Hi chana, its weekly anon!! Im so so so so sorry i was away for a while, my stupid wifi went out and we literally JUST got it back USDFSDKHFS howEVER i just caught up with everything ive missed and i literally have so many words. ‘On a cold summer day’ was literally so fun to read. As someone who LOVES fluff, this was such a cute story to read. Watching their relationship develop over time was literally so wholesome! Now, insurrection (its about time) i literally could NOT stop crying +
+ LITERALLY CHANA THE TEARS JUST KEPT COMING???? I had a FEELING something was gonna go wrong but i thought someone would find out about the club and snitch! I- LITERALLY THE WAY YOU WRITE YOUR STORIES ARE SO SPECIAL THAT I ALWAYS GET SO ATTACHED TO ALL THE CHARACTERS. I love how you brought attention to our disgusting school system, and especially the feeling of not having a passion or hobby. I feel exactly like that and it feels so nice to be understood. +
+this story was so bittersweet but the lesson it teaches is so beautiful. And i LOVED yn’s character so much, she was so kind hearted and so bubbly, it brought a lot of softness to the story!! And ‘for everland’ FIRST OFF CAN I SAY I'VE NEVER BEEN HAPPIER TO BE ABLE TO READ 24 HOUR TIME FUSDJGKSDG also hands down agree with y/n, its CAR- amel. Moving onto the ACTUAL story, the way you write dystopian concepts are so interesting. +
+ I love the little details you add and how you always add explanations to the things they use (eg, suppressants) also is it bad that i ACTUALLY thought everland was a place they went? WHEN I GOT HIT WITH THE TRUTH I WAS SO SHOOK. ESPECIALLY THE WAY YOU WROTE THE LINE OMG “don't you understand? Everland is death.” LIKE IT GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS. I usually prefer happy endings over sad endings, but the way you write your endings is more of a ‘complete’. +
+ Like there are sad elements, but there's also a sense of happiness in it too, which makes it so unique. ANYWAYS! Again im so so so so so sorry i wasn't on for so long :(( BUT READING ALL OF THESE MADE ME SO CONTENT. Thanks so much for all your hard work chana, as usual it paid off SO well!!!! Take careeee!! <3 <3 <3
OMG WEEKLY ANON YOU’RE BACK I MISSED YOU 🥺🥺🥺 PLEASE YOU DON’T HAVE TO APOLOGIZE AT ALL I’M JUST SO GLAD THAT YOU’RE BACK 🥰🥰
AND YES, on a cold summer day rlly is one of my rArE fluff fics LOL. it’s definitely one of my more wholesome/comedic stories 🤩
omg i have a lot to say about insurrection (it’s about time) only because like half of the stuff that happened in that story happened in my school LOL. the bomb threat, the student su*cides were all stuff that happened irl. not to mention a couple of our students threatening to bring weapons to school to gun everyone down 😀 (they said, and i QUOTE “it was gonna be bigger than columbine”). yes, my school is messed up. welton is loosely inspired by it (: yes the story is a sad one, i agree 😔😔 I REALLY TRY TO MAKE MY CHARACTERS LIKABLE 😭😭 it took me a while to develop oc from insurrection though. i needed someone who was altruistic, intelligent and insightful but also blinded by her strong beliefs (which she paid the price for in the end). i wanted to write a story like insurrection for more than four years now. i remember one of my first planned drafts of it actually did end with the male mc ratting out the female oc and her group LMAO. but i held onto the school revolt idea for four years because 1) it’s kinda controversial 2) i didn’t have the writing skills then to flesh out the idea 3) i wasn’t accustomed to writing “darker” stories. but i mean, now that angst is my thing, i totally snatched up this opportunity 🥰 but you’re absolutely right! i tried very hard to make insurrection sound “lighter” and “happier” using yn’s character!!
AHAHA AND I AGREE WITH YOU. IT’S CAR-AMEL. I FIGURED WRITING THE HOURS IN MILITARY TIME WOULD GIVE TAGNA THE MORE “DYSTOPIAN/MILITARY SOCIETY” TWIST TO IT. omg i was SO worried that people would find out that everland was death too early on in the story but to see that you had no idea until yoongi made the big reveal MAKES ME SO RELIEVEDFJDSLFJL. and yes. i think i’m literally obsessed with bittersweet endings. i love having that sad, angsty element to the end of the story. i don’t know why LMAO. but i also like interweaving a bit of hope. because what’s sadness without happiness yk? i need bOTH to get the perfect ending 😭 AHH I’M SORRY THAT YOU PREFER HAPPY ENDINGS AND ALL I EVER DO IS WRITE ANGSTY STUFF 😭😭 I PROMISE I HAVE A CRACK/FLUFF FIC COMING UP SOON!!
thank you SO, SO MUCH for this lengthy review again. you have no idea how much it brightened up my day. i write so you can read!!! and i’m so glad that i can even have the smallest impact on others through words/stories. please take care as well!!! 💜
