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Surnames Master Post.
Surnames are just as important as given names. So, I compiled a list of the websites I use to find my surnames.
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Another useful writing tool, duly added to Bookmarks. Giving names, even just surnames, to minor characters suggests that they’re not just furniture or redshirts - even if they are.
The rule’s something like this:
Give them a surname and they might survive, give them a surname and forename and they might be important. But if you let them develop a bit and then chop them anyway, suddenly all the comfy understanding about named characters goes out the window and there’s some justified tension back in the story.
George R. R. Martin has taken this one to his heart… :-)
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Weird tip for novel writers: give your readers a place to take a break.
We all know and love the feeling of being glued to a book. “One more chapter, one more page, one more paragraph.” But absorbing whole novels in 1 sitting isn’t the best. We forget loads of stuff that happen!! It just happens.
Every 5-10 chapters I leave it at a good stopping point. A character goes to sleep with no imminent threat waking them up, a good conversation ends with well wishes, a part of the story is wrapped up, and it’s a nice place to put the bookmark and close the cover.
This is good!! This isn’t a bad thing at all!! Some people only have the attention span or ability to read 5 chapters or so. Some people have to work early and want to sleep and not feel obligated to finish a book in one sitting. Some people need to pee!!
Brains will be given the chance to absorb things. Did your character just start a romance?? Win a battle?? Deliver a speech that would win Emmys?? Let your readers take a minute (or day) to process it. To savor it. To think about your characters and story while they go along their daily life.
“Boy I sure hope Alexandria and her girlfriend start a good adventure in the next chapter.”
“The Battle of Darenzal ended on such mixed terms. We lost two names characters but still prevailed. I hope it’s talked about more in the next part.”
“The Queen’s speech about her husband’s death, and the shoutout to our protagonist was lovely. I hope after the ball we see more of her.”
The best books that I’ve read have given me places to stop. To take a breather, to get a glass of water and stretch and THINK about the things that JUST HAPPENED in the last 5-10 chapters. Willingly giving your readers a rest doesn’t mean you’re sacrificing a page-turning best seller, it means you want people to turn pages a bit slower, take it a bit calmer, and have time to think and formulate about your story.
So let your protagonist nod off in safety around a campfire with their dog. Let them have a party where they laugh and dance with friends and relax in a big rose garden outside a castle. Let them accomplish something, and let your characters take a well deserved break. Knowing what we put them through, they deserve it just as much as our readers.
I agree 100%! I also find that reading books/fic where things are constantly happening all the time tires me out. And then I can’t help but wonder how tired the characters are! Bits of downtime in your story, when nothing is immediately threatening, can also be really good for character development. Have your characters joke around with each other! They’ll be more believable friends than characters who just endure hardship after hardship with no rest.
I wrote a scene once where two characters were chilling in an abandoned house for the night, and one started telling a story. Second guy made a comment that just set them off, and they laughed so hard they were on the ground, abs burning, unable to remember why they were laughing in the first place. Based on the reviews I got, it was the most popular part of the chapter by a long shot, and people felt like the two characters and become closer friends because of it. Give your characters breaks!!
just my two cents :)
Both of you are spot on. In fact, this is a very Real and Legitimate writing technique which I can pretty much guarantee you all good writers know and employ. Because, as stated above, readers get tired, just like the characters. The story, the characters, and the readers all need room to breathe, to take a step back and reflect, to absorb. (Which, again, is stuff already stated above. I’m just reiterating here.)
Here’s the thing: Any chapter of a novel needs at least one of three things
Plot advancement
Character development
Theme
A good chapter will have at least two of those things.
A great chapter will have all three.
But here’s the thing, not every chapter needs to be great. In fact, not every chapter can be great. Which means you can still have a really good chapter and it only includes character development and theme. Not every single chapter even needs to forward the plot–though, of course, you shouldn’t have more than one or maybe two chapters in a row that don’t include plot advancement.
So let your characters sit around the campfire and talk about favorite childhood games! Let your characters go out to dinner to talk about the big thing that happened at work the other day. Let your character go home and snuggle their dog and watch TV for a few hours to unwind. (Just make sure that the reader is getting some good character development and a glimpse at the book’s theme while you’re at it!)
Trust me, everyone will thank you for it.
