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[gwennafran]

Pale Lights - Think of The Story

Song, Angharad and Maryam

Pale Lights book 3, chapter 61

Angharad is convinced she's the sane one...

[liliennacht]

Songharad dance

A Pale Lights comm for the lovely @gwennafran

[brightchrysaor]

Pale Lights theorizing

Book 3 spoilers below

I do think we're going to watch Izel get his lenslight working for its original purpose. I think it's going to work, and I think Izcalli is not going to want it tested. They have SO MUCH invested in the current order of things, Candles included, that a replacement which doesn't involve murder is going to ruin a lot of very powerful people. And it's not enough for it to work in lab settings. It has to be proven to provide enough Glare for an entire region.

You know what region needs a new source of Glare? Jigong

You know what would probably be conceptual poison to the Ren curse god? Song showing up with a replacement Luminary

[lipstickchainsaw]

Speaking of characters' proximity to power, it's kind of funny that, of all the Thirteenth, Angharad, the character who's practically defined by her aristocratic background, doesn't even make it into the top half of the brigade's relative status within their respective societies.

Izel, favoured son of the bigshot general, grew up in the center of Izcalli power, engaged to a cadet branch of the royal family.

Maryam, daughter to one of her culture's kings, albeit far removed from the line of succession, given that her mother was hardly her dad's first wife. Still an heir to magical royalty, essentially. Might even be above Izel depending on how you count.

Song, daughter to the, admittedly disgraced, former governor of one of the ten Republics, making her a member of one of the ten most important families of Tianxia, hated though that family now is.

Angharad, daughter of a minor Malani noble family, with their own estate yes, but far removed from the Malani center of power, given that Pereduri is essentially a particularly well-integrated colony of Malan.

Ishanvi (she counts), trained as a scribe at a Someshwari school for the kids of the rich and powerful, an incredibly unglamorous position that would essentially see her as a perpetual servant to those rich and powerful.

Tristan, street rat, although he does also have a last name, and his dad was a violinist, which isn't the sort of job available to the completely destitute, so even he didn't grow up at the bottom rung of his society

It really does add to the idea that Malani nobility as an institution is so well respected that, despite all this, Angharad still registers as the 'aristocrat' of the group.

[shittily-reviews-books]

Reason #18057 why I Love Song Ren.

She spared a moment of deep dismay at the thought of so many rare books being so callously destroyed, lore perhaps forever lost to the murderous thing’s tantrum. A petty evil compared to the rest of the night’s work, but an evil nonetheless.

A thought to deplore later, she chided herself.

She's like -------

God escaping prison - fine whatevver. BUT NOT THE BOOKS.

[alicelufenia]

I've finished up reading book 2 of Pale Lights

And with that, I'm officially caught up with ALL of EE's writing! It took about 3 months (I think I started and finished on the same day - the 27th of December and of March respectively) but it feels like no time at all at the same time.

Thoughts time, and anticipation for book 3 and what lies in the future for ErraticErrata.

To start off, for anyone interested in the series but hasn't heard the news, Pale Lights will no longer be updating on WordPress, but will instead live on the (functionally more friendly to read on) Royal Road site. Which is fine by me, as it means cover art to show off, and @gwennafran's gorgeous designs. [book 1 and book 2] I love the choice of scene for book 1, probably Tristan's best chapter in Lost Things, while book 2's cover is a brilliant visualization of the Great Orrery, and our main setting for the series (probably).

Getting into spoilers below:

I'm just gonna lead with this: words cannot express how VINDICATED I feel to have been in Angie's corner since the very beginning, despite all the hate her character gets! Huh, it seems like now EVERYONE in the Thirteenth Brigade is a Problematic Fave.

Shame, that.

Except Izel, maybe, he's shaping up to be Just a BigLittle Guy like Tristan pretends but for real. I'm watching you, Coyac. You'll get your time, lad.

But I'm getting ahead of myself.

