First off, thank you for the great month wishes! It has been a busy one for sure, so naturally, it's been kinda stressful, but I can't complain too much 😊
Secondly, found time to binge read the chapters I missed so prepare for this long ass ask 😅
-Calling Vision a Child had me cracking up! The humor you use in this series has been really good!
-I mean, both of them are kinda valid. Y/N doesnt trust Wanda for good reason and Wanda is trying to settle in and make up for past mistakes but in her head (and in reality) Y/N won't let her.
-I'm surprised Y/N was able to block out Wanda from invading her mind. And so quickly. Impressive
-Wanda and Y/N working together!!! >>>
-Wanda following around Y/N is so cute 🥺
-The way in which she finds ways to interact with her too 🥺
-Not Wanda's lil “I thought we were getting along better" 😢
-Vision, by man, respectfully, back off 🤚 lol. You and Wanda are cute and all in canon, but if I wanted that, I'd watch the movies. So, again, respectively, back off in the "J Marvel Universe"
-Wanda coincidentally went into the restaurant huh? Not saying that Y/N's anger is justified, but she is right in the fact it's kinda suspicious... *some time later at the end* I KNEW IT!!!! (<I literally said that out loud btw)
-First off Y/Ns line at the start was so funny but it caught me way off guard and then Visions line caught me even more off guard, I legit looked like this 😧 Got me feeling shock right off the back lol
-Natasha and Y/Ns relationships >>>>>>
-"Wanda's eyes widened when she saw you, like a deer caught in headlights. She nodded too eagerly before excusing herself as if she was in a hurry." -OMG cute wanda!!!!
-Me the whole time at the bidding "please be wanda! Please be wanda! Please be wanda!"
-“Do you want to get out of here?” YES Y/N!!! PROGRESS!!!
-Wanda is right, Vision being with her does seem like an experiment almost. Not saying that he truly doesn't have feelings for her, but all that he's shown is more of an innate curiosity due to who/what he is.
-Also, relieved Wanda doesn't like vision romantically, don't know if I can handle that angst again 😮💨
-Taking her back to your apartment, huh, Y/N? 😏. Lol, in all seriousness tho, I'm happy. But knowing you, it's not gonna last is it? 🤨
-Wanda's thought in the apartment are sooo cute and wholesome 🥺 And the ones that were sad, I'm glad that she's able to talk to someone who understands about it, knowing she probably hasn't told anyone, perhaps Vision, but he can't really understand.
-Y/N and Wanda opening up to each other and being kind >>>>>>
-"Despite his constant presence, it was clear that you were the one she gravitated towards, the one she focused on during conversations, her laughter a little louder, her smiles more prolonged." -ok, ok, good, good! Still no signs of recooperation on Wanda's part phew
-Wanda and Y/Ns banter >>>> Them getting along >>>>
-The "something on your face" thing? Is this leading where I think it's is? Omg, omg, omg, yes! Yes! Ye- VISON NOOOOOO!!!!
-Y/N, you didn't? And after Wanda spent the time missing you!? Oh, ok, phew!
-*sigh* I saw the self sabotaging coming but I didn't want to see it 😭
-Wanda seeing through the lies tho >>>
-“You’re right,” she whispered. “I deserve more than a coward.” -damnnnnnnnn 😢
Not gonna lie, I really missed hearing from you :) I'm happy to know you're still out there, reading the story. Thank you for feeding me this lengthy feedback. I love it :)
Red - Lol, Y/N is really young here (she's a year or two younger than Wanda), so I made sure she acts a little bratty, especially because I want to portray her growing up alongside Wanda and then how Wanda's disappearance really affected her and made her into a totally different person.
Mind if I - Y/N is something else... because if it were me being followed around by Wanda, i'd be the happiest person in the multiverse :D HAHAHHA J MARVEL UNIVERSE! that made me laugh so hard!
The Twins - "relieved Wanda doesn't like vision romantically" - technically no... but..... Anyway :D thank you for appreciating the wholesomeness of Wanda and Y/N's interactions in this chapter. I really wanted an innocent and meaningful moment for them, and it seems I got it :)
Vis - Y/N's going to regret rejecting Wanda in this chapter. Promise.
I had a great time going through your comments. Hope to see you again next week :)