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Cold mornings

A/N: I just wanted to note that i dreamed or shifted into this scene last night and I just had to put it in writing for others to read! I hope you enjoy :)

Parings: Roan x Reader

Summary: You enjoyed the cold brisk morning on the balcony that’s attached to your room. You reminisce the thoughts of the previous nights events, daydreaming in your own little world that is until he interrupts you.

Warnings: Mentions smut, some language? maybe? I don’t remember. 

Words: 1,453

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Your Pov: 

The cold sheets loosely wrapped around your almost naked body, the smell of the earth and him wafting off of them and into your nose. Your eyes fluttered open, your right arm resting by your head as you turned to look out at the sky. The sky was a light shade of oranges and blues, soft white fluffy clouds streaking across. 

You were partly awake, having only fallen asleep for a few hours before waking up now. Your mind was filled with thoughts of him. The way he grabbed at your hips, caressed and worshipped your body like a queen. How he made you feel all kinds of emotions. All of it made a blush rise up your neck and to your cheeks, swallowing the small lump in your throat. 

The gentle breeze in the air blew through the sky and into your room, blowing around the curtains that hung from your large canopy bed. You exhaled, watching your breath turn to a cloud in front of your face as you lay there, enjoying the warmth your sheets provided you.

You pushed back the blankets, the crisp cold air bit at your exposed thighs as your feet made contact with the clean, shiny floor beneath you. You sniffled a bit from the cold, grabbing your thin, white, silk robe off the coat rack next to you. You quickly put it on, sighing as the smooth fabric touched your skin, not that a thin silk robe would keep you warm. 

You patted out onto the balcony, crossing your arms in front of yourself as you placed them on the porcelain railing, watching the colors mix and dance across the sky as the sun came up. A warm smile crossed your face as you remembered the previous nights events. Just the mere thought filled you to your core with warmth. 

You had small bruises on your hips where his hands had been, and small red spots where his mouth had been to kiss and suck, leaving behind his mark. You remembered how his large, warm hands left behind a trail of love and lust wherever they touched, leaving your body wanting more.

You didn’t realize how cold you actually were. You didn’t notice the many goosebumps that appeared on your skin each time the breeze blew by you. All because your mind could only think of him. 

You and Roan hadn’t been together long, merely a couple of weeks. The relationship was still so new and exciting, like two young teenagers high on love for the first time. It was something you wanted to last forever and you hoped that he wanted that too. 

You didn’t think you would find love, ever. Being trapped on the ark for years and then sent down to earth to die with a bunch of other teenagers made it seem like everything was over. Like there was no hope. But, when you guys found out that earth was survivable it sparked hope in you that maybe, just maybe, you would find someone that would love you. 

However, that never seemed to happen. 

When you hadn’t met that person yet you began to give up, slowly but surely. You watched all of your friends around you love someone, lose someone, be with someone. But you? You hadn’t even come close to experiencing what love was. That is, until you met Roan.

When you first met him it was nothing but silent glances and stares from across the room. Then, it turned into small conversations at dinner or when you would run into each other in the hallways. Soon that blossomed into what it is now, a new loving relationship. 

Roan didn’t talk much when you first met him, he was rather simple and said what was on his mind in few words. But now, talking is something he always does when he’s with you. You remember how he spoke last night, his voice sending chills up your spine with each word that left his slightly chapped lips. You moved your hand down your chest, feeling the swell of your breasts as the memory of you pressed against his toned and muscular chest flashed through your mind.

The door to your room creaked open, a small smile coming to your face as you turned to look over your shoulder. Your robe blew slightly behind you, sending another chill up your legs. You wore nothing but your undergarments underneath the robe that was tied loosely to your body. Not caring if your lover could see everything or not. 

“Why aren’t you asleep?” He took long but fast strides over to you. His large, warm hands running along your arms, warming you up instantly as he stepped in front of you. You sighed in content, the feeling of his rough hands rubbing up and down your arms created a heat inside you. 

“I just couldn’t sleep.” Your words were nothing but a whisper, your breath fogging out in front of you even with how quiet your voice was. He looked down at you, wrapping one arm around the small of your back and pressing you into his chest. You inhaled his scent, the smell of earth coming off of him. Your soft fingers rested on his clothed chest, your index finger running over the leather strap that ran across his shirt. 

