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Scrivener is a writerâs best friend.Â
Itâs a word processing software created with unruly, complicated novels in mind. However, some writers stay away because its many features can be seem overwhelming at first. If you want to use Scrivener, but havenât taken the plunge yet. Or if you already use Scrivener, but havenât explored its many features, check out my three part guide to writing a novel with Scrivener, from planning to editing and all of the key smashing in-between.Â
1. Planning with Scrivener
Scrivener comes with tools dedicated to outlining, researching, and brainstorming your manuscript. The first part of this series details everything you can do in Scrivener before setting that first line down in ink (or pixels.)Â
2. Drafting with ScrivenerÂ
The second part in this series covers the actual âwritingâ part of writing. It covers multiple composition modes (even making your screen mimic Microsoft Word!), writing in split screen, word targets, and more.Â
3. Editing with Scrivener
The third part of this series gives advice on exporting your writing into a standard manuscript format, saving each version of your work as you go along, and the best tools for revising your manuscript.Â
Download a free 30-day trial of Scrivener at its official site.Â
Disclaimer: This is not an ad. I am not being paid by the Scrivener people. I just really love this software.Â
Reblogging this because Iâm currently writing with Scrivener. (In conjunction with using the Forest app to time my writing sessions and the progress tracker I made.)Â
I forgot how utterly amazing this software is, so Iâm re-blogging my three Scrivener guides!Â
The four features that are killing it for me right now are:
A separate text file for each chapter. The organization make it so easy to move around my manuscript, so that doing things like going back to certain chapters to find information I need isnât an utter nightmare. Equally important, I try to make sure my chapters are between 1,500 and 2,500 words for consistency. Having a separate text file makes it easy to see how far away I am from that mark. Which brings me to feature two.
Targets! I can set manuscript targets, session targets, and chapter targets. This means I can tell Scrivener I want my novel to be 40,000 words long, my chapter to be 2,000 words long, and that Iâd like to write 1,500 words today. I can even say I want to finish my book by August 1st, and itâll tell me how much I need to write each day to meet itâadjusting automatically if I go over/under my daily goal. Itâs motivational too, pushing me forward because Iâm never far away from hitting a goal.Â
Statistics! Scrivener goes above and beyond for manuscript statistics. I click one button and it tells me how many words there are in my book, how long the paragraphs and sentences are on average, how many chapters there are, the longest and shortest chapters, how many pages the document would be as a paperback, and even how long it would take to read!!!! I. Love. It.Â
Paragraph highlights in composition mode. This is a comparatively insubstantial feature, but in this drafting phase itâs been really helpful for keeping me moving forwardâfocusing on the words Iâm currently writing, not going back and changing the ones I wrote twenty minutes ago.Â
đ A Cheat Sheet to Point of View in Fiction
đ Point of view (POV) is perhaps one of the most important aspects of writing fiction because the POV of your narration determines your characterization, style, and theme. The point of view in fiction impacts the readerâs understanding of what is happening at any given moment in the story. Writers also use POV to give varying levels of access to the characterâs mind.
The three main points of view in fiction are first person, third person limited, and third person omniscient.
đ€ First Person Point of View
First person point of view is the POV that is directly inside the characterâs mind. This POV uses pronouns like I, my, we, our, etc.
Some first person point of view examples:
The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald
To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee
Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte
The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins
This POV restricts the readerâs knowledge to what the narrator knows, but it offers an intimate glimpse inside the characterâs head.
First person point of view is most popular in genres like young adult and science fiction, but it isnât limited to these genres.
đ§Third Person Limited
Third person limited point of view uses pronouns like he, she, they, etc. This POV offers a glimpse of the world and inside the characterâs mind, but âlimitedâ means that the narrator only provides access to one characterâs thoughts.
Some examples of third person limited point of view include:
Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury
A Wrinkle in Time by Madeleine L'Engle
Mistborn by Brandon Sanderson
Shadow and Bone by Leigh Bardugo
This POV provides one perspective at a time, but writers can switch POVâs in different chapters. You can find this POV often in romance and mystery/thrillers.
Read more: Three Elements for Writing the Setting of Your Story
đ§âđ€âđ§ Third Person Omniscient
Third person omniscient uses third person pronouns, but allows the narrator to dip in and out of multiple charactersâ thoughts and feelings.
Some examples of third person omniscient include:
Dune by Frank Herbert
War and Peace by Leo Tolstoy
The Chronicles of Narnia by C.S. Lewis
Howlâs Moving Castle by Diana Wynne Jones
This POV gives the reader access to multiple characterâs interiority and more information about the world. The narrator in third person omniscient knows everything, but the characters donât. This POV is popular in literary fiction and fantasy.
Read more: How to Develop Your Main Character
âïž Other Points of View
Some different points of view that arenât used as often include:
Epistolary, which is point of view in a story told through letters, emails, diary entries, etc.
