I enjoyed the new episode.
However, I gripe with the fact it failed to depict relationships and provide... "in-character" reactions and interactions between certain characters.
It's not super serious, obviously, but my expectations kinda fell flat when Book didn't even share a meaningful/memorable interaction with any of the freesmarters, ESPECIALLY considering this was the first time they were together in like... Years?
Also, as much as I love Pencil, it almost felt like they were playing off her whole "going back in time" plot as a joke. It might have just been a bit for the scene, but considering how TPOT 19 left off on an arguably more serious note, it was definitely a surprise. I really like that we were able to see how she's screwing up already though, lol.
Adding onto that, the (ex)-Freesmarters' reaction to Pencil making that deal felt really underwhelming. If anything they looked mildly upset.
The whole episode was a mess, but I really did enjoy it. I just felt like there were no slow-paced scenes at all, let alone meaningful/impactful ones that really shaped any of the characters, despite the amount of dialogue. It could have been done in a more thought-out manner, with respect to each individual plot without twisting the viewers brain into a knot.
Also, they really, REALLY nerfed One. It was pretty disappointing. Emily did a great job voicing her though, as per usual.
So, yeah. Nice episode. Messy writing. I'll probably return to watch it and analyze some more because, again, this is based on me watching the episode through a fans lens, not a critical one.
YOU GET IT ANON!!! I didn't even consider everything with Pencil, her screen time was so brief! But with fast pacing, a LOT of characters, and several things happening at once... yikes. Yeah.
It will forever break my heart that they nerfed One 🥲. Scary villain with infinite power beat to the ground by a light switch.
The episode would've benefited from a smaller cast and/or additional time. People'd get impatient with a longer wait but quality over quantity! (Not to mention they have three episodes to explore everything too. I bet they're also about 40 minutes each)