(source: him–no, I’m not just making this shit up lol)
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
Chapters: 1/1 Fandom: Voltron: Legendary Defender Rating: General Audiences Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply Relationships: Keith/Lance (Voltron) Characters: Keith (Voltron), Lance (Voltron), everyone else is there too but they’re only barely mentioned Additional Tags: Friends to Lovers, Fluff, Party Games, Naps and Cuddles, also there’s mentions of alcohol and they are drunk, consent is important, they’re just two big saps who finally confess(in a way??), anyway i have no idea how and what to tag, enjoy!! Summary:
When Keith agrees to play a drinking game, he had no idea what he was signing up for. With friends like his, however, he should have guessed something like this was bound to happen.
best trope!!!: two characters are undercover at a ball. they’re dressed up all fancy & a waltz starts playing & they dance together but they’re carefully analyzing the room & theorizing under their breaths the entire time. bonus points if they get separated & dance w different partners at some point & then shove through the crowd to get back to dancing w each other. MORE bonus points if one of them is wearing a fluffy dress & the other lifts them into the air
more VERY good points abt this trope
me: ugh i hate clichés
the plot: and then they find out that the character everyone thought had died holding off the enemy forces after helping the heroes escape was actually captured by the villain and has been alive this whole time
me, crying: omg they were alive the whole time
the plot: but it turns out they were tortured and brainwashed or mind controlled by the villain to forget their friends and see them as the enemy, so now their friends are forced to fight them in a tense and heartbreaking battle where both sides knows each other's fighting styles and weaknesses but are nonetheless unequally matched because only one of them is fighting to kill
me: *leaning forward excitedly* go on
the plot: unable to hold their brainwashed friend back indefinitely without having to hurt them, the hero chooses to throw their weapon aside in a last-ditch attempt to snap them out of it, saying something like "i know you're still in there somewhere. you can fight this" or "you would never hurt me" or repeating a joke or catchphrase they both shared through their tears and despite their injuries, tenderly cupping their friends' cheek with their free hand as they pin them to the ground and draw back in preparation to make the killing blow
me: *physically gripping the edge of my seat*
the plot: something in their expression changes, recognition and horror and self-loathing filling the blankness, but their face quickly hardens again and they bring their weapon down on the person they love as the villain laughs - only to change the direction of their attack at the last moment and deal the villain a mortal wound while they're exposed
me:
...may I suggest an angsty version?? They only break free after they've stabbed their friend/can't stop themselves in time
YOU MAY NOT
Even angstier!
When they look like theyre about to stab the hero/their friend but stop before A. Their killed by the villian or B. Break out of it just long enough to beg the hero to kill them and the hero tearfully does but only after stubbornly trying to continue to save them for a few more lines
This guy knows what he’s talking about. He’s one of the lead writers for Leverage and if you ever watch the series on DVD, do yourself a favor and listen to him talk about how the scripts got written. Some of the advice he has is stuff I use all the time: 1. Don’t introduce an important plot person or thing after the first half of the story. 2. Always tie up loose ends. 3. Introduce important things in the middle of unimportant things. 4. If you have to infodump, find an emotion to tie it to and it will seem less like infodump and more like a motive rant. Seriously this guy knows how to write.
//Absurdly helpful for people writing royal characters and/or characters who interact with royalty and members of the nobility.
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Citizen is simpler and more beautiful~ but just in case anyone needs this.
DUDE BUT THIS IS WHAT I’VE BEEN TRYING TO TELL PEOPLE
in medieval times you ONLY addressed a king/queen with “Your Majesty”, NEVER “Your Highness”. To address a king/queen with “Your Highness” was considered an insult.
Here’s a more extensive list of titles and what you would call a person/their wife/their mother/their children
reminder to myself about the process of drafting & revising:
first drafts are for making it exist
second drafts are for making it functional
third drafts are for making it effective
This is the most important thing I’ve learnt in writing my novel. Have fun the first time but know your first pass isn’t going to be perfect
Y’all I read a lot of scripts. And the one note I give over and over and over and over to the point that I can pretty much copy and paste it from one review to another…. let your characters lie. Let them omit, stumble, and circumvent. Allow them to be completely unable to express what they’re feeling. Make them unable to admit a truth. Let them sit in silence because they can’t think of anything clever to say! Let them say the exact wrong thing!
Dee Rees talks about it in her BAFTA lecture (which you should ABSOLUTELY WATCH): that what your character actually says should be three degrees of separation away from what they mean to say.