First person plural, which uses we, our, etc.
Second person, which uses you pronouns.
How To Accurately Describe Pain In WritingÂ
Pain can be an interesting emotion to write about. It gives authors the liberty to merge their characterâs emotions and surroundings to create beautiful metaphors and graphic descriptions that draw their readers in and convey their characterâs struggles. However, if done wrongly reading your descriptions of pain can feel like a chore to your readers. Unsure how to accurately describe pain in your writing? Here are some tips to help you get started.Â
Use The Five SensesÂ
As humans, we possess five senses that dictate our reactions to the world around us. When writing, it is important to use these five senses rather than just relying on what your character can see. Talk about the sound, the smell, the taste, and even the feeling.Â
If your character just got burnt, talk about the sound of sizzling flesh and the slight numbness they feel. Mention the terrible smell of burnt flesh, and make your character feel dizzy with fear as their eyes finally land on the horrific wound.Â
Internal bleeding makes people spit blood and taste iron and partially healed wounds feel itchy and irritant.Â
There is so much more to pain than what you see, and simply talking about your characterâs wounds isnât nearly enough to make your readers wince in second-hand pain. In fact, they are more likely to skim your passages in boredom.Â
Show your readers what your character is experiencing, and then go on to describe their reaction to this situation.Â
Build It Up, Then Break It DownÂ
Pain doesnât just suddenly come from nowhere. It starts with something small, blossoms, and then spreads. Your character wonât just suddenly get a third-degree burn the size of a baseball by leaning against a hot steel wall for the briefest of seconds. It starts with a light reddish-brown mark, then darkens, maybe even blisters.Â
You canât go from 0 to 100 in one sentence. You need to build it up and show your readers how your characterâs pain was found. Then, break it down.Â
Pain doesnât come from nowhere, but it doesnât suddenly disappear either. Show us how your characterâs wound heals. Does the wound mark from where they hurt their knee turn into an ugly brown shade for a couple of weeks? Do their burns gradually fade from red to pink, or turn darker?Â
Itâs important to show your readers the aftermath of your characterâs pain. A character who just had a bullet pulled out of their shoulder with a hot knife canât suddenly just jump up and start firing at the enemy with perfect aim.Â
You donât need to overdo it and constantly mention their wounds during the healing stage, but something as simple as âher bandages uncomfortably scratched at her back every time she lifted her hand to eatâ or âhis fingers subconsciously shifted to run over the remains of his burn mark even as his eyes remained trained on the blackboardâ will suffice.Â
How Does This Affect Your Character?Â
Physical pain aside, wounds can also have an effect on your characterâs dynamics with others as well as your plot.Â
Itâs important to take into account how they got this wound, how the other characters might react to it, and internalised conflict caused by it. Maybe your character injured their fingers during a game of volleyball and now theyâre staring at their final exam paper with tears of frustration brimming their waterline because it hurts too much to write.
Maybe your protagonist suffered a small burn while sneaking out to go to their friendâs house and their parent or mentor saw it. Or maybe your protagonist won against the antagonist but suffered a grave injury to their legs and now cannot fight during the next confrontation, resulting in a chaotic outbreak at their headquarters.Â
Think about the internal as well as the external damage your characterâs wounds can cause, and then use that as a plot device to further your book.Â
Do Your ResearchÂ
Itâs very important to accurately portray your characterâs level of pain and consider whether or not they would realistically incur such injuries from such a wound. When writing about a characterâs wound or pain consider doing some research about that type of wound.Â
Here are some things you need to check when researching the wound type:Â
How much blood would they loose with this type of wound?Â
What are the side effects?Â
Could this be fatal?Â
How long will it take to heal?Â
How long does it take for a wound to get to that extent? (for example, if youâre writing about a third-degree burn, research what it takes for a burn to be considered third-degree).Â
What are the major veins, arteries, and other important body parts in that part of the characterâs body? For example, if your character is supposed to be injured on their arm but itâs not supposed to be serious, you need to consider whether the wound could realistically have ruptured their radial artery, resulting in death.Â
Will there be any scarring? What about any long-lasting wound marks?Â
You could also take a look at historical events similar to the one youâre writing. For example, if youâre writing about an assassination attempt consider researching the most historically renowned assassination techniques.Â
Itâs also a good idea to ask your families and friends about their experiences with the type of wound youâre writing about (so long as itâs not a sensitive topic). Maybe you have a cousin who suffered a third-degree burn once or a classmate who has a scar from a graphic wound across their arm.Â
I hope this blog on how to accurately describe pain in writing will help you in your writing journey. Be sure to comment any tips of your own to help your fellow authors prosper, and follow my blog for new blog updates every Monday and Thursday. Â
Looking For More Writing Tips And Tricks?Â
Are you an author looking for writing tips and tricks to better your manuscript? Or do you want to learn about how to get a literary agent, get published and properly market your book? Consider checking out the rest of Hayaâs book blog where I post writing and marketing tools for authors every Monday and Thursday.Â
Want to learn more about me and my writing journey? Visit my social media pages under the handle @hayatheauthor where I post content about my WIP The Traitorâs Throne and life as a teenage author.Â
Heyo itâs back to school time and hereâs a research tip from your friendly neighborhood academic librarian.When searching for any topic on the internet just type in the word âlibguideâ after your topic and tada like magic there will be several beautifully curated lists of books, journals, articles, or other resources dealing with your subject. Librarians create these guides to help with folksâ informational needs, so please go find one and make a librarian happy today!!
this is the BEST advice, and there are so many options, both if youâre doing academic research, or just curious and looking for information!
