.
SUBARU- Tch... Whatever. Wanna tell me what that was about..?
SUMIRE- ..Mmm...
SUBARU- If my presence makes you feel ill.. Then I'll just leave.
I'm just a filthy disgusting monster aren't I..? I dirtied you didn’t I?
SUMIRE- ...
..Uwah... N-no...!
—Sumire grabs his face.
SUMIRE- ..Do not say such things about yourself...! That is simply not true at all.. I didn’t mean what I said at all forgive me…!
SUBARU- Don't touch my face like that..!
A few seconds ago you were screaming about how ugly I was.. You're hard to keep up with.
SUMIRE- You did not dirty me... I am... I am the one who has dirtied myself... It is all my fault do not blame yourself...
..Please...
SUBARU- Che..!
You've gotta a lotta nerve you know.. You're wrong, everything you say is true. I’m a filthy monster.
And now you're.. Like that. Unless this is the true you.
SUMIRE- ..True.. Me…
(..What’s considered your true self…?)
SUBARU- Shut up already..! It's what I am deal with it.
You can't change that, I'm not this "beautiful angel" you say I am, it's all lies.
I'm just... A good for nothing monster.
SUMIRE- ..But... How come that is not what I see...? How come I can't see what you see when I look at you... I don't understand...
SUBARU- You got shitty eye sight or somethin.. I don't know! But it's all wrong.
*SQUEEZZEE*
SUBARU- I'll just make you understand what kinda monster I am.
You've got me all thirsty and shit.. Damn it! You just had to go and pass out and go all psycho when I was just getting started.
—Subaru bites Sumire.
SUMIRE- ..!!... That hurts...!
SUBARU- Nn.. Mmm... Kuh..!
SUMIRE- ..A-aahh...
(..Somehow even still.. Despite this pain.. I don’t see a monster...)
..Kuh...!
(..This doesn't change the way I see him.. No matter how badly it hurts...)
SUBARU- ..Nn.. Tch...
Do you see now..? I'm not human, I'm even worse then most demons.. Don't you see..?
SUMIRE- ..No...
SUBARU- Hah...?
SUMIRE- ..No matter... What you may do.. I still see the same person... Your facial expression has not changed... No matter what you do... I simply can not see you in any other light...
..Even if you do the most awful of things to me... You are still the same person to me... You still remain Subaru-sama...
..I can not see you in your eyes... I see no demon.. Just a man…
SUBARU- ...
SUMIRE- ..Subaru-sama..?
—Subaru gets up.
SUBARU- You're pissing me off.. I'm not even hungry anymore..!
You're insanely stupid! The biggest idiot of all woman...!!
SUMIRE- ..But…
SUBARU- I'm out of here!
—Subaru walks off, opening the door and slams it.
SUMIRE- ..Haah...
—She puts her hand on her chest curling into a ball.
SUMIRE- ..How tiring it is... Caring for such things... Ne ne.. Father... I need you to tell me am I doing good...?
..Just what am I supposed to be doing...
..Am I playing your game right…?
..Haah… I’m so tired…
——SCENE FADES INTO HALLWAY.——
SUBARU- Fuck!
*SMASH*
SUBARU- The hells the matter with her..?
???- Is that the smell of.. Ah..! Girl problems..?
SUBARU- No.
LAITO- Bitch-chan is plastered all over you. And she's got you all "oh poor me she's making me feel weird" kind of thing. How cute~
SUBARU- It isn't that! Fuck off Laito.
LAITO- Hmm.. Maybe it isn't quite that, but you sucked her blood yeah..?
SUBARU- ..Hmph..
LAITO- Bingo..~! Now all you want is to take more, and more and more until you just burst..! Aahh.. Just thinking about makes me..
SUBARU- You're a fucking perv...
LAITO- I wear that name with pride. I thought you'd know that already.
But there is something about that women I just can't put my finger on, something about her just makes me.. Ache.
MONOLOGUE
A liar
A dirty dirty liar
Is what I am.
Though they were not my lies
Hands filled with those lies touched me, then I touched others.
My black hair dancing in its breath, it's soothing quiet breath.
I do not have freedom, however when I stand in my first breeze like this.