I was totally on the money in calling Scholomance Murder Harvard in my book 1 thoughts. I like that we've reached the point that "fantastical school designed to train Elite Badasses in the most unethical way imaginable" has become such a solid trope, there's no need to make comparisons to any hypothetical wizard schools that would remain unnamed or I'll block you on sight. I know that I was imagining book 1 as a really ambitious Blades in the Dark campaign with some custom rules for contracts, but now I'm picturing in my head a full on Pale Lights-flavored hack that introduces the 7 different covenants as the playbooks, corruption rules for aether entity possession, gloam exposure and sainthood—as much as I've waffled between systems to place the Guide in, I think Pale Lights fits nicely into the Forged in the Dark family of games. Especially since, by book 2's end, everyone in the Thirteenth has leveled up their capacity for intrigue and skullduggery, and not just killing/blowing shit up. More on that later.

Something I've noticed EE does regularly is he'll write one "book" that is technically two in one, as the plots on Tolomentara and at Scholomance are pretty neatly separated from those on Asphodel, such that I could see them being divided up in a hypothetical future publication. I've gotten a look at his latest AMA, and it doesn't seem like that's in the plans, aside from tightening up the part 1 pacing, but I can't be the only one who feels this way, and not just because the Guide is getting this treatment.

Not that it's a negative in any way, I enjoyed both sequences immensely, and how the characters changed and grew over even this single book is honestly really impressive. You can really tell he's gotten everyone to where he wants them to really start rolling on this series (assuming it's going to be as long lived as the Guide and not wrapped up in 3 or 4 books total).

That being said, phew it was really touch and go in that first part, huh? The thing they don't tell you about Bands of Misfits, is that they're often Misfits for a reason, and won't necessarily work well with each other just cause they're all equally anti-social/unhinged. And man, the way this team fights with each other, UGH, it gets BRUTAL at so many times. Like, Hakram and Catherine's fight was cathartic and rough, but things get ugly between members of the Thirteenth, and they don't really get better until they've all been reforged in the fire of Asphodel's revolution.

And speaking of one of those fights, uuuuh so this was probably real funny for anyone reading my book 1 thoughts and was caught up on this one, when I laid out how there's no way Song could have been the one to have shot Isobel back on the island. And no, "Song and Ferranda both shot her" doesn't change that, the intent and attempt was there and she'd do it again. Damn. So two things about that; my biggest reason to disbelieve it originally was because if that was the case, it was a phenomenally stupid thing for Song to do if she intended for Angharad to remain an ally. And not only was it still a terrible idea, not coming clean about it at the end of the trials when all was revealed was what sealed the betrayal, as far as Angharad was concerned. Which, yeah, that would have been the time to come clean, but sadly the Song from Dominion is not the same as the Song from Asphodel in terms of lessons learned. In her attempts to keep her "hand on the chisel" as she puts it, she treated those around her as her hammer, her tools, and that's something she had to learn not to do the hard way.

The second thing about that is, since we've now confirmed that, since she did in fact shoot Isobel, then we all can agree she definitely also shot Lan later on when they were all escaping the battle with the devils, yeah? She was down and wounded, Angie charging into danger after her, only for Lan to then be taken out in the exact way she thought Isobel had been shot (spun from the impact to account for her facing). Which is immediately followed by Song shouting for Angharad to come back out of danger. In fact that also answers how Isobel died facing Song and Ferranda, as it wouldn't have made sense for her to turn back to face them while they were all running from hollows; shot went through her head from behind and spun her, making it appear from Angharad's perspective that she was shot from the front and spun around (I guess muskets don't leave obvious exit wounds compared to entrances? I have no idea.)

That second thing hasn't actually come up yet, as only Tristan seems to remember Ju and Lan, but if it ever does, I called it.

Anyway, yeah I knew that Angie was gonna be mad about that. Emotion-manipulation contract or not, it still means Song executed someone she cared about but even worse, made that choice for supposedly her own good. Honestly I think Angharad took it pretty well despite how furious she was during their argument, if I had Angie's skills I can't say I'd trust myself with my sword at hand during that conversation.