Itâs so interesting what you can find!
Dime novels, mystery & detective fiction, adulting (not academic, but still), D&D guide, citation libguides, comics, graphic novels, and manga, German language & literature, differentiating fake news, firefighting, body autonomy for kids and young adults, interfaith women advocates for social justice, cooking (nonacademic)/food culture and cuisine/food & cooking.
Thank you for excellent additions and very much agre ewith you that cooking libguides are the best!! Have you seen all the ones from the Culinary Institute of America??
Oh! Building on your notes I figured I should mention to everyone that most academic institutions with a library are going to have a page with the research guides the librarians have made for their patrons. This will include basic topic guides on things like how to use the library or how to create citations. There will also be subject guides for areas of study like philosophy or biology. As well as specific course guides to assist classes that are being taught like FM 114: Introduction to the Fashion Industry or BME6938: Nanoparticle Nanomedicines.
If any of yâall have started university totally check out the ones your librarians have put up! Thereâs a ton up to help you along your research journey. And if you arenât at university check them out too!! Some of the resources wonât be accessible but thereâs loads of information youâll still be able to use and get to.
Hello, fellow academic librarian specializing in instruction! Many libraries also include guides orientations on how to properly utilize non-subject specific databases. Watch those before diving into your first research project so you understand the tools and features available to you to make your life easier. Many universities subscribe to ProQuest or EBSCO and there are MANY tutorials that will teach you how to use them in less than 5 mins.
Believe me, you will save yourself A LOT of headache with both LibGuides and orientations. Good luck and happy hunting!
Cheat Sheets for Writing Body Language
We are always told to use body language in our writing. Sometimes, itâs easier said than written. I decided to create these cheat sheets to help you show a characterâs state of mind. Obviously, a character may exhibit a number of these behaviours. For example, he may be shocked and angry, or shocked and happy. Use these combinations as needed.
by Amanda Patterson
You guys, this is such a great chart especially for budding writers. Sometimes itâs more effective to show a character being bored or excited or shocked without explicitly saying so.
I love this
AU Ideas
1: I'm a private detective hired to follow you, but you're endearingly boring and mostly I just like watching you and oops, I sort of find you adorable.
2: You've been sketching me for half an hour now, and just shuffled up to hand me the finished product and it's TERRIBLE but you just wanted an excuse to talk to me.
3: You've been typing furiously on your laptop in the library, and have just gone to get a book, so I had a quick look and you're writing hardcore gay porn and it's GOOD.
4: I'm at an art exhibit and I just badmouthed the art, because I don't get it, okay? And it turns out you're the artist. I'm so sorry, maybe I could get you coffee and you could explain what it was supposed to be?
5: Sorry, this is really weird, but I noticed we have the exact same fandom tattoo, can we just geek out for a moment?
6: You keep buying video tapes from the charity shop I work at. Why do you keep doing that? We sell DVDs. There is a betting pool open on what kind of weirdo you are. I am vaguely concerned. I need answers.
7: We're the only two people who turned up to an underground gig and it should be awkward, but the band is amazing and you asked me to dance and hey, there's nobody watching but us.
8: I accidentally 'liked' one of your photos on Facebook because it came up under my tagged friend's name. I'm not a creeper, though I have just spent the last ten minutes trawling through your albums.
9: You live in the apartment next to me. We're not supposed to have pets, but I KNOW you have a cat. I'll make you a deal, I won't tell, if you let me pet it.
10: I'm sure I've seen you somewhere before, god, this is really going to bug me, no, don't go anywhere, I'll get this, oh damn, do we have mutual friends? OH SHIT YOU'RE ON [insert porn site here].
11: You're my favourite fanartist and you did fanart of my fic. So I wrote you a fic in return and now you've done fanart for that. You like all my selfies and comment on all my text posts and I do the same to you, and erm, you just posted that you're going to be in my city? Maybe we could meet up?
12: I was walking home after a late shift at work and caught you graffiting a wall. You were going to run away but I stopped you because I want to see the finished piece, and now you're sort of teaching me as you paint and it's awesome?
12.5: Okay, we totally got arrested for the graffiti but we're sharing a cell and you have paint smeared across your cheek and you look adorable and neither of our friends answered our phone calls to bail us out so it looks like we're here 'til morning.