I can start understanding even just slightly.
I'll humble myself by this breeze by saying 'freedom' for the few minutes this breeze will last.
Repeating it till it seems real, but that word will never apply to me.
I am not someone who comes from lines of freedom.
——SCENE STARTS IN GARDEN——
*WOOOOSHHH*
SUMIRE- ...
(..It's cold... Very cold... This breeze is unlike anything I've ever felt before... It's.. Very nice...)
(..It feels nice on my wound... This bite feels very sore... But the breeze feels better...)
(..I like the cold…)
*WOOOOSHHH*
???- ...Oi.
Oi..!
SUMIRE- ...!!...
..Uwah... Ah.. Subaru-sama... How pleasant it is to see you...
SUBARU- Hmph.. What're ya doing out here..? Ya look like a weirdo.
SUMIRE- ..I am enjoying this lovely breeze... It feels so fresh...
SUBARU- It's cold that's what I think.
SUMIRE- ..I like this cold...
..I just want to hug it... The wind... And never let go...
SUBARU- Haah..?
SUMIRE- ..This garden is just as beautiful as well... Such pretty white roses...
..Did you know Subaru-sama that.. White roses symbolize pureness... But they also mean "I love at first sight"... Such a wonderful meaning..
SUBARU- I think it's stupid, Adding meanings to flowers.
I hate this garden, white roses and all that crap.
SUMIRE- ..Even these white ones...? I think they are very pretty...
(..Subaru-sama reminds me of white roses… Beautiful and delicate just as he is…)
SUBARU- The white ones are even more disgusting.
SUMIRE- ..If Subaru-sama does not like them.. Then why did he decide to come down here in the first place...? I do not wish for Subaru-sama to be uncomfortable...
SUBARU- I..! Grn...
Tch.. Just don't worry bout it it's none of your damn business..!
*SWAT*
SUMIRE- ..Oh my... How unpleasant... Subaru-sama does not need to destroy them…
SUBARU- Piss off...
SUMIRE- ..If I am correct.. “piss off” means to go away… If that his wish… Then goodbye..
—Sumire stands up.
SUBARU- Ah.. Don't do that sit back down..!
—Sumire sits back down.
SUBARU- W-well don't just..—! Tch... Why do you keep doing that..?
SUMIRE- ..I am not sure I understand your question... Can you be specific please...? I am simply following what Subaru-sama told me...
Does it not please you...?
SUBARU- No it doesn't..! It does the exact opposite effect.
SUMIRE- ..But... Why...? How does doing something that you ask me to do upset you…? You’re so confusing…
Father says if I listen to people, and follow orders properly... I can create much happiness in the world... Are you.. Saying my fathers a liar...?
SUBARU- Hah..? The fuck does yer dad have anything to do with this conversation...? And yeah, maybe I am, doing something to make others happy because it'll be good on you is hypocritical.
I hate women like you..
SUMIRE- ..Uwah...! Father is not a liar…! How could you say such a thing…! He is godly…
SUBARU- …?
SUMIRE- ..Father is no liar.. Father would not lie to me...! You do not know father you cannot say such things...!
SUBARU- Quit yelling..! Geez you're like another version of Kanato.
SUMIRE- ..Oh my... (..That was unusual.. I didn't mean to react that bad… I’ve been extremely angsty recently…)
..Forgive me Subaru-sama... Please do not speak ill of father...
SUBARU- I'll do what I want. What's up with this "good girl" act..?
SUMIRE- .."Good girl"...?
SUBARU- You're a pain.. I mean your whole "yes master do with me as you will!" kinda act. It's clearly all an act.
SUMIRE- ..I see… It isn’t an act…
..My mother.. And my big brothers... Especially father... Wouldn't approve of me acting as I shouldn't...
..I would be wasting fathers good work to make me fit for his plans...
If Subaru-sama would like me to be a way that pleases him... Then.. Tell me how I can change... I do not wish to upset you...
SUBARU- Guh...
*FLASHBACK*
???- Tell me Subaru, just how can I make him happy... If I can't do that, then I will be dishonouring him..
I need to make him happy...!
[YOUNG] SUBARU- I..
*FLASHBACK END*
SUBARU- ...
