Told myself to look people in the eyes more
Made sure to look you in the eyes when i saw you last night
I havenāt stopped thinking of you since
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Told myself to look people in the eyes more
Made sure to look you in the eyes when i saw you last night
I havenāt stopped thinking of you since
Ambient sounds for writers
Find the right place to write your novelā¦Ā
Nature
Arctic ocean
Blizzard in village
Blizzard in pine forest
Blizzard from cave
Blizzard in road
Beach
Cave
Ocean storm
Ocean rocks with rain
River campfire
Forest in the morning
Forest at night
Forest creek
Rainforest creek
Rain on roof window
Rain on tarp tent
Rain on metal roof
Rain on window
Rain on pool
Rain on car at night
Seaside storm
Swamp at night
Sandstorm
Thunderstorm
Underwater
Wasteland
Winter creek
Winter wind
Winter wind in forest
Howling wind
Places
Barn with rain
Coffee shop
Restaurant with costumers
Restaurant with few costumers
Factory
Highway
Garden
Garden with pond and waterfall
Fireplace in log living room
OfficeĀ
Call center
Street market
Study room from victorian house with rain
Trailer with rain
Tent with rain
Jacuzzi with rain
Temple
Temple in afternoon
Server room
Fishing dock
Windmill
War
Fictional places
Chloeās room (Life is Strange)
Blackwell dorm (Life is Strange)
Two Whales Diner (Life is Strange)
Star Wars apartmentĀ (Star Wars)
Star Wars penthouse (Star Wars)
TatooineĀ (Star Wars)
Coruscant with rainĀ (Star Wars)
Yodaās hut with rainĀ ( Star Wars)
Lukeās home (Star Wars)
Death Star hangarĀ (Star wars)
Blade Runner cityĀ (Blade Runner)
Askaban prisonĀ (Harry Potter)
Hogwarts library with rainĀ (Harry Potter)
Ravenclaw towerĀ (Harry Potter)
Hufflepuff common roomĀ (Harry Potter)
Slytherin common roomĀ (Harry Potter)
Gryffindor common roomĀ (Harry Potter)
Hagridās hutĀ (Harry Potter)
Hobbit-hole houseĀ (The Hobbit)
Diamond City (Fallout 4)
Cloud City beach (Bioshock)
Founding Fathers Garden (Bioshock)
Things
Dishwasher
Washing machine
Fireplace
Transportation
Boat engine room
Cruising boat
Train ride
Train ride in the rain
Train station
Plane trip
Private jet cabin
Airplane cabin
Airport lobby
First class jet
Sailboat
Submarine
Historical
Fireplace in medieval tavern
Medieval town
Medieval docks
Medieval city
Pirate ship in tropical port
Ship on rough sea
Ship cabin
Ship sleeping quarter
Titanic first class dining room
Old west saloon
Sci-fi
Spaceship bedroom
Space station
Cyberpunk tearoom
Cyberpunk street with rain
Futuristic server room
Futuristic apartment with typing
Futuristic rooftop gardenĀ
Steampunk balcony rain
Post-apocalyptic
Harbor with rain
City with rain
City ruins turned swamp
Rusty sewers
Train station
Lighthouse
Horror
Haunted mansion
Haunted road to tavern
Halloween
Stormy night
Asylum
Creepy forest
Cornfield
World
New York
Paris
Paris bistro
Tokyo street
Chinese hotel lobby
Asian street at nightfall
Asian night market
Cantonese restaurant
Coffee shop in Japan
Coffee shop in Paris
Coffee shop in Korea
British library
Trips, rides and walkings
Trondheim - BodĆø
Amsterdam - Brussels
Glasgow - Edinburgh
Oxford - Marylebone
Seoul - Busan
Gangneung - Yeongju
Hiroshima
Tokyo metro
Osaka - Kyoto
Osaka - Kobe
London
SĆ£o Paulo
Seoul
Tokyo
Bangkok
Ho Chi Minh (Saigon)
Alps
New York
Hong Kong
Taipei
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@icanneverbesatisfied @maybe-mikala I HAVE FOUND THE ULTIMATE RESOURCE
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS
HONESTLY I CAN DIE HAPPY NOW
āThis is your daily, friendly reminder to use commas instead of periods during the dialogue of your story,ā she said with a smile.
āUnless you are following the dialogue with an action and not a dialogue tag.ā He took a deep breath and sat back down after making the clarifying statement.Ā
āHowever,ā she added, shifting in her seat, āitās appropriate to use a comma if thereās action in the middle of a sentence.ā
āTrue.ā She glanced at the others. āYou can also end with a period if you include an action between two separate statements.ā
Things I didnāt know
āAndāā she waved a pen as though to underline her statementāāif youāre interrupting a sentence with an action, you need to type two hyphens to make an en-dash.ā
You guys have no idea how many students in my advanced fiction workshop didnāt know any of this when writing their stories.