13: I punched you because I thought you were insulting my friend, but it turns out you know each other and it was an inside joke and I'm so sorry, let me drive you to the hospital?
14: I don't have my hearing aids in, you don't know sign language, and we're stuck in an elevator. Your miming is very funny and adorable though.
15: My friend made me a grindr/tinder profile without me knowing and you liked my profile and then sent me a message which just said 'Bees?' and I'm a little confused but intrigued.
refseek.com
www.worldcat.org/
link.springer.com
http://bioline.org.br/
repec.org
science.gov
pdfdrive.com
If you're an adult reading YA and you want it to be more sexy and have more graphic sex scenes then can I suggest READ AN ADULT BOOK AND STOP WHINING ABOUT YA FICTION.
newwavedetectives: I'm so curious about what set this post off
I cannot recall exactly, but the answer is "dipshit twitter drama." Adult readers who complain about YA/MG fiction mainly swing between 'omg why is this teenager making such immature decisions' or 'omg why isn't this book more adult.' It's quite regular and infuriating.
Seriously, though, if you are a YA book reader looking to branch out into adult fiction and no idea how, here are some people to start with (note these are mostly SciFi/Fantasy authors):
Terry Pratchett*
Martha Wells' Murderbot novellas
Fonda Lee's Green Bone saga
Sue Lynn Tan
VE Schwab
Neil Gaiman
Shelley Parker-Chan
Nnedi Okorafor
Zen Cho
C. M. Waggoner
Tamsyn Muir
S. A. Chakraborty
Melissa Caruso
Once you get a feel for the adult authors you like, you can also try:
Recommend a Book
What Should I Read Next?
Reddit's Suggest Me A Book subreddit
Your local librarians love recommending books and will likely be able to produce list of recommendations. Goodread lists can help you nail down your tastes. Also, I don't even go there, but many recent romance books are also very fun and the romance community can really help you find exactly what you want.
(*Had a lengthy conversation with a bookseller about how it's better to start with Pratchett's latter Discworld books than the first few if you really want to get into them, but the beauty of those books is that you can pick up any one and not need to read the previous books about those characters to enjoy them.)
aww nasa has a page for space technology terms you can use in science fiction
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If you try and figure out the rules about creative writing, youâre going to find that established authors and editors often disagree about nuances of the craft. There are, of course, some hard-and-fast rules about punctuation and grammar, but so many rules vary from genre to genre, generation to generation, audience to audience. Sometimes there are rules that boil down, simply, to consistency.Â
So you might even say that you have your own set of writing rules. Each and every authorâs rules are slightly unique. That unique set of ârulesâ is part of what makes up your authorâs voice.
So when are the appropriate times to break those rules, your own rules? They happen, donât they? In my last post, I gave a list of filler words and overused words that you can consider cutting out of your writing to help sharpen it. But everythingâeven mediocre vocabulary, poor grammar, and repetitive structureâhas a place in writing.Â
Breaking Your Mold to Write Character Voice
Jordan is an author (hypothetically). She has been writing for years, gotten an English degree, read a zillion books, and written several novel drafts of her own. Over her years of writing, she has finally come into her own voice. When she writes, she no longer feels derivative or inexperienced. Itâs freeing and wonderful!Â
But thereâs one thing that Jordan hasnât figured out yetâŠand thatâs character voice. Her authorial voice, while wonderful and unique, seeps into the voice of all of her characters. The result is that all of her characters, whether speaking or narrating, sound exactly the same: they sound like her.
Part of what makes a multi-POV novel come to life is variation in character voice. Part of what makes an authorâs portfolio stand out is the vast scope of voices their characters use across their works. Part of what sets apart side characters as characters instead of tools for the protagonist or plot devices for the narrative is a unique and compelling voice.Â
So how does one accomplish such a thing?Â
Well, there are many ways. But today Iâm focusing on language and syntax, particularly in the rule-breaking department.Â
The first exercise you can do is take a piece of dialogue, preferably just a back and forth between two characters, and write it one way, then switch roles. Have the characters say basically the same thing, but in their own voices.Â
Author Voice Conversation
R: Oh. Youâre worried about me E: I am no such thing. Worrying about you sneaking into enemy territory is likeâŠworrying about a fish drowning in the ocean. R: You sure seem dead set on stopping me from going. E: We need to come up with a plan. It would be foolish to just waltz into their territory with no idea what weâre doing. R: Youâre really quite cute when youâre worried. E: Youâd like me to be worried, wouldnât you? Just go. I donât know what Iâm freaking out about, anyway. R: Me either. Bye. E: Bye, idiot. Donât get caught. R: *sigh* Is that really what you expect of me?
Thereâs nothing wrong with this conversation at all. But Iâm just writing as if I, personally, was speaking. I know what the personality of these characters are, but that isnât necessarily enough. Iâm going to inject a little bit of their own tics, their own backgrounds, into their speech.