——Ing..
SUMIRE- ..Huh...? Subaru-sama.. Could you please repeat that...?
SUBARU- I said.. YOU'RE DAMN ANNOYING..!
*SMASH*
SUMIRE- ...!!... (..Subaru-sama... Broke the ground...)
..Subaru-sama... Please do not destroy the garden...
SUBARU- Shut up..! Come ere'..!
—Subaru grabs Sumire's wrist, pulling her towards him.
SUMIRE- ..Uwah....!
SUBARU- Fuck.. Walking around the place just letting people walk all over you.. Thinking that what you're doing is for the better..
This scent.. The pure sight of you just pisses me off..
I just want to fucking crush you with my bare hands.
SUMIRE- ..I’m sorry…! (..What have I done…? Is it for shouting at him…? All I can do is apologize…)
SUBARU- What..? You scared? Of course you are, anyone would be scared.. No terrified of a monster like me.
That’s what you’re feeling right!?
*RIIPPPPP*
SUMIRE- ..!!...
SUBARU- Quiet.. If you want to change yourself for me then be quiet.
Haah... You have such a small neck, you're so pale to. I bet if I squeeze too hard I might just snap your neck in two.. Hehe.. Imagine all the blood that would come gushing out.
You're so cold to.. Freezing cold.
SUMIRE- ..Haahh...
—Sumire lets go of herself, her body going slum.
SUBARU- Hmph.. Giving up already.
SUMIRE- (..My body gave up on its own… I can’t move…)
SUBARU- Maybe your whole servant attitude is kinda nice, means I don't have to worry bout ya squirming about.
Yeah.. Stay just like this, as much as I hate your hypocritical ordeals..
Haah..
—Subaru bites Sumire.
SUMIRE- ..Ah...!
SUBARU- Mm.. Kuh.. Mmm...!
Hah.. Haah... Your blood. The hell is this…
I want.. I want more..! Mm..!
SUMIRE- ..!!...
(..My head is going white.. I can't think anymore...)
..Sniff.. Kuh..
SUBARU- ..Nn.. Your eyes are just watering..
SUMIRE- ..I cannot.... Cry...
SUBARU- All girls cry, unless your some freak who gets off to this kinda thing.
Thinking about it now though.. You'd probably be one of those freaks.
Haah.. This blood of yours.. Nn... I can't stop myself.
SUMIRE- ..Hah... Cough... (..No more... I can't... See anymore...)
(..Shuu-sama seems to have not came today... My back can have a small break...)
(..I wonder what how many rooms this place has... Such a big building must have plenty...)
(..I want to explore every room in this place... Perhaps.. I could find something interesting...)
(..How about this one...)
*CREEAAKK*
——SCENE SWITCHES TO LIBRARY—
SUMIRE- ..Waahh...
(..A library...! I did not know these 'schools' had such things... Mine was bigger but... This is still so amazing...! Even better actually..)
(..They might even have books I haven't read before...)
(..I should look around before classes start...)
—Sumire walks over to a book shelf.
SUMIRE- ..Hmm... (..I've read a few of these... I doubt if I look at any of the rest I will only be disappointed...)
(..I guess I can reread some of these books... It won't be a issue...)
—She grabs a book.
SUMIRE- ..Shakespeare...
(..I've read a good portion of his books... This one is...)
..'The winters tale'... This will do...
—Sumire sits down on the ground.
SUMIRE- ..Lets see here...
*FLIP*
SUMIRE- ... (..It's been such a long time since I've last sat down and read a book... I normally have been sleeping as of late... I simply just can not get used to this life style...)
..Hmm..
*FLIP*
???- Nfu..~ So in reality bitch-chan is a hardcore bookworm. How cute..!
SUMIRE- ..Ah.. Laito-sama...
LAITO- The one and only, your favourite Laito-kun~
What's bitch-chan doing in the library during break hour..?
SUMIRE- ..Reading a book...? I'm sorry but was that not obvious...?
LAITO- Ohh, it's rather attractive when bitch-chan goes sarcastic.
SUMIRE- ..I am not being sarcastic... I am being serious...
LAITO- Whatever the case, what book has caught your little attention hmm..?
