#we said

[thisliminalspacedaydreams]

If anyone is wondering how it’s going

[girlhoodsfm]

         (  @bonniewrites​  for  conor !  )     she looks unhinged  .   it’s  pouring  outside  and  she’s  banging  on  a  door  in  the  middle  of  the  night  -  if  she  had  the  brain  capacity  ,   she’d  be  sobbing  .   but  that’s  only  a  back  thought  when  the  only  thing  on  her  mind  is  that :    FATHER WANTS YOU DEAD.   it’s  supposed  to  be  fun  being  21  ,   and  she  was  out  celebrating  !  the  once  in  a  lifetime  opportunity  to  feel  free  from  civilities  and  oh  ,   was  suzume  going  to  take  part  in  it  .   unfortunately  ,   it  seemed  her  father  wasn’t  against  such  ideas  .   

          and  so  one  minute  she’s  dancing  ,   the  next  in  a  cab  with  a  handsome  boy  ,   and  then ?   she  has  BLOOD  splattered  all  over  her  face  from  almost  killing  him  ,   the  handsome  boy  with  an  accent  that  made  her  swoon  ,   who  also  had  a  gun  .   of  course  she  would  retaliate  ,   of  course  she  would  DEFEND  herself  ,   her  body  was  on  flight-or-fight  mode  ,   except  she  already  fought  ,  so  now  it’s  purely  flight  .    ‘  can  you  help  me ?  ’   she  yells  when  the  door  opens  a  fraction  ,   know  how  suspicious  she  looks :   all  cut  and  bloody  and  she  can’t  tell  the  difference  between  his  blood  and  her  own  .   suzume’s  chest  heaves  ,   she  taking  deep  breaths  as  brown  eyes  beg  ,   for  her  voice  would  never  do  such  a  thing  .    ‘  i  -  ’   a  shuttering  breath  ,   she  shakes  herself  to  compose  herself  .    ‘  i  need  help  ,   please  help  .  ’    please  let  her  in  before  his  backup  came  after  her  .  

[omgchaer]

sometimes a family is just two guys and their pigeon

[merdelera]

the fandom after spending this last week joking that luke skywalker was gonna show up and be the last character poster because ‘wouldn’t that be wild’

[elle-smells]

Happy one year to the one time we didn't clown and something actually happened at 21:21 just like we manifested ✨😌

[bee-be-writing]

Intermediate Writing Tip:

Don’t find words to replace said, instead make your dialogue speak for the description. 

I don’t want ‘comforted’ to be written, I want to know that person is comforting the other by their use of language in dialogue.

I don’t want ‘someone said’ - I want to know by how their voice sounds, by the words they say, phrases they use. 

I don’t want to see ‘they mocked’ - let me feel the mocking in the words they use, let the voice show the writer that this is mocking. 

Only use ‘someone said’ if you worry the reader will be confused otherwise.

Make your dialogue jump off the page, make your readers hear the conversations and see the natural progression of the writing. 

Voices need to sound real, so make your dialogue sound believable.

[spirit0link]

“I have to do your hair now.” - M

“What hair? I don’t have any hair! It’s a wig see!” -Spirit0Link

*is visibly shook* - M