One Times Square. I’m in the elevator, going up. Listening to Loverboy. Working for the Weekend. Muzak’s just like roaches. Even a nuke can’t kill it off.
This is not a poem, but instead a series of short one-sentence paragraphs. I remember the style working much better in Shovel Ready, the first book of the series; indeed, I remember the first book of the series working much better. And while I’m not predisposed to particularly like books in series, this one seemed surprisingly uninterested in providing any kind of service to the reader for context--even while it picks up very shortly after the first book ends, it’s still been a few years outside since the last one, and clues always help.
Adam Sternbergh, Near Enemy | Crown 01.13.15











