it's not JUST a bad RWBY rewrite
theyāre so focused on developing the characters that no one really pays any mind to, and not the main characters themselves. Like NDGO, I donāt even think they had a character until the books, I think they straight up sweep SSSN
the fact that some characters areā¦not well introduced??? Tyrian is introduced in a fucking bar, Salem is kept WAY in the back, reduced to telling and not showing
The unnecessary drama between some characters is also weird? Like with how Nora and Pyrrha have a huge fight and then she dies The also weird spotlight of some characters???
And YANG. Oh, my God, Yang- Like it isnāt a special gift from Ironwood, he just hands out prothestics like itās a goddamn awards show
Blakeās silent throwing away of her bow HINGES on the fact that Sun says āyou can be yourselfā
the WHOLE White Fang is just devoted to backstabbing one and other for power, not even for equality at this point
the entire Brunswick Arc is now devoted to Roman- Like, no focus on Ruby and the others being put to an emotional test, itās just Roman time and that takes away from a lot
Weiss legit considers joining the Branwen tribe, which isā¦a bunch of bikers now- Supposedly because of how āliberatingā it all was but thatās like so out of character it legit hurts
SHAY D. MANN, THE GUY NO ONE CARED ABOUT, HAS A CHARACTER NOW
Vernal is now Yangās sister. Vernal really isnāt unique in her own ways anymore. She looks like a younger Raven with a different mask, some flowers in her hair (for some reason) and a mini version of Omen. one of the very few non-feminine designs is sacrificed for a bland design of Raven Jr...who has no panties
the designs for the series are really. really bad.
you're not in a fight, you're going on a picnic
Roman is now the host of Ozpin- nevermind the fact he was comfortable with the deaths of hundreds to survive, he's Ozpin's new host because Oscar is a "nothing" character
oh and on that note. roman straight up looks like. the tiktok pete davidson kid
they had the characters go to a bathhouse to have naked teenagers, had Roman call Weiss a man because her chest wasnt as big as the rest of the girls and called Ren a woman for having a slimmer appearance
Ozpin is now Hazel's brother. hazel was horrified how "Ozma destroyed his brother" from the inside so he joined the crew made to destroy him??? i dunno its stupid
gives the Faunus heat cycles...another thing they added was ācritterā as a slur for the Faunus...because the creator thinks it sounds similar to a certain racist slur used towards real-life people.
also people who support faunus rights are "jockeys"
in the feedback section someone asked why anyone would watch such a drama-laden show (iirc, it's been years) and he basically was like, "I'll add happier moments" & someone else asked how the pacing would work (10 minute episodes). Apparently there is less animation so it's cheaper?? he has no idea how production works
but let's talk about the author
CelticPhoenix has written full on rape stories about Madoka Magica
he constantly pats himself on the back for this shit writing and acts superior
is buddy buddy with a dude who openly made transphobic jokes about Penny
A queer woman joined the RWBY writing team, and Celtic Phoenixās response was to spend THREE HOURS insulting her and her work. And not even actually critiquing or even reading her writing, but cherrypicking reviews.
Celt also believes there's no racism problem in america. none. whatsoever.
