For the writing prompt thingie! "you already spend every day here, we might as well just make it official!" I feel this is very them XD
Hi, hello. I combined these two kind of? But in reality I couldn't think of something for the second one and decided to throw them together cause why not. So both of these will appear somewhere in the chapter xD
I was kind of hopeing I could make it longer? but this is the right length for it, it doesn't need to be something long.
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Hi! I’ve not been able to fall asleep so I come to cause chaos!
Imagine you are having a soft moment with Eclipse. Maybe you were talking about small things that happened during the day, but eventually the conversation trails off. You don’t know exactly when, but you do know that right now he is holding your face gently with two of his hands. Both thumbs are tracing your cheeks softly as he gifts you the most adoring smile, his eyes kind and content. His other two arms slide from your shoulders, down your arms, until they are tenderly holding your hands, allowing himself to affectionately squeeze them for a moment. Then he leans down, his forehead touching yours, never stopping his gazing into your eyes as if the most beautiful landscape resided within them. Slowly, he brings both your hands up to his faceplate. Plants a kiss on them the best way he can, right before nuzzling you. He lets go of your face, but only to wrap his arms around you fully, as his other two keep your hands between you both, close to his chest, close to him. He could stay like this forever, holding you, knowing you are there with him. The happiness that you cause in him threatening to overload his systems from the intensity, yet your presence providing warmth and calm. The world fades around him when he gets these moments with you. He doesn’t understand how you manage to make each one better than the last. But getting to understand things is his job. So he’ll research it again, and again, and again. Everyday he gets to spend with you.
Alrighty, I think I’m sleepy now, see you tomorrow! ^_^
SCREAMING SCREAMING I CANNOT BE NORMAL JKSADLFHASKDJFHSAKJLFHSADJKF AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA CHAOTIK ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME??? HOLY SHIT KJSDLHFKALSDF OH MY GHOD I CANNOT BSDLFKJSDHAFLKS HTHUIS SAFDJKLSDHF THIS IS SO GOOD???? HOLY FUCKING SHIT
I AM CHERISHING THIS. THIS IS MINE NOW FOREVER. I AM GOING CRAZY. AAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
When you first followed it was Gah! but now it's turned into Oh!! (just eliminate the geez at the end there, I love the interactions XD)
I INTIMIDATED YOU??? HELLO????? WHA
ME????
ME?????
Chaotiiiikkkk ;0;!!! Aaaaaa!!! I am both honoured and aaaaaaa about that dksalhfklajds but so so glad it's Oh!! now :DD
Even more honoured about the Oh!! cause part of it is "I got scared when you followed me" and in my experience that is reserved for cool people and people you look up to kinda thing?? and I just--
cracks knuckles* Okay, so first of all I want to say New Horizons is Sweethearts the fic! Neon and Eclipse are just so cute together and it made me smile how quickly they clicked. Like they just Got each other. The fact that they have such similar interests helps a lot of course and it's so cute how they have found in each other someone that allows them to get excited and build on each other's energies!
They're also very observant of what the other needs, even if trying always not to overstep. When it comes to each other at least XD The complete disregard of the agencies secrecy rules made me laugh out loud, but I guess it doesn't make as much sense to worry about that when they are working in a lab where it's unlikely there will be external dangers haha.
Which is also hilarious taking into account the Accidentally Undercover storyline, since Sun and Moon are pining their hearts away, wondering how they could ever get close to their coworker/landlord while Eclipse just looks at them casually fidgeting with something and going: What? Like it's hard? XD
I also like how you have established the kind of affection that is so compatible between them. Eclipse especially caught my attention because his actions speak so loudly, and what they are saying is simple: stay. Eclipse pays so much close attention to neon. What they need to fidget with, what they need to keep them in top shape, and what will make them comfortable, especially in his apartment. And it makes sense! Since a lot of his insecurities are rooted in what happened with his brothers, thinking he wasn't wanted, that he was too close and that they needed space away from him, his way of showing affection would be to make it clear someone is welcomed in HIS personal space. No pushing away. (which must be hard because he does need to ask for space when he knows he might get a crash soon, but he doesn't want anyone to feel like he did when he was pushed away). And Neon's preferred way to get affection compliments it really well! Because they like contact, and closeness! And Eclipse can see that and feel welcomed as well. Especially when it's clear Neon WANTS him around, wants him in their space and sharing what makes them happy with him. And then they match his efforts to welcome him and it must have been such a big deal to him!! Even if the last chapter was a bit sadder, he was reassured he WAS wanted!
