Should I make a story comic type about my creepypasta oc?...
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Should I make a story comic type about my creepypasta oc?...
Twenty One's backstory. part 1
trigger warning: bullying, alcohol abuse and physical and verbal abuse
“Freak!” they chanted, laughter filled the room as a young girl crouched by the wall, her hands weakly cradling her head. She begged them to stop, tears and snot running down her face. She pleaded, like always, but they didn’t stop. they never stopped. In one swift motion, a boy, seemingly a few years older than her, kicked her right in the gut. She choked on her own tears, now kneeling as she clutched her stomach, her face down in shame. Before the crowd could land another punch, the school bell rang. A girl turned around one last time and spat at her.
Finally they all cleared, heading to class. She sat in the hallway, wiping her tears away with her hoodie sleeve. Her face stung and she was still having trouble catching her breath. After a few moments, she stood up slowly, stumbling in the process. A few deep breaths later she staggered towards the girl’s bathroom. After splashing her face with some ice cold water, she looked up into the mirror, pushing her jett black hair out of her face. The reflection revealed a young teenage girl, no older than 15, her pale skin littered with old and new forming bruises. Uniquely she had two different eye colours. Her left eye was an icy blue whereas her right eye was dark, almost navy.
She still struggled to breath, clearly still winded from the kick earlier. She was used to this abuse. They accused her of being possessed by the devil. “Freak!” they would chant. She wasn’t ugly, she wasn’t dumb and she was one of the kindest souls you could meet, yet she was still harassed relentlessly. Why? Just because she was born different. Born with heterochromia, born to be left handed. And this wasn’t the 2000s, being different was seen as a threat. But that wasn’t it. She was born with hearing difficulties. Her mother discovered this when she would snap at her, asking her to bring her a beer and she wouldn’t respond. It took many beatings to figure out that she wasn’t ignoring her mother, but she simply could not hear so well, and to top it off, she was also visually impaired.
Every day was a struggle, she’d put extra effort into listening and having to squint to see something mere metres away. She wiped the cold, still dripping water off her face and sighed. Only a few more hours until she leaves this hell hole, just to return to something not much better, and worse of all, Lucy wasn’t in school today.
Lucy was her best and only friend. The only one that wasn’t bothered by her quirks, the only one besides her brother that she cared for. Lucy was a bright girl, always smiling. The type that would light up any room she entered. She was pretty as well, with warm blonde hair, soft blue eyes and rosy cheeks. Naturally she was popular in school, so it was a wonder why she became friends with her.
Not that she would complain. Lucy had made life so much easier for her.
With her around, the bullying would become lessened, half the boys too busy fawning over her new haircut to even bother with her. Lucy was a good friend, even if she’s caught lucy laughing at her, mocking her cries. That was ok, she didn’t mean it anyways. Right?
As the school day came to an end, she gathered up some tattered books in her locker, shoving them inside her plain black backpack she’s had since she was 6 and shut her locker. She tried to remain unseen as she left the school, to no avail. People would giggle and sneer at her and some would avoid her, not wanting to contract her ‘demonic’ sickness. Even the teachers weren’t much help. They wouldn’t beat her, of course they wouldn’t, but that was about it.
She walked home alone as parents came to collect their children, the richer ones would pull up to school in cars. As she walked, some of her upperclassmen would shout insults “weirdo!” “demon!”, some even going as far as to yell at her to “end it”. Some of the parents would quickly hush their kids, not out of kindness but out of fear that she would ‘curse’ them while the other parents would snigger at their kids' comments.
She didn’t go home first, instead, she walked towards the nearest kindergarten and picked up her younger brother. He was normal, with a matching set of deep blue eyes and curly brown hair. She crouched down with her arms open as he ran towards her. “Sissy!” He’d exclaim as he jumped into her arms. She’d hold him close for a few moments before letting go. “C’mon silly, let’s go home” she’d say as she ruffled his hair.
Standing up she took his small hand and walked towards their house. He would tell her all about her wonderful school day, how the teacher gave him a treat, how they played tag and how he won the game. She’d giggle at his childish antics, praying he’d never lose that spark. Once he was done explaining how well his day went, he would ask her about her school day. “It was good, lucy and I had first period together” lie. “Then our entire group of friends ate lunch together.” another lie. “They wanted to hang out at the mall later but I couldn’t miss picking up my little rascal!” she messed with his hair again, something she found herself doing often. Liar. It was one lie after the next.
She unlocked the front door of her dinger one room apartment. The moment the door swung open a wave of alcohol flooded her nose. It reeked of vodka, it always did. She entered the apartment to find her mother drunk and passed out on the couch. “Go do your homework ̶r̶̶e̶̶d̶̶a̶̶c̶̶t̶̶e̶̶d̶” she whispered before ushering him to his room.
She sighed as she picked up some of the empty bottles laying around the living room, tossing them in the trash. She opened the windows in a futile attempt to clear out the sick smell. She walked towards the kitchen and got started on dinner, spaghetti bolognese. They didn’t have much money, surviving on government benefits. They lived paycheck to paycheck so she would take up any small jobs available. Mowing the lawn, cat sitting, babysitting even donating her blood. But not many would hire her. No one wanted their beloved pets and children to be tainted by her ‘demonic energy’ and she was too young for a job.
She plated up her brothers and brought it to his room with a glass of water. She set it down on the old desk next to him and kissed his forehead. Then she plated up some for her mother, bringing it to the couch she was sleeping on. “Mom…” she’d whisper, gently shaking her shoulder. “Dinner’s ready” she would say.