Character Voice Conversations
R: Oh. Youâre worried about me, arenât you? E: Really? Please. I donât worry about anyone. R: But you donât want me to go. E: I justâŠthink that we need to come up with a plan first. R: Youâre really kinda cute when youâre worried. E: Iâm NOTâGrah! Fine! Go, then. I donât know why Iâm trying to help you, anyway. R: Neither do I. I sure as hell didnât ask for it. E: See ya, then. Try not to get blood on my shirt. R: Go drown in the tears of your unborn children, Tiger.
And now, roles switched:
E: Heh. YouâreâŠworried. R: Fuck off. I donât have energy to waste worrying about you. E: You want me to stay. Safe. R: I meanâŠhaving a plan would be a good idea, but what in hell do I know? The fuck are you doing? E: Youâve got some worry on your face. R: Donât touch me. Donât even talk to me. Iâm sorry I mentioned anything about a plan. E: So am I. Iâll bring you skin of an atosh as a trophy. R: Bye, Tiger. If youâre not back in one day, Iâll assume you died. E: Donât wait that long. Iâd love to come back and find peace and quiet waiting for me instead of you.
What sort of things influence the diction of your characters? In example 1, R says, âYouâre really quite cute when youâre worried,â whereas in example 2, she says âkinda,â instead. In both of the latter examples, R is more prone to using âfuckâ and âhell.â
In one of my novels, I have two narrators: K and B. K is well-read, well-spoken and a little snobbish. B isnât an idiot, but he dropped out of school in (what amounts to) the fifth grade. Heâs spent a large portion of his life outside of society and largely lived his life how he wanted. So when they say basically the same thing, K might say,
âIâve got this covered. Thank you, but, honestly, it isnât anything to worry about.âÂ
Where B would say,
âIâve got this. For real. Thanks.â
In general, as I write their dialogue, B uses more contractions, shorter sentences, and doesnât use many words beyond the 1000 most commonly used. He makes grammatical mistakes (Saying âmeâ when he should say âIâ) He has more verbal tics, âUmâŠâ âErââ âWell, itâs just thatâŠâ etc. K speaks with much more flowery language and tends to elaborate beyond what is necessary. This means unneeded adverbs, âmoment,â ârather/quite/somewhat,â superfluous reflexive pronouns, etc. I have one character who tends to speak in run-on sentences whenever she uses the word âbecause.â I have one character who compulsively addresses the people heâs speaking to, so much so that other characters make fun of him for it.
These are all things that, in general, I avoid doing. But using them purposefully helps to set character voices apart.Â
Narrator Voice
To some extent, narrator voice can use these same tactics. If youâre using multi-pov, especially, these kinds of nuances will help your reader really feel like theyâre reading the words of multiple characters, rather than just being told they are. If youâre writing an intimate third-person or first person, these same principles can help bring your narrative voice to life, just like the words written in quotes.Â
Think about these two opening lines and how the voice of the narrator gives you two very different impressions about the same event:
The sun was rising. Though the scent of the overnight dew hung heavy over our tent, the sleeping bag hugged us close together. She smelled warm, and even the scent of our intermingled sweat was pleasant in the early morning. I wondered briefly if the residual alcohol was softening reality, but ultimately it didnât matter. I was in love.
The sun was coming up. The air was heavy, humid in the muggy morning. Our sleeping bag was wrapped tight around us, the moisture from our breaths clinging around our heads. Sticky and warm, she still smelled like sex. It was probably an objectively terrible smell, but the memories made it nice. I blinked, wondering if that last glass of wine was still hanging over me, but I donât guess it mattered. I fucking loved this girl.Â
So think about it! There are tons of factors that could go into how your characters speaksâŠand thus, what ârulesâ you break in their dialogue.
How educated or well-read is your character?
What influence does their culture have on their diction?
How wordy do they tend to be?
If they use as few words as possible, maybe mostly grunts, what is the motivation behind that?
How much attention do they like to bring to themselves?
How self-conscious are they about their voice? Their speech patterns? The effect their words have on others?
How long does it take them to get to the meat of what theyâre saying?
How much do they make others laugh?
How optimistic or pessimistic are they?
How much do they try to avoid talking about themselves or their emotions?
At what point do they end a conversation they donât like?
How long does it take them to get angry in a disagreement?Â
How does anger alter their speech?Â
How does overwhelming sadness alter their speech?
How does immense joy alter their speech?
What words do they use with noticeable frequency?
Do they speak differently in intimate settings than in public?
Donât be afraid to use any and every word to give your characters their own voices. As I always say, to anyone in basically any situation: I donât mind if you break any rule at allâŠas long as you broke it with deliberated intent.Â
Happy revising!