“These aren’t the type of clothes you should be wearing when it’s this cold outside.” His voice was deep and soothing, like honey. But also glossed over with worry as he eyed you, his pants growing tighter the longer he gazed upon you. You were beautiful to him in every way. You let a small chuckle escape your throat as you pressed the side of your head into his chest. His steady heartbeat pounded against your ear, giving you a sense of relief knowing he was safe, warm, and healthy. 

“I didn’t feel like getting dressed.” You breathed out. It was true. You didn’t feel like putting on all your clothes in that moment, not wanting to feel the heavy weight of them pulling you down. You wanted to enjoy the moment of freedom you had. Listening to the peaceful sounds of the wind as it blew through the trees.

A small quiet gasp left your throat as Roan picked you up bridal style, your arms wrapping around his neck as he carried you inside towards the large bed in the room. The feeling of his leather and coarse fur coat tickled your soft, smooth skin. Earning a small giggle from you as he gently set you down on the bed. 

He hovered over you just long enough to place a sweet, innocent kiss to your lips before standing back in front of you. He began taking off his heavy clothing, letting it drop to the floor in swift movements as you watched him, eyes full of nothing but love and admiration. 

You laid there, one exposed leg sticking out from your robe as you kept yourself propped up on your elbows for support. Your eyes danced over his exposed chest as he tossed his shirt to the ground. You admired the many scars on his body, scanning over his toned abs and chest made your heart flutter in your chest. 

Finally, when he was stripped down to almost nothing he crawled into bed with you. Supporting himself over you once again to give you another kiss, a longer and more passionate one this time. Your lips molded with together, firmly pressing against each other as one of his arms wrapped around you, lifting you up and off the bed and into his chest. Your hands moving up to wrap around his neck, running your hands through his hair at the base of his neck at the same time.

When you pulled away you were both breathing heavily, resting your foreheads against each other as you caught your breath. Your eyes fluttered shut as he moved to lay down, taking you with him. 

He laid on his side, grabbing the sheets with his free hand and wrapping the two of you up in them. You let out a breath as the warmth spread around your body. You snuggled into his chest, admiring the way his eyes shined as he looked down at you. You caressed his face, rubbing your thumb along his cheek bone a few times, earning a soft sigh from him in return.

He pressed his hand against the small of your back, the warm touch sending sparks straight to your core. He placed a loving kiss on your forehead, making you giggle from the tickling sensation his stubble gave when it touched your skin. 

This is what love was. This is what true love was. 

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I’m Sure They’ll Understand pt. 2

part 1

fandom: MCU

pairing: Steve Rogers x Reader

summary: It’s been a couple months since the party and you’re officially free of HYDRA’s hold on you. The memories still remain, along with the guilt, but at least there’s no chance of reverting back to a murderous super soldier. Steve wants you to try to meet the Avengers once more, and despite your fear, you agree.

warnings: angst

word count: 2017

a/n: i got a little carried away... oops.

“You want to bring her on a mission? Did those seventy years in the ice freeze your braincells, too?” Tony glares at Steve across the conference room. The whole team is assembled to discuss an upcoming mission and Steve has just announced his decision to bring you along. “The party was one thing, but this is serious business.”

Steve meets his glare steadily. “Shuri said she’s clear for action. She managed to override all the programming that HYDRA implemented. Plus, Y/N’s not going to be doing any fighting. I just want her to have a chance to bond with you guys.”

Natasha clears her throat and sits up a little straighter. “Look, Steve, I want you to know that I support you and Y/N. But frankly, it’s not the best idea for her to be exposed to HYDRA so soon after deprogramming.”

“Even I couldn’t go on missions for a few months after I came out of cryo again,” Bucky cuts in, tapping his fingers on the table. “It’s nothing against Y/N, it’s just…”

“It’s just you don’t trust her,” Steve says accusingly, sweeping his across the whole room. His team members can’t meet his eyes. He continues, “Y/N deserves your trust. She’s been working so hard for the last year to get better. All the things that she did with HYDRA weren’t her fault.” Steve turns to look at Bucky again. “Buck, I expected some understanding from you at least. None of us hold you responsible for anything you did in the past.” Bucky looks down at his hands guiltily. “So why is it so different for Y/N?”