So in conclusion, good fic, wholesome times make me smile, and two goofs finding and complimenting each other feels me with fuzzy feelings! Awesome work with the characterizations all around
Oh and as a sidenote I love reading about the inventions as well! Very interesting!
OKAY SO I AM ACTUALLY WRITING THIS ANSWER TO YOU ON ANOTHER DOC SO I CAN ACTUALLY MAKE COHERENT THOUGHTS. CAUSE THIS HAS ME SO EXCITED I AM SHAKING.
AND THIS IS ALL GOING UNDER A READ MORE CAUSE OH GOSH THIS IS LONG KJSLHADFKJHFKJ
OKAY OKAY FIRST!!
Yes!! Eclipse and Neon click immensely well! They both got their jobs ‘cause they’re good at what they do, and it definitely helps they both have a flare for doing things dramatically. N because they’re both lil nerds in the same/similar fields, them being able to talk to someone who has the same flare AND interests? INSTANT SPARK N GOOD ENERGY! Once these two get going, they will NOT stop!~
Second!!!
Yesssss they’re very observant! ‘Cause to them the first step to a good relationship (romantic or not) is to know what the other likes/is comfortable with. It’s also why during the very first chapter Neon jokingly thinks “is this love?” or hints at it several times. ‘Cause Eclipse just naturally started watching them n analyzing them. (remember, he is naturally curious about everything after all! If he can be a possibility, anything can. So everything is worth paying attention to!) Like how he notices Neon struggling with something on the top shelf but they don’t ask for help, so he just gets it for them. They were struggling > He waited > They didn’t ask > He helped.
AND YES, THEY JUST THROW AWAY THE AGENCY’S RULES. CAUSE WHY START NOW WHEN THEY NEVER LISTENED TO BEGIN WITH???
Hehehhe Luce made a comment once in the tags and it was legit this:
Sun/Moon: Whoa is us, we’ll never get close to our crushes :(
Eclipse: What? Like it’s hard?
and I have been thinking about it ever since KJLHSDKFJL every chapter it springs to mind.
THIRD!!!
my first reaction when reading the analysis of their love languages was: “Woah, even I didn’t think of that. I was just writing”
But after thinking a bit I also realized; It was mostly based off the info we have about Eclipse. (and Neon is just me with a funny hat on, but we don’t need to talk about that… haha)
Tho I legit did not realize how I was writing Eclipse was giving the impression of “stay” ‘cause while I was kind of aiming for it I didn’t realize I was doing it. I didn’t realize his actions spoke, and dear lord have they been speaking. (I suppose I now understand why Daye always says I write them naturally. It just, HAPPENS) I have stared a lot at all the Eclipse poses from Luce, enough so I have a whole folder bookmarked of just posts with him for when I do writing. He has a lot of trauma from the two people in his life leaving, and then not showing him that they care. Sun and Moon SUCK at showing him they actually care about him. He needs to know they want him there, and yet they hardly talk to him. It’s hard to invite people back into your life when they already left, and even harder to bring people in when you’re scared they’ll leave. So I’m glad I managed to get across that he really really just wants Neon to stay. ‘Cause I think of his trauma, but I don’t… I guess actively think of how I am writing it. I just do it.
As for Neon… Neon was easy. As I mentioned, just me with a funny hat. This fic is very very self indulgent, I love the mans! So I just threw myself in there along with my love languages. So Neon loves physical touch, even if it’s as simple as sitting close enough to have contact. They will always invite someone into their personal space because they want them there.
I didn’t originally mean for them to mesh this well, but it worked out very well in the end! We have two love struck puppies who just want each other in their lives <3
Also thank you for reading!! I’m so glad you enjoyed it so much!! Sorry if my thoughts/reply isn’t coherent! Unlike you I do not analyze things well, nor do I formulate good replies. This is why I scream when I like something XDD AAAAAAAAAAA is easier than this is!
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A bit late for this one, but light blue and turquoise! <3
COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT THIS BUT HI YES, I HAVE ONCE AGAIN FORGOTTEN WHAT IT WAS FOR BUT I LOVE YOU AND HELLO <3 <3 <3 I ASSUME ALL GOOD THINGS AND APOLOGIZE FOR MY CHEESE BRAIN (TERM AFFECTIONATELY STOLEN FROM TREE)