'The winters tale' by William Shakespeare..? Isn't that the one about the man who tried to kill his wife and kid or something along those lines?
SUMIRE- ..No not exactly... One of the characters Leontes gets jealous of the mistakenly the courtesy between his wife.. Hermione, he believed she had sex with his friend Polixenes... Leontes attempts to have him killed however he escapes.. And is on the run from being killed...
..Afterwards.. His wife became pregnant... He rejected her and threw her away in a dungeon and rejected the baby...
..If memory serves me correct though... It does get a happy end... I will have to reread it though... ーー
LAITO- ...Zzz...
SUMIRE- ..Laito-sama...?
LAITO- Hm..? Oh sorry bitch-chan I was just getting bored of you talking about a boring meaningless book.
Sorry but I'm not into things like this.
But.. Reread it? Now why would you want to do something like that..?
SUMIRE- ..I.. Am not sure... I just love reading is all...
..I love that I can read people's experiences... I can just read through a page instead of thinking about it... I like reading about peoples feelings... I like reading about how touch feels..
..Even if I have to reread those things over and over again.. Just to understand what it might be like...
LAITO- Love it huh? You really are strange.
Redoing things is plenty boring though, why not do something fun and exciting, with me for example.
I bet I'm a lot more fun then some stupid old book written by some old guy.
SUMIRE- ..What did you have in mind...?
LAITO- We can do looottss of things together, we can experience all the little things you read about in your silly books.
Say have you read 'the hunchback of noter-dame'..?
SUMIRE- ..Yes... The original story made me quite sad as a child...
LAITO- I figured, then you must be aware of the character La Esmeralda yes?
SUMIRE- ..Well.. She is one of the main characters in the story...
LAITO- Tell me what happens to her in the story won't you..?
SUMIRE- ..She was framed for murder and thought to be practicing witch-craft... She was sentenced to be hanged...
..But before hand... Frollo came to visit her.. And proclaimed his obbession with her... She was given a offer by Frollo.. To either offer herself to him or... Die... She refused and was hanged the next morning...
LAITO- Was she.. Nfu..~
—Laito grabs Sumire's hand.
SUMIRE- ..Laito-sama...?
LAITO- She was in a little love triangle, a lot of different men were obsessed with that women.
You know.. You make me think of her, your wonderful smell drives all the men mad, same as how her beauty drove men mad.
Could you perhaps be the real life version of her..?
SUMIRE- ..No... I can not be... Because she is fictional and I am real...
LAITO- Are you though..? Why don't we test that, Fufu~
*THUMB*
—Laito pins Sumire down.
SUMIRE- ..?!...
LAITO- Why don't I give you a similar ultimatum as Frollo did to Esmeralda.
Offer yourself to me, or die.
SUMIRE- ..Hah...?! But... Shuu-sama said...—
LAITO- Shh.. We're talking about me and you right now.
Now why don't you answer, come on I'm just waiting I can barely handle my excitement. Aaahh...
SUMIRE- ..I...
(..I do not wish to die... But I do not want my blood to be taken either...)
(..What I want is... For him to get off...!)
*THUMB THUMB*
SUMIRE- ..Gah...
..I want... To offer myself to you...
..Wha...!?
(..That just slipped out... It was as if my own words were not mine... Ouch…!! My chest hurts...)
LAITO- Fufu really..? I knew you would make the right decision bitch-chan..! Personally I don't want to hear a ear full from Reiji or even Shuu for that matter. I wouldn't hear the end of it if I killed you.
Nfu.. Come on, show me your terrified expression, I want to see all of it.
SUMIRE- ..Laito-sama... This place doesn't seem to be very comfortable to do such things in a public space...
LAITO- But no one can see us.
You picked just the right hiding spot sitting between these two massive shelfs.
So then.. Let me show you a world full of truth, where you don't need to see but instead feel.
My little Esmeralda.
Haah...
SUMIRE- (..Not right now... Father please save me...!)
—Laito bites Sumire.
SUMIRE- ..Kya....!!
LAITO- Nn.. Mm.. Haah... Nn...
...
This.. Taste.. It’s just like that person…
SUMIRE- (..that person…?)