The Difference Between Drafting and Editing
When you create the first version of your novelâit is usually called your first draft. Itâs not perfect and youâre not âdoneâ with your novel, but drafting and writing are essentially the same thing. Redrafting and editing are similar processes, but theyâre not the same. Here are a few differences between drafting and editing.
Drafting
After youâre finished with the first draft of your novel, youâre most likely going to spend some time redrafting. That means youâre going to create a 2nd draft, a 3rd draft, and other subsequent drafts that you feel are necessary. There are a few things you should focus on when you work on redrafting your novel:
Gaps or plot holes that need to be filled in
Ideas that havenât been clearly explained or explored
Changes in the order of events in your novel
The addition of characters
The addition of scenes
The voice or style youâre writing inâcheck tenses or if anything sounds awkward
Scenes, characters, etc. that should be cut
Redrafting is when you start to shape the ideas and thoughts you put on paper during your first draft. This is the time you can create the novel you really want and you can flesh out your ideas. Donât be afraid to drastically change what youâve written if you think that will make it better. It often requires distance from your work for a while before you can begin. You need to look at your work objectively (or as objectively as you can).
Editing
Once youâre done redrafting, which will fix many of your plot problems and flesh out your novel (or cut it down to size), the editing process will be in full effect. I suppose itâs not wrong to refer to redrafting as part of the editing process, but when youâre redrafting youâre really still writing. Youâre still shaping your novel and making additions to the plot. It helps to look at them differently. Hereâs what you should focus on when youâre editing.
Go through your novel line-by-line
Check for spelling and grammar mistakes
Check your paragraph and chapter breaks to make sure theyâre in the right place
Look out for repeated phrases or words that youâve been using too often
Swap out words or sentences that donât fit
Change the order of sentences that donât sound right
Typos, typos, typos
Editing is difficult and it might need to go through your novel a few times before you catch your mistakes. Itâs a painstaking process that requires time and attention. It might not be as fun as writing or redrafting, but itâs still a part of the process. Once you get the hang of it and find a flow that works for you, it will become much easier.
-Kris Noel
If you want to filter out oneshot collections (fics that look like multichaps but are actually a series of oneshots posted as chapters of the same work) from your search results on AO3:
Start by tapping on whatever tag you want to read. That will take you a page full of results where all of the works use that tag.
Tap on the Filter button at the top of that list of fics. This will open up the filter menu.
Scroll down to the bottom of that sidebar and find the box called Search Within Results
In that box type -oneshot* AND -drabble* AND -ficlet*
Then press the button labelled Sort and Filter
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How to Worldbuild Without Knowing Everything
Worldbuilding can be one of the most daunting tasks that a writer can embark on, but fear not! Siera Schubach, an awarding-winning author, is here to save the day and give you a great guide to building your fantasy world without knowing every detail.
Have you ever wanted to write a fantasy story but felt overwhelmed by the concept of worldbuilding?
As a fantasy writer myself, Iâm going to tell you a little secret: Worldbuilding isnât as complicated as it is made out to be.Â
Here are a few steps you can take to build a strong, layered, and interesting fantasy world without any prep.Â
The Plot is the Point
Do you know every single language on Earth? Do you know the customs and cultures of every person on the planet? I expect the answer is ânoâ (unless youâre an all knowing oracle in which case, I have some questions). We donât know every detail of the world we live in now, and you donât need to know all the details of the world you are creating either.Â
There are over seven different species (that I know of) in my fantasy world, but the only ones I know much about are those that factor heavily into the story. You donât need to know the vast history of a character who is only mentioned in passing.
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Game-Changing Sites for Writers
A recent search for a specific type of site to help me build new characters led me down a rabbit hole. Normally, that would make me much less productive, but I have found a treasure trove of websites for writers.
Bring Characters/Places to Life
There are a few different places you can use to create a picture of something entirely new. I love this site for making character pictures as references, instead of stock photos or whatever pops up on Google Images.
thispersondoesnotexist: every time you reload the page, this site generates a headshot of someone who doesn't exist. This is great if you're thinking about a character's personality or age and don't have specifics for their facial features yet.
Night Cafe: this is an AI art generator that takes your text prompt and generates an image for it. I tried it for various scenery, like "forest" or "cottage." It takes a minute for your requested photo to load, but no more than maybe five for the program to finish the picture.
Art Breeder: this website has endless images of people, places, and general things. Users can blend photos to create something new and curious visitors can browse/download those images without creating an account. (But if you do want to make an account to create your own, it's free!)
Find Random Places on Earth
You might prefer to set a story in a real-life environment so you can reference that place's weather, seasons, small-town vibe, or whatever you like. If that's the case, try:
MapCrunch: the homepage generates a new location each day and gives the location/GPS info in the top left of the screen. To see more images from previous days, hit "Gallery" in the top left.
Atlas Obscura: hover over or tap the "Places" tab, then hit "Random Place." A new page will load with a randomly generated location on the planet, provide a Google Maps link, and tell you a little bit about the place.
