too many questions i want to ask, i cant pick, so whichever of these two you would find the most interesting to answer:
35.What is one essential thing to remember when writing a villain?
OR
76.Did you have any ideas that didn’t make the final cut of eleventh hour?
35. What is one essential thing to remember when writing a villain?
For original works: People don't generally do things that they, personally, believe are unjustified.
Notice I said 'unjustified' and not necessarily 'immoral' because real life and fiction are full of people who do things they 'know' are 'wrong' but justify it to themselves as "making the hard decisions so other people don't have to" (this is basically always wrong, by the way) or as the "lesser of two evils", which is sometimes, though not always, genuinely the best option available to them in a shitty situation.
But people don't generally do things they think don't have a justification. They make justifications up! We're human! We can justify anything! Sometimes the justification is as simple as "I deserve this" or "they're basically asking for it". Often it takes the form of convincing themselves that the other person is the aggressor or at fault in some way--I wouldn't HAVE to keep executing you worthless peasants if you would simply GET IN LINE AND DEDICATE EVERY MOMENT OF YOUR EXISTENCE TO PURSUING MY PERSONAL GOALS. Well if you didn't WANT to be tortured you shouldn't have INTERFERED with my VICTORY. We always have a reason.
For fanfic: THEIR CANON CHARACTERIZATION. JESUS. This isn't even about a character 'going too far'. (Like. Palpatine is 'going too far'? Delilah Briarwood took something 'too far'? Uh, Yeah, I Sure Hope So.) It's about going in the wrong direction.
Like. I fucking despise Genn Greymane, but I've gotten comments on my WoW fics complimenting me on his characterization. Because I don't just go "ugh I hate Genn" and immediately make him universally wrong and unbearable in every scene and give him every social bigotry to ever exist and have him insult and mistreat everyone ever all the time constantly every single line he ever speaks.
Tl;dr if a character is a villain, they are a villain for a reason. If you hate them, you hate them for a reason. Portraying them accurately should be enough. You don't need to make up different unrelated stuff. Make them shitty in the ways they actually are.
76. Did you have any ideas that didn’t make the final cut of eleventh hour?
I did actually! I had a whole mental image for Safia's actual confession--but it didn't actually add anything to the narrative, didn't work for the flow or timing of the fic, and all the emotional beats would have been redundant.
It would have massively fucked the pacing and added nothing of real worth, so I never developed it into a real scene!