..Laito-sama stop... Class is about to begin...
LAITO- How do you expect me to stop now..?
You always smelled so good yet I didn't know your blood would taste like this, it's unlike anything I've ever tasted before, nfu~
You truly are something else bitch-chan. I don't think I'll ever be able to bring myself to stop.. Your own blood is dripping all over that beautiful face of yours.. Down your pale skin..
*SLUURRPP*
Nfu.. You're shaking, are you gonna cry? I don't mind, come on your Laito-sama is here to comfort you all night long, till the morning rises.
Nn..!
SUMIRE- ..!!....
(..My body doesn't have the proper tolerance for this... I want him to stop... But my voice won't come out properly...)
.St... (..Stop please..! Why can't I speak..?)
LAITO- Mmm... Kuh.. Nn..
*THUMB THUMB*
SUMIRE- ...!!...
LAITO- ...Hah?
???- Oi.. Quiet down will ya..?
LAITO- Hmm..?
Ah Subaru, have you come to join us..?
SUBARU- Tch..! As if I would join doing something like this with you of all people. Don't make me laugh..!
LAITO- Perhaps your just scared of pretty women, that's it isn't it..?
SUBARU- Grn.. Shut your damn trap year round slut..!!
*THUD*
—A book hits Sumire's head.
SUMIRE- ..Oof...!
SUBARU- …!!
LAITO- Hitting women Subaru..? What kind of man are you.
SUBARU- That's not——!
LAITO- Phew.. Well I'm done here.
Thanks for the amazing entertainment, I had plenty fun.
But don't you worry your pretty little head, I'll be back to have another taste of that divine blood of yours.
Later bitch-chaann..~
—He leaves.
SUBARU- I hate that guy.. Such a pain in the ass!
SUMIRE- ...
(..My vision is blurry... That awful feeling in my chest still lingers...)
*THUMB*
*FLICKER*
—Scene shows silhouette of a women.
SUMIRE- ..Ah...!!
SUBARU- Oi..!
Tch.. Whatcha screaming for..? Yelling outta the blue all the time.
SUMIRE- ..Mm... Forgive me...
SUBARU- Quit saying sayin sorry all the time. Especially when it has no meaning behind it.
Humans are all like that I can never understand it.
SUMIRE- S-sorr..- I will...
(..Subaru-sama is so honest... Says how he feels and expresses it so freely... I'm almost jealous.. I wish I was as carefree as that...)
..Thank you Subaru-sama...
SUBARU- Hah..? The hell are ya saying 'thank you' for?
SUMIRE- ..For saving me from Laito-sama...
SUBARU- Don't thank me for that. I didn't do anything, I could really care less if he sucked you dry. I was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.
Tsk.. It's disgusting watching him do that. I could puke..
SUMIRE- ..Well I am still grateful...
SUBARU- Hmph.
Hmph.. What're ya staring for..? Oi seriously cut it out don't look at me like I'm some angel or somethin'..!
Keep doin' that and I might hurt you.
SUBARU- Quit yer staring..!
SUMIRE- ——You're....
SUBARU- Ah..?
SUMIRE- ..You're so very pretty....! You are like.. Snow..!! You look like fresh glowing snow...!
SUBARU- Hah...?!
—Sumire gets up, walking towards Subaru.
SUMIRE- ..And you feel so soft... Such beautiful features...!! Oh, it's such a shame how you hide your face under all this hair...
..You look like an angel...
SUBARU- ...!!
Ya.. Seriously calling someone like me.. An angel...? Beautiful...?! The hells wrong with ya..!? Get those eyes checked..!
Cut it out..! You're being weird!! And stop touching me..!!
SUMIRE- ..Fufu...
LIBARIAN- Shhh...! You two, get out if you are to be yelling in here.
Not only that.. But if you are going to do such "intimate" stuff, do it at home..!
SUBARU- We weren't——!!
LIBARIAN- Silence..!!
SUBARU- Don't tell me to be quiet..!
——SCENE SWITCHES TO INSIDE LIMOUSINE——
SHUU- Heeh...
REIJI- Hmph..
AYATO- Pfft..
KANATO- ...
LAITO- Fufu..~
SUBARU- Gn...
