#writing funny

[emuattack101]

"Feel free to come back next time you’re free"

is a sentence from my first draft that i'm editing the repetitiveness out of.

my first idea on how to change it was:

"Feel free to come back next time you have time"

🥹

[emuattack101]

if i write "he herd" instead of "he heard" one more time istg

[to-get-to-the-sky]

Ha! You hate me, don't you?

Benjamin Haley, a 21 year old private, is the pompous, rich son of a nobleman. He is not very well liked, likely because of his sharp words and judging personality. It is not known why he is just a private, with the influence he has, and he refuses to speak on the subject to anyone. Excluding (perhaps) Guy, who seems to know more about Ben than anyone else.

"Well," Ben turned, slowly, and smirked. "Are you going to pull yourself together," He looked down sharply "or are you going to continue to be a leech of of me?"

(Here is some older art!)

(hehe I love this guy)

[emuattack101]

One hour of editing is as exhausting as three hours of writing. Oh, the consequences of my actions...

[emuattack101]

Editing is a wild ride because my ability to write changes from day to day. So for some scenes I barely have to tweak anything and for others I'm fighting for my life the whole time.

[emuattack101]

You think writing the first draft of a story is hard until you have to write the second draft.

Then suddenly your manuscript is hostile, your prose is ten times worse than you remember it, and the sight of a word document fills you with dread.

In other words, I started editing today !!!

[emuattack101]

I sat down to write Twice today instead of once. I'm getting a little funky with the writing hobby

[emuattack101]

The outline I made said the scene I just wrote should be around 4-5 pages long. It ended up being 8. The balancing of my chapters might be a little bit screwed :_)