She never knew which version of her mother she’d get. Some days, she would cry and wail that she was such a bad mother, how proud of ̶r̶̶e̶̶d̶̶a̶̶c̶̶t̶̶e̶̶d̶ she was for taking care of the house and her son for her. She’d promise to sober up, to go to counseling, to get a job and to step up. She never did. She had learned that after her mother made the same empty promises for the third time.
Other times, mother was violent. She’d scream and yell at her, “why did I have you?” “my life was so much better before you existed!”. Complaining about how her boyfriend left her because she gave birth to a demon and the next thing she knows, there’s a bottle flying towards her.
“Mom..?” she’d repeat, her mother didn’t awaken from her slumber. She sighed and left the food there. Finally she made herself a plate, it was significantly smaller compared to the other two portions. She didn’t eat much, she never did, preferring to feed her family first. She ate her food in silence, knowing when she finished, she had dishes to do, homework to complete and a house to clean.
Just like that, her day was gone. A day filled with bullying, taunts, chores and those rare moments of joy when she walked home with her brother. If only time could be frozen in that moment, preserving it forevermore. She stood up and washed all the dirty dishes and tidied up the place as best she could with whatever little energy she had.
After a few moments of resting on a chair in the kitchen, she groaned as she stood up, she was exhausted. She headed towards the bathroom and stripped before getting into the shower, standing under the gushing water. The steam quickly fogged up the mirror and windows. The scalding water stung like a bitch against her fresh wounds. As more steam built up, the air became suffocating, a sign she should get out. She does just that. Grabbing her towel, she dried off the water droplets on her skin and threw on a tank top and some sweatpants.
That night she sat at the desk filling out her homework, it didn’t take long. Despite everything, she was a quick learner. One of the brightest in her school let alone year. Although that wasn’t too hard to achieve, her school didn’t exactly build a reputation of hosting smart students.
It was already midnight when she finished. Like clockwork, her drowsiness kicked in and she went to bed. Every day felt the same. Wake up at five in the morning, pack lunch for her brother, make breakfast, get to school, get taunted and beaten, pick up her brother, get home, endure more abuse from her mother, cook, tidy, shower, homework and sleep. It was an endless cycle that could drive anyone insane.
𝚃𝚑𝚎 𝚙𝚛𝚒𝚗𝚌𝚎 𝚘𝚏 𝚑𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚙𝚛𝚒𝚗𝚌𝚎𝚜𝚜... idk I just wanted to draw Darrian and Aiden in hell enjoying the sun or moon hard to tell :P I just wanted to try warm color schemes because yeah I need practice UvU Aiden belongs to my husbo on Insta ✨Reshares, likes and follows appreciated!!✨
OC Backstory Weeks Wrap-Up Post
Martha von Hochfels, Princess of Issarien
Introduction; in which a princess introduces herself
Family; in which the princess talks about the love towards her family and the loss of two brothers she never met
Friends; in which the young, lonely princess wishes for nothing more than a true friend
Rivals; in which the princess finds herself betrayed by a jealous girl who feigned to be her friend for many years
Loss; in which the princess and her family mourn the loss of a beloved queen, a mother and grandmother
Home; in which the princess travels north to reunite with her cousins, that really are like her siblings
Thank you for hosting this lovely event @yourocsbackstory! I really had a lot of fun working on these prompts and I loved exploring Martha’s life.
Adding the tag list in case someone maybe missed a prompt and would like to read it! Thanks to everyone who already left such wonderful comments and tags! I really appreciate all of them <3
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OC Backstory Weeks by @yourocsbackstory | Week 0: Intro
Introduction (~800 words)
Martha von Hochfels, Princess of Issarien, 22 years of age
You are far too easy to read, I was often told when I was younger, and I lay awake at night, wondering what it meant and how I could change. Mother said, I should not change to please others, and that I should never let people see that their criticising words affected me. But they did. It made my heart sink to the bottom of the ocean, for I knew I should do better, try harder.
I was good at languages, spoke the tongues of Fennden, Askeria and Varden, and could even communicate with the people of the Dirahyan Islands. My penmanship was excellent, as my tutor had often remarked. History had always intrigued me, even if some happenings were so terrible that they made my heart bleed, and I prayed none of them would ever occur again. I was taught many great things, all the things I was expected to know, and yet it had not been enough.
OC Backstory Weeks by @yourocsbackstory | Week 6: Home
Introduction | Family | Friends | Rivals | Loss | Home (~1200 words)
Martha von Hochfels | The Dawnbringer
When the tall mountains rose in the far distance, I felt a tingle of excitement in my stomach. It had been more than a year since last I had seen them, yet they were so familiar, so welcoming that a grin curled around my lips.
I grabbed my leather gloves from the seat beside me, slid my fingers inside, then leaned outside the window. “Stop,” I exclaimed against the clopping of hooves and rattling of the carriage, and at once it creaked to a halt. “Do you want to join me?” I asked my mother.
Wearily, she shook her head, then pulled her braided brown hair over one shoulder. “No,” she said. “But please give them my regards.”
“Of course.” I reached for her hand, and she squeezed mine as her lips curved into a smile. “I wonder if they have seen us already.” With those words, I stood and stepped off the carriage, letting the coachman help me down.
OC Backstory Weeks by @yourocsbackstory | Week 5: Loss
Introduction | Family | Friends | Rivals | Loss (~900 words)
Martha von Hochfels | The Dawnbringer
The heavy bronze bells resounded across the city, singing their very own song of grief. I could feel it humming inside of me. It reverberated in my chest, my bones, my heart. To hear even the bells lamenting made me realise that I could never relive the bygone days.
The queen had left our world, and Alasing mourned. Soon word of the grave news would reach into every corner of Issarien that Queen Alburg had died.