frenchbringers notes (3/?)
while i do believe that thancred being a total shithead to ryne/minfilia at the beginning of shb was well in line with his character arc, it doesn’t hurt any less to see it. and his dialogue in french softens the blow a bit, i think, making his character have more of a tired and disappointed but caring vibe as opposed to being outward with his anger.
scene: after you rescue minfilia from the eulmorians in lakeland and meet her and thancred for the first time in shb. alisae asks thancred why he was in lakeland.
EN!thancred: the girl. minfilia.
FR!thancred: i was there for her...for minfilia...
alisae then asks minfilia why she left suddenly without telling thancred; minfilia replies she felt wol’s presence and knew they were someone she had to meet.
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minfilia: but with all the commotion in lakeland, i was afraid that thancred wouldn’t...let me...
thancred: and would i have been wrong? had i arrived a moment later, you would have been back in your cell in eulmore.
FRENCH:
minfilia: thancred said it was too dangerous to go near lakeland because of the soliders that had just arrived. but i thought that with you [wol] we could have stopped them...
thancred: and at the end, they caught you! you were lucky that we didn't arrive a moment later. do you realize they would have brought you back to your prison in eulmore!?
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ultimately, fr!thancred’s tone is much less scalding and accusatory; the change from “he wouldn’t let me” to “he told me it was dangerous but--” is quite notable imo. i’m a big thancred enjoyer and enjoy his shb writing a lot, but i have to admit, fr!thancred and minfilia’s relationship is much less jarring.