I read script after script after script where characters articulate their needs, desires, and objectives with perfect accuracy off the cuff 24/7 and there is not one single human person on this planet who is actually able to do that. This is the #1 thing that’s going to make your script sound stilted and the #1 thing that’s going to make shit difficult on your actors. Let them shut up, and let them lie.
This!! In real life no one says what they mean. We say we’re fine when we’re not. We keep secrets because the truth is painful or embarrassing. We fight over stupid shit that’s a stand-in for what we’re really upset about. We don’t say what we want or need because recognizing, let alone vocalizing, our wants and needs is hard.
If your characters say what they mean all the time, you, as a writer, are robbing yourself of so much power to affect the audience. This is true in all writing but especially in dramatic writing, where everything in the character’s interior life has to be externalized in some way to be known. You can create intimacy by allowing the audience to see something your character hides from other characters. You can create tension by letting the audience know the character has a secret or has told a lie they don’t want revealed. You can create catharsis by allowing the character to finally say what they’re really thinking at a key moment.
You’re also creating a much more interesting text for your actors because you allow for the presence of subtext. If you’re someone who directs your own material you’ll start to realize how little you actually need your characters to say to make it clear exactly what’s going on with them. What starts as a monologue in the first draft may, in rehearsal, become a single line, which in the final cut becomes a shared glance, and the audience will still know exactly what you mean.
I love this. thank u so much for pointing this out so concisely, it explains so well why some lines have an insane impact, while others feel just meh
Dialogue is still one of the things I really struggle with when writing because it’s so hard to make it sound natural. This is great advice!
Don’t Be A Starving-Artist
I read an article the other day by a writer who, out of one side of his mouth, suggested that writers aren’t paid enough. We are often “forced” into taking secondary jobs like teaching or writing nonfiction, because Amazon’s policies “force” publishers to artificially raise their prices and “force” and “force.” The net result is that today’s great literary writers have to work so hard that they just don’t have time to write their masterpieces.
On the other hand, like many, he seemed to feel that writers should suffer for their art. Only solitary geniuses scratching away in their garrets are worthy of praise.
What a crock! As a writer, I have one of the funnest, cushiest, and most-fulfilling jobs in the world. I can live anywhere I want, almost never have to deal with corporate politics, and get to set my own hours. Anyone who is stupid enough to whine about having to actually work at it really doesn’t deserve any pity. In fact, it’s obvious that this “writer” didn’t have a clue what the job entails, and he might as well go find a new chosen career—something in waste management or fast food.
Most writers in this business fail not because they are bad at writing or storytelling, but because they fail to understand the very fundamentals of this business. Maybe they fail to understand the fundamentals of any business.
So here is the truth: If you want to be a full-time writer, you have to learn to understand the business of writing. Writing deathless prose isn’t enough. This is a business.
As a writer, this is your job: You write manuscripts. You are a manuscript factory with a workforce of one. No one else will do your work for you. You write a manuscript, and when you are done, you write the next one.
Once you write a manuscript, you go out and sell it, usually with the help of an agent or manager. A manuscript is a global product. You don’t just sell it to publishers in the United States, or Canada, or whatever country you happen to live in—your job is to liquidate the global rights of your manuscript in as many countries as possible. In other words, you need to understand that you are selling rights to republish your work. (Many authors don’t understand this. Recently I heard of a couple of authors who refused to let their works be published because they didn’t want to sell their rights).
And not only should you sell your literary “intellectual property” (IP) as a novel in twenty or thirty or forty different countries, you should also sell it into various mediums. Thus, you sell your novel’s film rights, audio rights, stage rights, reprint rights, translation rights, and so on.
That’s how authors make money. As a writer, you are a global businessperson with one employee.
Most authors never learn to see themselves as factories. Indeed, most authors, I’m certain, have what I call a “hobbyist” mentality. They write as a hobby. Many of them don’t try to make money. In a recent survey of 14 writer’s organizations, 55% of the people who defined themselves as “full-time” writers made absolutely nothing last year–$0.
I can’t figure out how that would be possible. Even if you only wrote one book in a year, then put it up on Amazon and sold a single copy to your mother, you should make something.
Don’t misunderstand me. There is nothing wrong with writing as a hobby. Most of us writers start that way: we write a few short stories or poems, discover that we have some talent, and then move into it as a career. Even if you’re a fine writer, it takes time to learn the business of writing.