“Steve,” Natasha says gently. “We’re not trying to attack you or Y/N here. We’re trying to do what’s best for the team. And teaming up with someone who willingly joined HYDRA, not to mention injured you, doesn’t seem smart.” Natasha holds her hand up when Steve begins to interrupt. “I know she had no other choice. But she’s still a liability.”

The fight has died from Steve’s voice. “Just give her a chance. I’ll even stay in the quinjet with her during the mission. I’ll make sure she’s safe.”

“Not a chance, capsicle,” Tony interjects. “Fury wants you taking point on this one. If anyone’s going to stay with her, it’s the Manchurian Candidate over there.” He nods his head toward Bucky.

Bucky’s face is a mixture of disappointment and anger. “Why me?”

“Because you’re the only one who’s been through the same sort of thing Y/N has,” Natasha explains. “You can empathize with her situation.”

Bucky crosses his arms but doesn’t say anything else. The logic is sound, but that doesn’t mean he’s happy about it.

“So, she can come?” Steve asks, trying to keep from sounding like a giddy child.

There’s silence as the rest of the team exchange glances. Steve can hear his heart pounding in his ears. All he wants is for the team to accept you. No matter your past or the horrible things you were forced to do. He wants them to see you like he sees you – beautiful, intelligent, and worthy of love and compassion.

Tony sighs and drags a hand across his face, sighing. “As long as she stays in the jet.”

…

“I didn’t think we’d be going on a whole-ass mission, Stevie,” you murmur as you pull on one of your boots. The rest of the Avengers have been giving you a wide berth while you all get ready. You eye them all nervously, watching them prepare. The only one who has even spoken to you is, of course, Steve. “You said you just wanted me to hang out with them.”

He offers you a small, reassuring smile. “It’ll be okay, Y/N. It’s a small base; nothing out of the ordinary anyway.”

You tug your other boot on and stand. Even though you’re not going to be doing any fighting, you’re still suited up in a black and forest green bodysuit, along with your signature black hood. You’re not allowed any guns, but your preferred weapon is a bow so you don’t need them anyway. You do, however, have one small knife sheathed at each hip; it’s the most the team would let you have. Your quiver feels empty without any arrows in it, but you understand that the team’s safety is priority. And although there’s no chance of you reverting back to your brainwashed ways, you can tell the Avengers still don’t trust you.

You pat Steve on the shoulder and move closer to the doors of the prep room, hopping from one foot to another as nerves surge through you. You have your back to the rest of the team so you don’t have to deal with their worried glances any longer.

Bucky moves to stand next to Steve, who is adjusting one of the straps on his suit. Bucky sighs as he looks at you. “I still don’t think this is a good idea, Steve,” he says.

“And frankly, I don’t care,” Steve shoots back before walking toward you without another word. Bucky shakes his head and continues to get ready.

Steve places a gentle hand on your arm and you stop your anxious movement. “Ready?” he asks.

You nod and look at the waiting quinjet outside. “I just wish we’d get a move on. I don’t know how much longer I can stand here without throwing something.”

Steve looks at you with worry in his eyes as the rest of the team glances around nervously.

You roll your eyes. “I’m kidding,” you say a little louder, trying to set everyone at ease.

A few moments later, Tony claps his hands together and announces that it’s time to leave. You mumble a quick “thank God” and head out the doors to the jet.

You sit close to the back, leaving a seat for Steve to join you if he wants to. Everyone else takes seats toward the front and you try not to be offended by the amount of space they leave between you and them. Steve sits down next to you though and you flash him a grateful smile.

The ride to the HYDRA base is nearly silent, the tension thick in the air. The team’s thoughts are preoccupied with both the mission and your possible actions. Meanwhile, you attempt to lighten your own mood by playing Sticks with Steve. He’s much better at it than you are but it’s a good distraction. Your soft giggles and words float up to the front of the jet where everyone else is sitting.

“Ten bucks says they’re making out by the end of the mission,” Sam whispers, his own attempt at an icebreaker.

Nat snorts. “I say by the time we get to the base.”

“Deal.” Sam smirks and they shake hands. A bit of the tension lifts and a conversation starts up between the rest of the team members.