I'm still glad it came out eventually, even though Angharad had to ask not once, but twice, for a straight answer from Song. Especially since that first time was right after Song was saved by Maryam's shade and woke up to the fact she needed to connect better with her squadmates, and then just didn't apply that to Angie. Needless to say I was not a fan of Song for a while there, but by the time of her dealings with the Yellow Earth and her dealing with the assassination attempt on Evander I was back in her court. In fact I'm gonna say everyone in the Thirteenth were lowered in my estimates at some point or another, only to rise back up and exceed my expectations.

Which I think is definitely something EE as an author is just amazing at; letting characters make mistakes, be genuinely flawed and at times unlikable people, and then put them through a crucible where they are forced into a position where they need to, not just trust someone, but put their faith in them. And come out the other end a somewhat better person, and better for it as well. I eat it up every time :D

Speaking of, the last few chapters were real standouts, it's kinda hard to pick a favorite, but by far the most impactful ones were Tristan and Maryam. Izel is here! And Cressida... is not a friend, but she's still in the story, which is good cause I like her. And Maryam! She has a sister, and she's her Stand! What? Okay! And their big moment was so cool, Tristan being willing to die by Maryam's side was barely a footnote in the same chapter by comparison, and that was also a moment of amazing sweetness.

So book 2 ends at pretty much the most cliffhanger cutoff point. How is everyone reacting to Angie staying on? How frigid are Maryam and Song toward Izel? Is anyone gonna ask about why Maryam now has a ghost popping out of her chest? Does Hooks count as a member of the Thirteenth? I have so many questions!

Speaking of new members, with Izel added on, EE has confirmed two more figures in the banner

So it now is confirmed to be Song - - Angie - - Izel - - Maryam - - Tristan - - ????

I have no clue on who the sixth member is. I'm not banking on anyone we know so far, it seems more likely to me they'll be someone introduced in book 3, same with how Izel was introduced to us and recruited in the same book.

I also notice the brigade membership cap happens to also be the same as the number of covenants at Scholomance. So far we have Academy/Stripes (Song), Skiritai/Militants (Angharad), Akellare/Navigators (Maryam), Krypteia/Masks (Tristan), and now Umuthi/Tinkers (Izel). All we're missing are Peiling/Savants (Scholars) and Arthashastra/Laurels (Diplomats). Hmmm. Given that Hooks has access to the Cauldron, were she to somehow end up in a separate covenant she could be Peiling with all that knowledge, but I have a feeling she's more attached to Maryam (being her Nav and all). So we have the potential for TWO more members from what are so far the two covenants we know the least about.

I'm looking forward to the next book taking place back on Tolomentara, I really liked that place and wanted to see more. A deadly school that's trying to eat you while you attend class is amazing, and there's still so much potential there. And now that everyone has been through their second major adventure, and, as I said before, seem to be at the place where EE wanted them to be so they can actually be a functional team for once, I look forward to what further intrigue they're going to get into.

So far it seems their skill sets have grown more broad rather than deep; Angie is slightly better at using her contract in a fight, but where she really excels with it now is information gathering, espionage that's nearly undetectable (able to know what's in a safe without opening it? Potentially busted when it comes to intrigue!). Song reading people better will make her both a better leader and tactician, if not any more deadly with a gun. Maryam and Hooks have a literal library in their brain(s). And Tristan has the potential to have gotten the biggest boost compared to any of them with his probability sight, but could lead to him taking more risks and leaps of faith, as he just did.

I feel like we're also gonna see what genre the book is gonna land in come book 3. We've broadened out from pure dark fantasy this time, but since what the team seems to be building themselves toward is getting deeper into intrigue and skullduggery, and then thriving in chaos when it inevitably breaks out, I can't really say we're gonna go full high fantasy again like in the Guide. Like Asphodel was the Thirteenth punching WAY above their weight class, and that was given circumstances lining up for them to even attempt it. But as a hint of what's some of the bigger threats out in the world? That was thoroughly demonstrated, and will likely have consequences for what further instructions/assignments they get now.