But don’t be deluded, either. Once you start publishing professionally, your goal is to become a working writer. Your publisher needs two main things from you:
Your publisher wants book of high quality.
Your publisher wants books written quickly.
That’s pretty much it. Not every book has to be an unmatched work of genius. Even Shakespeare couldn’t manage that. Give them your best. Your publisher doesn’t want to have to rewrite your novels or tell you that you’ve just produced a steaming pile of crap.
And don’t take twenty years waiting for inspiration between short stories. The writers who get promoted in New York are the ones who understand the value of turning in books like clockwork—one every three to six months. Publishers understand that when a reader buys a book and likes it well enough to learn the name of the author, they want another one quickly.
Over the next few weeks I’ll talk about the business of writing, but before I get into it, I want you to shift your focus: Start now to define yourself as a working writer. Don’t whine about how you have to work to make a living—that’s true in any field that you go into. And don’t blubber about how tough the industry is. The truth is that if you understand this field, it’s not that tough.
Now, the life of a writer is often varied and misunderstood. Today I will do some work teaching—recording a new writing course, editing some assignments. That’s great. I love teaching, and if I didn’t love it, I’d do something else. But I’ve also got writing to do. I’ve got a screenplay to finish, and I have a couple hundred pages left to go on my next novel, and I want to have that done in seven weeks.
So if you want to be a writer, quit acting as if you’re just a hobbyist. Figure out how to make time to write today—and go for it!
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how to make yourself write if you don’t know where to start
1. don’t expect too much of yourself
2. write down whatever you know about your idea
3. don’t format it to make it look pretty
4. use paragraphs whenever you get a new idea
5. don’t read back on what you’ve written before
6. if it helps, set your font color to white or light gray
7. don’t skip around. when you have a new idea, it goes on the end of the document
8. write sample dialogue if you have any
9. link to resources you find while googling
10. don’t delete anything. if you want to disregard something, use strikethrough
being in love with the process and not the results is one of the healthiest things in the world
in this same vein: being proud of yourself for the work and not the product brings so much more happiness
It’s okay to take breaks from your writing!
It’s okay to decide you aren’t going to work on your wips for a few days.
It’s okay to choose to lower your goals for the month.
It’s okay to pause your rough draft for a week of silly au creation.
It’s okay to ignore everything about your wip for a weekend and binge read something you love.
It’s okay to take take deliberate impromptu breaks.
More than okay: it’s necessary and important to know yourself and your personal mental health and to know when you need to take time off from the things you want to accomplish in order to take care of yourself.
You are the most important part of your writing.
You cannot write unless you take care of you first.
On this note, remember to take breaks the better way!
Worse way: “I just didn’t write anything the last couple days, I don’t know what’s wrong with me. I’m going to wait until my inspiration returns. The better way: “I’m mentally tired right now so I’m going to set an easy goal of 100 words for today and tomorrow and then on the third day I’ll return to my normal writing goals.”
Worse way: “I just can’t work on this project anymore, I quit for now!” The better way: “Since I’m having trouble with this project, I’m going to finish the scene/chapter/etc I’m currently working on, and then I’ll write the rough draft of a short story to let my mind relax and re-calibrate.”
Worse way: “I keep feeling sick so I’m going to binge watch more tv.” The better way: “I’m coming down with a cold, so instead of writing tonight I’m going to bed 45 minutes early to help my body recover quickly.”
Worse way: “I’m so depressed right now I’m going to wait until I feel good to write again.” The better way: “Since I’m having a depressive spell, I’m going to take a week off from writing to focus on self-care, and then on this day next week I’m going to write 300 words.”
Worse way: “My motivation is gone, I can’t write anything until it comes back!” The better way: “Because my motivation is abnormally low, I’m going to stop writing for the weekend and reread my favorite book to analyze and learn from it.”
Worse way: “I’m tired and busy so I can’t write until my schedule is better.” The better way: “This month is very busy for me, so I’m going to schedule in a few hours to write here and there as well as schedule break days for the times I know I won’t be able to write because I have too many other responsibilities.”
Tl;dr
Worse way: “I have a problem that’s preventing me from writing so I guess I just won’t write.”
The better way: “I have a problem that’s preventing me from writing so I’m going to figure out where this problem is coming from, how much time I need off from writing, and when I’ll begin writing again, and then stick to that plan unless further issues arise and I have to re-evaluate.”