You’re half-paying attention to their voices when you hear your name. It’s Nat, trying to get your attention. “Y/N! Clint wants to know what kind of arrows you prefer.”

You blink slowly, trying to register the words. Someone wants to know about you? Your Sticks game forgotten, you fidget nervously with the hilt of one of your knives. “Um,” you start, clearing your throat, “I use smoke bomb arrows a lot. Good for cover when you’re trying to get through a place that’s heavily crowded with hostiles. Sonic arrows are good for distractions.”

Clint nods and takes a few arrows from his quiver. He hands them to Nat, who passes them down the line of chairs to you. You take them hesitantly, noticing that they’re a mix of the two types of arrows you mentioned.

Tony frowns and says to Clint, “I thought we said no weapons.”

Clint rolls his eyes. “They’re barely weapons. They don’t do any damage besides stunning, at the most. Besides, I’m considering it a welcome gift.”

“A welcome gift? For what?” Tony asks, incredulous.

“The Avengers, obviously. It doesn’t look like she’s going anywhere anytime soon.”

The two guys look over at you and Steve. The two of you are now holding hands lightly. As they watch, Steve brushes a strand of hair out of your face and you blush.

Tony hums lightly but doesn’t say anything else.

You can’t help but notice that the rest of the team seems a little more at ease since Clint’s peace offering. A few times, some of the other members ask simple questions but it doesn’t often branch into a longer conversation. Still, you’re happy that they seem to be learning to accept you.

Once you arrive at the base, Steve stands and briefly explains the mission, reiterating once again that you will remain in the jet with Bucky. Things move quickly from there, with Steve handing you an earpiece and instructing you on how to use it before leading the rest of the team out of the jet. You watch them leave, sending up a quick prayer that everyone returns safely.

Once it’s just you and Bucky, you glance around the jet. Bucky hasn’t moved except to take a knife from its sheath and begin to flip it absentmindedly. The tension from before is back, even stronger now.

You can hear the team talking through the earpiece but you barely pay any attention. It’s mostly Tony making jokes and Steve instructing the others on where to go. Eventually, the silence inside the jet gets to you and you have to say something. You clear your throat and Bucky turns to look at you, his face unreadable. “So… is your specialty knives?” You immediately feel dumb for asking such a ridiculous question but can’t do anything about it now.

Bucky shrugs and flips his knife again. “Don’t really have much of a specialty. Used to be a sniper. HYDRA trained me in everything though.”

You nod and silence settles in the air again. Bucky seems to be closed off, which is why it surprises you when he speaks once more, “I remember you from… then. When we were with HYDRA.”

The way he says “when we” makes it sound like some sort of pact. Like some shared trauma that ties you together. You force your mouth to not smile and meet his eyes. “I remember you, too.”

“They called you Ranger, right?”

A tingle goes down your spine at the old name. “Yeah. I don’t use that anymore, though. Too many bad associations.”

Bucky nods, and you think you see a little empathy on his face. “It’s the same with me and the Winter Soldier.” He pauses and there’s hesitation in his voice when he says, “I don’t… I don’t hate you, you know.”

Your eyes widen a bit. “God, Bucky, I never thought that. I know how hard it must be to trust me, though.” You run the edge of your fingernail along your thumb unconsciously, one of those little tics that you do when you’re nervous. You laugh quickly, “Hell, sometimes I don’t even trust myself. So I get it. I don’t expect you to-”

Suddenly, you hear a flurry of gunshots through your earpiece. There are shouts and bangs, all assaulting you at once. You try to focus on one sound, one voice, but everyone is talking over each other. Bucky sits up a little straighter and presses a finger against his earpiece. “What’s going on?” he demands.

“Barnes!” Tony’s voice comes through finally, louder than the rest of the commotion. “We need backup in here; the base is larger than we thought.”

Bucky immediately stands and you start to follow suit, preparing to fight. But Bucky stops you with one hand held out. “What about Y/N?”

There’s no response for a little bit. Finally, Tony again, “Bring her in.”

As you gear up, Bucky shows you where Clint’s extra arrows are and you begin to load them into your quiver. The earpiece is once again only filled with the sounds of gunfire. That is, until Sam’s voice breaks through with three words that shatter your heart.

“Rogers is down!”

>>>

part 3

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Como descrever um beijo?