I have to say, it feels really nice to finally be caught up, and to actually be waiting on reading weekly updates instead of binging. This must be a fraction of what One Piece fans feel when they've caught up. I like it :)

Until next time (which shouldn't be too long, I may do more live reading highlights now that I can take my time)

[mothysmenagerie]

Song Ren forced me to take a photo shoot of him today because it's quote "Father's Day, so if any lonely soul is looking for a daddy who knows how to please, they won't have to spend the holiday alone." 😏😘😎

So happy Father's Day to the uh, ACTUAL fathers, whether they be for humans, animals, or dolls! Just anyone who isn't this menace (I can't believe I let him live in my home :/).

[booksandchainmail]

Hand on the chisel, or Song Ren's rigid, brittle self-control

From Pale Lights book 2

Chapter 2:

Song’s lips thinned, but she held her tongue. You are stone shaped by the chisel of life, she recited. Will it be your hand wielding the tool, or theirs? If she gave her anger to others, she relinquished the chisel – and that was unacceptable.

Chapter 8:

It was one thing to hold a member of her cabal, another to beat them. That would not be tolerated. Hand on the chisel, Song reminded herself, but wrenched open the door harder than necessary.

Chapter 11:

She grit her teeth. To say this was to insult their very contract, since she had asked to – Song smoothed out the thought, the rising anger. He did it, she knew, to get a rise out of her. But she would not fall for it this time. Song had prepared herself, meditated on the matter. Her hand would remain on the chisel.

Chapter 13:

Song could see them creeping across the checkered, cracked floor of the entrance hall. The god was everywhere, blind hands tugging and pulling at the insides of Scholomance like a child at play – moving this and that, just itching to smash it all onto something that would scream. Hand on the chisel, she reminded herself. Fear would do her no good in this place. Fear never helped anywhere.

Chapter 16:

Song, instead, calmly rose and faced as much as the wall as she could. She blinked, once, and breathed out. The sheer number of details was… Hand on the chisel, the Tianxi reminded herself.

Chapter 16:

“Trade on your own time,” Colonel Cao told the students. “We move on.” Song almost flinched. Hand on the chisel.

Chapter 18:

It smelled burnt. Swallowing thickly, Song looked down and saw that in her fugue she had left the chicken unattended too long. The top was still pink, but when she flipped the cuts she saw they had charred stripes. The Tianxi swallowed. If she cut them out perhaps it wouldn’t show? No, they’ll still see I cut out parts. Perhaps if she sliced every piece in two, then – no, idiot, they would notice the quantity was too small. One of them would ask. They would know. Hands shaking, tearing up like a fucking child, Song did the only rational thing she could: she put the pot off the fire, went outside with a shovel and dug a hole in a corner of the garden. She emptied the burnt chicken into it – she’d have to buy another to replace it from her own funds – and filled the hole. She had to hurry, they could be back anytime now. Song opened the windows to get rid of the smell and cleaned the iron pot before doing the recipe properly this time. When her cabal began arriving one after the other, Song was ready. She welcomed them with a smile and a meal and her hand remained on the chisel as they all sat together and ate. Like a proper brigade, led by a proper captain.

Chapter 21:

And he was right, she realized. It would be their word against his, and though she was confident they would come out ahead in the hearing the incident would be added to her record. She had shot a watchman from behind. Every superior officer she could ever have would know she had crippled someone wearing the black. Who would trust her after that? Who would let her stand behind them? Song had already seen how bad it would be, fighting against the tide, and now mere minutes out of that place she was somehow making it all worse. She had learned nothing, made all that pain and grief pointless. Crack. “-of your life,” the man laughed. “You’re fucked, brat, you-” Her hand slipped. It was not the blow of a duelist or a soldier: her blade hacked into the man’s face like a butcher knife. “You trash,” she snarled, ripping her blade out and hacking down again. “You relic, you-” Song screamed and struck again. And again, and again and again. He had cornered her, ended her career. Only when her arm hurt and her breath was ragged did the silver-eyed girl fall to her knees, choking out a sob, fingers closed around the chisel she had used to make a ruin of the watchman.