Hi I'm the one who just called Nightleap the Fumbler, I just wanted to expand, Nightleap is such a good character, you did a monumental job with her, and every interaction and relationship she has with the other cats of Saltclan. My horrible socialization queen. I'm always so excited whenever we get to see how more of her and her family's story unfold. Also watching Frostcurl with bated breath, love that battlehungry little beastie!
Nightleap is my least favorite character tbh but I’m glad I was able to make her an impactful character
She has a lot of negative interactions with everyone except Snow, except for the past 2 moons where they argued, broke up, and got back together the same moons. I decided instead of writing a bunch of break up make up scenes I’d just make their relationship super rocky until this moon which is the only one they didn’t immediately become mates again.
Also there’s been several moons where her only interaction with Coralpaw is that she ‘forgot to train her’ and every time I tried to send them on a training patrol together* it would end in failure.
And that’s not even counting all the shit she pulls in the future and the stuff I’ve cut for simplicity’s sake. She genuinely is so frustrating sometimes but the drama is pretty good for the story.
Frostcurl by contrast is a blessedly simple cat, every moon he gets a prompt about getting into a fight with something and barely getting hurt. That or he keeps falling and landing deftly and impressing everyone lol I love him
*I would switch Coralpaw from mediator apprentice to warrior, send her on patrol then switch her back. I did this bc I had no mentor for her so I was fiening for something between her and Nightleap