Damn it.. Stop staring at me..!
SUMIRE- ..Fufu...
AYATO- Haha..! What'd ya do to get her to be like that..?
LAITO- Must have been incredibly dirty, what could you have possibly done after I left the scene hmm..? Care to share Subaru-kun..?
SUBARU- Nothing..! Get your head outta the gutter..!
REIJI- I would love to lecture you but I can't help but find this humorous.
It's genuinely baffling how butthurt some people get over OC's and especially in the Diabolik Lovers where OC's were literally the heart of the fandom. Why even interact in the first place with a blog which is clearly about an OC just to leave hate?
So what if your character is too overpowered? It's not hurting anyone. I swear these people have no whimsy. If they want to read "x reader" fanfiction then they should go on AO3 or find a blog that writes this stuff. Nobody is forcing them to interact. It's not hard to just scroll away.
I'm sorry for the hate you received just for having fun. It's clear how much effort and love you put into drawing and writing Sumire. They're just cowards who send hate under anonymous asks.
{ I honestly wasn't entirely bothered by the ask. But I don't get much asks on this account (not saying this for pity or any reason btw!!) so I get excited to get any form of attention on here regardless of it being hate or not. It's not preferred but I feel fulfilled no matter what. }
{ coming back to tumblr was hard for me because I wondered who would care if they say my oc again kinda thing. But I noticed people were excited I started writing for her again so it was a lot more easier for me to get back into the fandom again. So to me an ask is a ask, I replied for the fun of it because I thought of it as a little entertaining as well. }
{ Immature?? Maybe but I'm an 18yr old writing fanfics and roleplaying on tumblr I can goof off on here LOL. The ask wasn't even directed towards my writing style or anything really js mainly about me being selfish for having an oc. I thought the big ah essay they wrote was funny asf for me. }
{ The fandom kinda dead, but I'm here for the fun of the game and I do have a lot of amazing people on here to talk to as well. I get so excited for any ask, especially when people question me about Sumire n my story lore for diabolik lovers. To me no matter how exact you are to the characters and canon story, nothing someone writes can or is canon cuz it's not written by the actual creator of the story. So it's best to have fun with it and do your own thing with it cuz it's not hurting anyone!! }
{ Anyway I do really appreciate this ask, made my heart feel good. But I promise I never take those kind of asks to heart ever I find them kinda funny cuz at the end of the day it's never that deep }
{ It's on my mind whenever I write for Sumire's route on how she literally becomes a god }
{ Like she rules all of makai in the end and DOES create a new race so she's called "mother" by everyone but the sakamaki's, mukami's and Tsukinami's. BECAUSE SHES IS MOTHER she is the start of the new race, so like she's heavily respected and worshipped so much that her presence is considered luck }
{ people write books about her and in the human world she's considered like a mythical ancient woman aka a old legend }
{ Thinking about how Sumire has no idea there's been a cult where everyone worships her like she's jesus christ or saint mary }
{ Her brother Chousoka built and grew a literal cult for her, and he planned to put her there cuz he thought she would go to him after their father died LOL }
Bro just fucking keep your oc to yourself its not that hard to stop acting like your oc is cannon While stories featuring "Original Characters" (OCs) are a staple of fanfiction, there is a strong argument for why Reader-Insert (X Reader / Y/N) stories offer a superior and more universally appealing experience for the community.Here is a breakdown of why many readers prefer "Y/N" over OCs and why some feel OCs should remain personal projects rather than public fanfic time. The "Alienation" Factor The primary draw of fanfiction is often the desire to personally interact with a beloved fictional world or character. When an author uses an OC, they are introducing a stranger with a specific name, appearance, and personality that the reader has no connection to. This creates a barrier; instead of being the protagonist, the reader is just a spectator watching two strangers interact. X Reader stories remove that barrier, allowing the reader to step directly into the shoes of the lead character Relatability and ImmersionOCs are often criticized for being "Mary Sues"—characters who are too perfect, over-powered, or have tragic backstories that feel forced . These traits can make a story feel like the author's personal wish-fulfillment fantasy rather than a narrative for the audience.X Reader/YN: Provides a "blank slate it let's everybody of every race evey body type ect to be