Parte I.- Preparando a Cena

1.Escolha quem vai beijar quem.

Talvez você tenha dois personagens que tenham paquerado um ao outro por um longo período de tempo, ou dois personagens que de repente se dão conta de seus sentimentos um pelo outro. Independentemente disso, é importante isolar quais personagens na história darão o beijo para que você possa mudar o ponto de vista da narração para eles.

Tenha em mente que você não necessariamente precisa ter duas pessoas se beijando, já que poderiam ser vários personagens se beijando ou uma pessoa se beijando no espelho. Em qualquer caso, é uma boa ideia identificar os personagens na cena do beijo.

2.Determine onde o beijo acontecerá. O cenário é importante porque informará o humor do beijo.[1] Na escrita, o humor é um elemento literário que evoca certos sentimentos ou vibrações em seu público-alvo através de palavras e descrições.[2] Pense nisso como a atmosfera em que seus personagens estão se movimentando, ou se beijando.

Ao definir o cenário do beijo, você pode criar diversos significados implícitos. O cenário irá ajudá-lo a estabelecer um certo humor ou atmosfera, e você poderá mostrar ao seu público um certo estado de espírito em vez de contar explicitamente.

Por exemplo, um beijo num estacionamento vazio e escuro tem um clima ou atmosfera completamente diferente do que um beijo numa festa. Um cenário sugere um clima mais íntimo e o outro sugere um clima mais exposto ou aberto.

3.Pense em como o beijo acontecerá.

Seus personagens estarão sozinhos ou cercados por outras pessoas? Um dos personagens estará mais agressivo ou ansioso para o beijo? Os dois personagens sabem que o beijo acontecerá ou serão completamente surpreendidos por ele?

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Pense sobre a presença física de seus personagens e como eles se movimentarão na cena do beijo.

4.Considere por que o beijo está acontecendo.

Essa é uma oportunidade para que você pense sobre as motivações de seus personagens e por que eles acabariam se beijando. Se eles se odeiam ao longo da história, mas de repente acabam num beijo profundo e sensual, isso pode não ser muito crível para o leitor.

Reavalie como e por que você chegou a esse ponto na história onde os personagens se encontram numa cena de beijo. Você estabeleceu bem a relação deles nos primeiros estágios da história para que um beijo faça sentido? E se você tiver escolhido o elemento surpresa, pergunte-se se criou suficientes detalhes sobre o personagem para que o beijo pegue os leitores desprevenidos, mas sem confundi-los.

Parte II.  Criando um desenvolvimento

1.Desenvolva a história baseando-se nos conflitos estabelecidos entre os personagens.

Embora possa ser tentador apenas jogar dois personagens juntos numa sala trancada ou caverna escura, onde eles irão eventualmente recorrer a um beijo, uma técnica mais eficaz é usar conflitos passados ou conflitos em curso entre os personagens para criar uma versão convincente para o beijo.

Isso poderia ser um amor do passado que reaparece na vida de um personagem ou uma cena anterior, onde um personagem vê um outro personagem fazer algo que ele acha atraente. Lembre-se, um beijo é geralmente uma indicação de desejo, então certifique-se de que seus personagens desejam um ao outro, mesmo que apenas por um momento, para fazer o beijo parecer crível.

Não negligencie todo o trabalho duro que você colocou na construção de seus personagens. Em vez disso, use a caracterização como vantagem e construa a partir de conflitos ou cenas anteriores para criar um desenvolvimento.

2.Coloque ambos os personagens em proximidade um do outro.

Agora que você estabeleceu como um conflito passado levou a ambos os personagens a considerarem se beijar, é importante colocar os dois à distância de um beijo.

Isso é possível fazendo os dois personagens acidentalmente esbarrarem um no outro, ou um dos personagens planejar correr até o outro. Há muitas maneiras em que você pode mover fisicamente seus personagens para que eles cheguem a um determinado cenário e estado de espírito que sejam adequados para um beijo, mas o objetivo é aproximá-los.

Concentre-se nos movimentos corporais de seus personagens. Uma movimentação rápida e direta entre eles indicará desejo ardente, enquanto uma mais lenta indicará insegurança sobre a situação.

