#affectusrp

[hazelrps]

Hey Hazel! We're all hoping you're having a fantastic day/night. Would you mind giving us an opinion? Thank you very much!

Thank you, I hope you’re all having a fantastic day/night as well! Sure thing, here we go. I think I’ve come across this before but I’m not sure. The url is short and nice and the icon is really pretty but it doesn’t tell me much of what the rp is about which makes me interested enough to click. The graphics are really pretty, I love the colors and the vibe of the whole thing. The fact that you guys have been at it for a week and still going strong just makes me super happy and proud because it takes a lot of dedication and having a positive mindset about things to try and open up an rp and your dedication now totally reflects on what your dedication will be like when it opens! The navigation is gorgeous, I love the graphic as well. I love love love the plot. Kind of reminds me of Delirium but it’s not just with love here, it’s with everything else so I really admire that. I could see a lot of drama and stuff coming from this. The rules are nice but I find that six days is kind of a lot. It can appeal to those with busy schedules but what if someone logs on every six days? It’d kind of be unfair to someone who’s willing to log on at least 3/6 days. It works with anyone wanting to take a hiatus but I don’t know, I’ve never seen this rule played out so it could go both ways in all honesty. Overall, I really love this roleplay and I’m slipping it into my rec tag! Good luck with this, babes, and I hope you open real soon.  

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[ddlovatosrps]

Hey there, Izzy! We hope you're having a wonderful day. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, we opened yesterday and would love to have your opinion on our roleplay. Thank you very much!

it’s not too much trouble at all! it’s under the cut for you!

the theme you’ve chosen is awesome, and the colour scheme all fits together pretty perfectly. i love the graphics, and the design of them and the way you’ve used psds/textures and made it all blend well together! i also really love the graphics at the top of each page, they’re really great! your plot is amazing, it’s so well written and thought through and i have plot envy right now. it’s so interesting and if i still group rp’d, i’d honestly consider applying! i think the only thing i’d say is maybe move the summary of your plot to the top of the plots page, because i know that if i read the summary first, i’d want to read more and people might skip over your plot if they think it’s too long to read. so yeah, the summary at the top would possibly help applicants a lot more! your characters page makes me want to cry because it’s so pretty, i’d never of thought to make the original theme look like that! your apply page looks pretty great too, but i think that there’s possibly a little too much writing under each header - specifically the first one. for example, instead of “Hey there, applicant !! We’re so glad you’ve decided to take your time to apply. Your application means the world to us. Why don’t you start off by introducing yourself ?? What’s your name/alias, age, timezone, && preferred pronouns ??” maybe cut it down to something like “Start off by introducing yourself !! What’s your name/alias, age, timezone, && preferred pronouns ??”. it’s less words, and straight to the point so people don’t need to look around to figure out the application!

really though, your rp looks amazing and like i said before if i was into groups i’d apply!! good luck with everything!