involved By using "Y/N," the author gives the reader the power to project their own appearance and personality onto the character, making the emotional stakes feel personal OCs: Force a specific vision on the reader. If the reader finds the OC annoying or unrelatable, they lose interest in the entire story immediately. I bet your lame ass doesn't even understand The Purpose of Platforms like Quotev wattpad and Tumbler hello they literally thrive on community engagement. Most readers go there specifically looking for "X Reader" content because they want an escape the real worlds bullshit or just enjoy imagining being in their favorite anime or show im not sure how its so hard for you oc lover to understand When an author fills a popular tag with an OC story, it can feel like a "bait and switch do you not understand how many fucking stories i genuinely liked but the dumbass who wrote it chose to bait me by saying its x reader when its really their ugly oc?" to readers who were looking for a self-insert experience.. OCs as "Self-Indulgence your just fucking selfish bitch your oc isnt cannon to diabolik lover it never will be i bet you’ll argue that OCs are essentially the author's private "imaginary friends or some bullshit and hey yes creating them is a great creative exercise, putting them into public fanfiction can come across as self-indulgent but keep it to yourself dont call it cannon or at least let us also be aprt of the fun you selfish witch. Because gusse what when an author wants to write a story about a specific, unique character they invented, many believe that should be saved for original fiction rather than fanfiction, where the draw is supposed to be the existing canon or the reader's involvement X Reader stories are built for the audience, while OC stories are often built for the author your not soing this for us your doing it for yourself so it should be kept to yourself. By sticking to "Y/N," writers ensure their stories are inclusive, immersive, and focused on the reader's experience, which is why they consistently outperform OC stories in terms of popularity and engagement
{ I js think it's fun personally it'll never be canon n that's why it's so fun I can make Laito have a long ah beard if I wanted to }
{ But ur right, oc's tend to be mary sue's especially Sumire }
{ It's hard to write Sumire because she's jaw droppingly gorgeous, living off of daddy's money, rich asf, never worked a day in her life, got 13 men fighting over her, selfless and sweet, a baddie with a backstory, insane character development, inherits Karlheinze's powers by becoming Adam herself, KILLS HIM HERSELF, becomes the vampire queen to create world peace then bags 12 husbands afterwards }
Your oc is not cannon you delusional weirdo this is why people hate oc' now because you pyschos thinks your oc is cannon and nobody else can be with the characters its disgusting.
could you like grow up? Nobody wants your oc's ruining diabolik lovers or anything else for that matter you wanabe edgy weirdo this is why people hate oc's these days yall are forcing them in our face and it's disgusting keep them to yourself your oc looks like an Ado wannabe and it's very very sad you don't have your own style.
{ I do think my followers would enjoy having Sumire Kanshi shoved down their throats }
Your oc ruined diabolik lovers oc's Thin everything idk why people can't keep them to themselves not body wants to read about you or your ugly ass oc we want to read about ourselves with the boys we want to put ourselves in the anime we want to go on the adventure this is why x reader and x y/n stories are starting to die out because selfish loser like you too attached to your oc doesn't know when to share the spot light.
{ Lucky for u I base my story off of the game not the anime so I'm probably not the best account to look at for the anime diabolik lovers version }
{ but it's hard to not attract the spotlight when Sumire looks like this }
People like you are why I hate oc's why is everything about your oc? What about other people's oc's? Or x reader or x y/n your such a lovely whore you want fictional characters all to yourself wich is pathetic since your oc is ugly as hell and the drawing looks like that kid in the back of the class who tries too hard to be edgy and emo maybe stop being selfish? The world doesn't revolve around your oc hell it's unrealistic that the boys from diabolik lovers would even like your try hard oc.
{ was gonna make a drawing but I don't have the energy to show Sumire's etheral face card }
{ but ts funny cuz she kinda is the kid in the back of the class who tries too hard to be edgy and emo thanks for ur headcannon anon sending luv n kisses from me n Sumire }
{ Shin lowkey was yearning for Sumire for 100 years and it fills my heart with joy n that's so canon like he's so crazy for her n will NOT under any grounds let anyonnneee take her away from him I LUV IT }