3. Faça um dos personagens notar algo novo ou interessante sobre o outro personagem.

Devido aos seus personagens agora estarem à distância de um beijo, eles têm a oportunidade de observar pequenos detalhes no rosto ou no pescoço um do outro. Seus personagens estão vendo um ao outro de uma maneira nova e íntima, então reflita isso incluindo descrições físicas de algo que não tinha sido observado antes.

Por exemplo, o personagem poderia perceber que o outro tem uma mancha esverdeada nos olhos, uma sarda no nariz ou uma pequena marca de nascença no pescoço.

Parte III.  Descrevendo o beijo

Use os cinco sentidos. Ao invés de simplesmente jogar diversos adjetivos para descrever o beijo, concentre-se em como o beijo está afetando a visão, audição, olfato, tato e paladar do personagem. Isso fará com que as descrições sejam específicas para o ponto de vista de seu personagem e garantirá que você está atingindo todos os aspectos sensuais da ação.

A visão é provavelmente um dos sentidos mais fáceis de descrever; simplesmente escreva o que o personagem está vendo durante o beijo.

O som poderia significar o ruído de fundo, como a música numa festa ou os batimentos cardíacos altos e excitados do personagem. Dependendo da duração do beijo, você também poderia incluir gemidos suaves ou outros ruídos de prazer (ou desgosto), conforme apropriado.

O cheiro poderia ser o que o personagem sente no ar ou na outra pessoa durante a ação, como perfume, colônia ou um perfume natural.

O toque é um aspecto muito importante para descrever um beijo. Concentre-se nos detalhes táteis, como a sensação na pele do personagem e nos lábios.

O gosto pode ser amplo ou muito específico ao descrever um beijo. Tenha em mente que descrever um beijo como sendo doce sugere que foi agradável, e descrevê-lo como azedo ou amargo sugere que pode não ter sido de forma alguma agradável.

2Use a linguagem corporal. Pense em como seus personagens estão movendo seus corpos conforme eles se beijam. A linguagem corporal também vai deixar o público ciente de como os personagens estão respondendo emocionalmente ao beijo. Uma reação física como puxar ou empurrar o beijo implicará uma emoção diferente do que uma reação física como cair ou ceder ao beijo. A maneira mais fácil de usar a linguagem corporal na cena é se concentrar nos movimentos de partes específicas do corpo:

Lábios: talvez o detalhe físico mais importante numa cena de beijo; foque-se na textura dos lábios do personagem ou a sensação deles contra os lábios de um outro personagem.

Língua: outro detalhe físico muito importante numa cena de beijo que pode indicar um desejo agressivo (muita língua) ou um desejo inseguro e suave (sem língua). Pense sobre o tipo de beijo que você está tentando transmitir e inclua ou não uma descrição da língua de acordo com o que você escolheu.

Cabeças: a maioria das pessoas inclina a cabeça para um dos lados quando beija. Claro, se você estiver descrevendo um beijo mais envergonhado, pode ser benéfico ter um momento onde as testas se esbarram.

Olhos: os olhos dos seus personagens estarão abertos ou fechados? Abrir os olhos geralmente indica uma reação de surpresa ou uma reação desinteressada. Considere as emoções de seus personagens e decida a partir daí.

Narizes: tenha em mente que, apesar de seus personagens poderem inclinar a cabeça ao se beijarem, os narizes provavelmente ainda esfregam um contra o outro ou contra o lado do rosto.

Mãos e braços: durante o beijo, as mãos de um personagem podem estar abertas no ar (geralmente indicando um beijo indesejado ou de surpresa) ou enrolados em torno do corpo do personagem (geralmente uma indicação de um beijo agradável). Eles também poderiam passar os dedos através do cabelo de um personagem, segurar a parte de trás da cabeça, esfregar a parte inferior das costas, etc.

3.Fale como o beijo termina.

Seus personagens não podem se beijar para sempre! De alguma forma, um ou ambos os personagens precisam se afastar um do outro ou serem interrompidos e forçados a se afastar um do outro.

Se o beijo acontece no início de sua história, você provavelmente precisará do surgimento de outro conflito para complicar o beijo e criar tensão suficiente para manter o público interessado.[11]

Se o beijo acontecer no final da história, pense em como os personagens podem se sentir após o beijo e como o beijo afeta as emoções em relação ao outro personagem.

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