Random World Cities: this site makes randomly selected lists of global cities. Six appear for each search, although you'll have to look them up to find more information about each place. You can also use the site to have it select countries, US cities or US states too.
Vary Your Wording
Thesauruses are great, but these websites have some pretty cool perspectives on finding just the right words for stories.
Describing Words: tell this website which word you want to stop repeating and it will give you tons of alternative words that mean the same thing. It typically has way more options than other sites I use.
Reverse Dictionary: type what you need a word for in Reverse Dictionary's search box and it will give you tons of words that closely match what you want. It also lists the words in order of relevancy, starting with a word that most accurately describes what you typed. (There's also an option to get definitions for search results!)
Tip of My Tongue: this website is phenomenal. It lets you search for that word you can't quite place by a letter in it, the definition, what it sounds like, or even its scrambled letters. A long list of potential options will appear on the right side of the screen for every search.
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Hope this helps when you need a hand during next writing session đ
Story Structures for your Next WIP
hello, hello. this post will be mostly for my notes. this is something I need in to be reminded of for my business, but it can also be very useful and beneficial for you guys as well.
everything in life has structure and storytelling is no different, so letâs dive right in :)
First off letâs just review what a story structure is :
a story is the backbone of the story, the skeleton if you will. It hold the entire story together.
the structure in which you choose your story will effectively determine how you create drama and depending on the structure you choose it should help you align your story and sequence it with the conflict, climax, and resolution.
1. Freytag's Pyramid
this first story structure i will be talking about was named after 19th century German novelist and playwright.
it is a five point structure that is based off classical Greek tragedies such as Sophocles, Aeschylus and Euripedes.
Freytag's Pyramid structure consists of:
Introduction: the status quo has been established and an inciting incident occurs.
Rise or rising action: the protagonist will search and try to achieve their goal, heightening the stakes,
Climax: the protagonist can no longer go back, the point of no return if you will.
Return or fall: after the climax of the story, tension builds and the story inevitably heads towards...
Catastrophe: the main character has reached their lowest point and their greatest fears have come into fruition.
this structure is used less and less nowadays in modern storytelling mainly due to readers lack of appetite for tragic narratives.
2. The Hero's Journey
the hero's journey is a very well known and popular form of storytelling.
it is very popular in modern stories such as Star Wars, and movies in the MCU.
although the hero's journey was inspired by Joseph Campbell's concept, a Disney executive Christopher Vogler has created a simplified version:
The Ordinary World: The hero's everyday routine and life is established.
The Call of Adventure: the inciting incident.
Refusal of the Call: the hero / protagonist is hesitant or reluctant to take on the challenges.
Meeting the Mentor: the hero meets someone who will help them and prepare them for the dangers ahead.
Crossing the First Threshold: first steps out of the comfort zone are taken.
Tests, Allie, Enemies: new challenges occur, and maybe new friends or enemies.
Approach to the Inmost Cave: hero approaches goal.
The Ordeal: the hero faces their biggest challenge.
Reward (Seizing the Sword): the hero manages to get ahold of what they were after.
The Road Back: they realize that their goal was not the final hurdle, but may have actually caused a bigger problem than before.
Resurrection: a final challenge, testing them on everything they've learned.
Return with the Elixir: after succeeding they return to their old life.
the hero's journey can be applied to any genre of fiction.
3. Three Act Structure:
this structure splits the story into the 'beginning, middle and end' but with in-depth components for each act.
Act 1: Setup:
exposition: the status quo or the ordinary life is established.
inciting incident: an event sets the whole story into motion.
plot point one: the main character decided to take on the challenge head on and she crosses the threshold and the story is now progressing forward.
Act 2: Confrontation:
rising action: the stakes are clearer and the hero has started to become familiar with the new world and begins to encounter enemies, allies and tests.
midpoint: an event that derails the protagonists mission.
plot point two: the hero is tested and fails, and begins to doubt themselves.
Act 3: Resolution:
pre-climax: the hero must chose between acting or failing.
climax: they fights against the antagonist or danger one last time, but will they succeed?
Denouement: loose ends are tied up and the reader discovers the consequences of the climax, and return to ordinary life.
4. Dan Harmon's Story Circle
it surprised me to know the creator of Rick and Morty had their own variation of Campbell's hero's journey.
the benefit of Harmon's approach is that is focuses on the main character's arc.
it makes sense that he has such a successful structure, after all the show has multiple seasons, five or six seasons? i don't know not a fan of the show.
the character is in their comfort zone: also known as the status quo or ordinary life.
they want something: this is a longing and it can be brought forth by an inciting incident.
the character enters and unfamiliar situation: they must take action and do something new to pursue what they want.
adapt to it: of course there are challenges, there is struggle and begin to succeed.
they get what they want: often a false victory.
a heavy price is paid: a realization of what they wanted isn't what they needed.
back to the good old ways: they return to their familiar situation yet with a new truth.
having changed: was it for the better or worse?
i might actually make a operate post going more in depth about dan harmon's story circle.
