#dialogue test

[sixer-moose]

do you guys remeber this au?

well ive developed it a teeny tiny bit more (6k words) and have a dialogue draft (for the ending/reunion) comic for you guys

I promise its a happy ending, even if its not a fully resolved one 😋

[chazchaschad]

a little animation test I wanted to try. Not my best work, a little choppy, but better than most of what I do.

[evriikas]

“Who here feels like they have no idea what they’re doing”  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

4th year 2D dialogue assignment

[stringsofheartsworld]

"So this is your new boy and brothers, I'm assuming?? A bit on the young side isn't he?? Well at least they're pretty enough to fit in with the rest of the young ones you've got running around."

"ok, ok, no joking about your kids and your new boyfriend. Got it. You didn't need to break my nose."

"Yes sir. I'm gone."

[off-color-darkrai]

Writing- Dialogue Tone Tests

When Writing anything, anything at all, one of the things I consider the hardest to get right is the Dialogue. I'm always worried about if what I, or my characters are saying actually fits the Tone I'm going for.

So here's some fun Tests you can use for that!

(Notably I didn't come up with the one to test Romance Dialogue, but I can't remember where I saw that one originally)

Romance: Imagine Danny DeVito saying the line. Is it creepy or weird now? It's bad writing.

Serious/Dramatic: Imagine Nicholas Cage saying the line. Does it sound completely ridiculous now? It's bad writing.

Comedy: Imagine Peter Cullen (Optimus Prime/Eeyore) saying the line. Is it no longer funny? It's bad writing.

Horror: Imagine Goofy playing the character saying the line. Is it still scary? If not it's bad writing.

Want to test it?

Romance-

Bad line: "I don't like sand, it's rough, and coarse, and gets into everything"

Good line: "You have bewitched me, body and Soul"

Serious/Dramatic-

Bad line: "And not just the men, but the women, and the children too!"

Good Line: "Instead, you come into my house on the day my daughter is to be married, and you uh ask me to do murder, for money."

Comedy-

Bad Line: "Do you know what happens to a toad when it's struck by lightning? The same thing that happens to everything else."

Good Line: "I'm gonna go home and sleep with my wife!"

Horror-

Bad Line: "They’re eating her, and then they’re gonna eat me! Oh my Gooooo[sh]!!!"

Good Line: "Vampires, real vampires, didn't nibble on the necks of nubile young virgins. They tore people to pieces and sucked the blood out of the chunks."

You can use these on movies too!

[snickersnaps]

Dialogue practice for school

[c4sp3rmoved]

:)

[camodielsart]

forgot to publish this.

another assignment from my animation class. had to do a dialogue test and i took audio from Of Mice and Men.