5. Fichtean Curve:
the fichtean curve places the main character in a series of obstacles in order to achieve their goal.
this structure encourages writers to write a story packed with tension and mini-crises to keep the reader engaged.
The Rising Action
the story must start with an inciting indecent.
then a series of crisis arise.
there are often four crises.
2. The Climax:
3. Falling Action
this type of story telling structure goes very well with flash-back structured story as well as in theatre.
6. Save the Cat Beat Sheet:
this is another variation of a three act structure created by screenwriter Blake Snyder, and is praised widely by champion storytellers.
Structure for Save the Cat is as follows: (the numbers in the brackets are for the number of pages required, assuming you're writing a 110 page screenplay)
Opening Image [1]: The first shot of the film. If youâre starting a novel, this would be an opening paragraph or scene that sucks readers into the world of your story.
Set-up [1-10]. Establishing the âordinary worldâ of your protagonist. What does he want? What is he missing out on?
Theme Stated [5]. During the setup, hint at what your story is really about â the truth that your protagonist will discover by the end.
Catalyst [12]. The inciting incident!
Debate [12-25]. The hero refuses the call to adventure. He tries to avoid the conflict before they are forced into action.
Break into Two [25]. The protagonist makes an active choice and the journey begins in earnest.
B Story [30]. A subplot kicks in. Often romantic in nature, the protagonistâs subplot should serve to highlight the theme.
The Promise of the Premise [30-55]. Often called the âfun and gamesâ stage, this is usually a highly entertaining section where the writer delivers the goods. If you promised an exciting detective story, weâd see the detective in action. If you promised a goofy story of people falling in love, letâs go on some charmingly awkward dates.
Midpoint [55]. A plot twist occurs that ups the stakes and makes the heroâs goal harder to achieve â or makes them focus on a new, more important goal.
Bad Guys Close In [55-75]. The tension ratchets up. The heroâs obstacles become greater, his plan falls apart, and he is on the back foot.
All is Lost [75]. The hero hits rock bottom. He loses everything heâs gained so far, and things are looking bleak. The hero is overpowered by the villain; a mentor dies; our lovebirds have an argument and break up.
Dark Night of the Soul [75-85-ish]. Having just lost everything, the hero shambles around the city in a minor-key musical montage before discovering some ânew informationâ that reveals exactly what he needs to do if he wants to take another crack at success. (This new information is often delivered through the B-Story)
Break into Three [85]. Armed with this new information, our protagonist decides to try once more!
Finale [85-110]. The hero confronts the antagonist or whatever the source of the primary conflict is. The truth that eluded him at the start of the story (established in step three and accentuated by the B Story) is now clear, allowing him to resolve their story.
Final Image [110]. A final moment or scene that crystallizes how the character has changed. Itâs a reflection, in some way, of the opening image.
(all information regarding the save the cat beat sheet was copy and pasted directly from reedsy!)
7. Seven Point Story Structure:
this structure encourages writers to start with the at the end, with the resolution, and work their way back to the starting point.
this structure is about dramatic changes from beginning to end
The Hook. Draw readers in by explaining the protagonistâs current situation. Their state of being at the beginning of the novel should be in direct contrast to what it will be at the end of the novel.
Plot Point 1. Whether itâs a person, an idea, an inciting incident, or something else â there should be a "Call to Adventure" of sorts that sets the narrative and character development in motion.
Pinch Point 1. Things canât be all sunshine and roses for your protagonist. Something should go wrong here that applies pressure to the main character, forcing them to step up and solve the problem.
Midpoint. A âTurning Pointâ wherein the main character changes from a passive force to an active force in the story. Whatever the narrativeâs main conflict is, the protagonist decides to start meeting it head-on.
Pinch Point 2. The second pinch point involves another blow to the protagonist â things go even more awry than they did during the first pinch point. This might involve the passing of a mentor, the failure of a plan, the reveal of a traitor, etc.
Plot Point 2. After the calamity of Pinch Point 2, the protagonist learns that theyâve actually had the key to solving the conflict the whole time.
Resolution. The storyâs primary conflict is resolved â and the character goes through the final bit of development necessary to transform them from who they were at the start of the novel.
(all information regarding the seven point story structure was copy and pasted directly from reedsy!)
i decided to fit all of them in one post instead of making it a two part post.
i hope you all enjoy this post and feel free to comment or reblog which structure you use the most, or if you have your own you prefer to use! please share with me!
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hey,
any ideas on small, adorable things/gestures a potential love interest might do that mc won't directly notice? thank you:)
Hi :)
Here are some ideas for you:
Love Language - Showing, not telling love
Love Language - Showing you care
Romantic, non-sexual intimacy prompts
Intimate Moments
Hope you like them!
- Jana