This is the most enlightening post ever
I just finished a script that Iām super pleased with and I kinda canāt wait to show people.Ā
Iām also excited cause if I wanted I bet I could turn it into a longer script that that prospect is simultaneously intriguing and terrifying. Like most of writing, I supposeĀ
Iām still here, guys. donāt you worry.Ā
Decided to update my picture and all that to something less pretentious cause Iām gonna start taking this all more seriously.Ā
On Editing
This was forwarded to me by a former colleague who attended a course on how to publish/edit a book. You probably already know most of these tips, but there might be something youāll find helpful, who knowsā¦
QUESTIONS TO ASK DURING FIRST PHASE OF EDITING
GENERAL STRUCTURE OF THE BOOK (what the story is and how it is being told):
What is the book about? What is the driving force behind the narrative?
Who is the audience for this book?
Is it based on real experience?
Does the story work? Are there any parts that feel unconvincing or where the narrative drags?Ā
Are there any parts I donāt understand?
What is the trajectory or the shape of the story?
Does the story start in the right place?
How quickly do I become immersed in the book?
Are there any points where my immersion in the story is broken, or I lose interest?
Do I believe in what Iām reading?
How satisfying is the ending? Does it feel inevitable?
Does it feel like anything is missing?
Is there anything extraneous (characters, detail, unnecessary plot points)?
What is the narrative point of view (first person, second person, third person)? Does it change? Is it consistent? Does it work? What might be lost or gained if the story were told another way?
Is the tense consistent? If it changes, is it necessary?
Does coincidence feature as a plot device? If so, is there another way to engineer the same events?
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Some Pokemon Go Tips
Just some things Iāve learned that when I share some people donāt seem to know yet!Ā
CATCH DUPLICATES. Catch them and then return them to prof willow. You can do this by clicking on the pokemonās stats, scrolling down and hitting transfer. You get pokecandy for this which you can use to evolve/power up your original!Ā
Make sure you compare and contrast CPs of your duplicates. One pikachu might be 10cp and the other 56cp. Keep the higher one, transfer the other.Ā
That being said DONT waste your time evolving/powering your pokemon just yet. You might work hard to power your eevee to 100cp only to catch one at 150cp the next day. WAIT. In fact, I started only powering up my highest evolved pokemon. (ninetails, fearow, etc)
Pokestops refresh every 5 minutes. You can visit them for an unlimited amount of time. I live right on top of one and check back in whenever I remember to.Ā
Leveling up will give you LURES, INCENSE AND INCUBATORS. So donāt think you NEED to buy these from the shop.Ā
If your wary about spending money for coins, you can GET COINS by having pokemon in gyms. This is the ādefender bonusā Theres a shield icon in the shop section that you can refresh every 21 hours. You can have up to 10 pokemon in 10 diff gyms for a total ofĀ 100 pokecoins and 5000 stardust a day.(10 Pokecoins and 500 stardust per pokemon)
Your gym alliance makes it so that ANY GYM you fight of your own alliance, your pokemon WILL NOT FAINT. Ā Their hp will reduce to 1 and they will need healing, but they wonāt faint. You also gain gym prestige this way which helps strengthen your alliance territory. Any rival gyms however will faint your pokemon and they will need a REVIVE to keep being used. You can also transform them into candy at this point if you are a heartless monster. :(Ā
A gym has a max of 3 pokemon traners/defenders. If you find a gym of your alliance with only 1 or 2 pokemon in it, you can ADD YOUR POKEMON WITHOUT FIGHTING YOUR FELLOW TEAM. Just drop a pokemon in there and keep walking! Free defender bonus. (Do this by clicking the bottom left icon ofĀ āadd pokemonā)
More than one trainer can fight one gym leader at a time. Getting a friend to fight with you is the best way to beat the gym!! You attack at the same time.
ITS NOT TURN BASED ATTACKS. Its real time! Click once for a basic attack, swipe to dodge, and hold down a click for a SPECIAL ATTACK!
My best method is not to dodge at all but just click forever. So long as I have a bigger CP I usually win lol.Ā
Do NOT put your best pokemon into a gym. Your second or third only. You cannot recall your pokemon once its in a gym and you will need it to fight other gyms. Ā (they get returned to you after they are beaten)
Everyone gets one free incubator that lasts forever. Any extras you find orĀ receiveĀ from leveling up only last 3 hatches before breaking.
TRACKING POKEMON! Sparkling grass doesnāt guarantee a pokemon showing up. TheĀ ānearbyā tab is the actual tracker. The highest on the list is the closest. Selecting a pokemon in it will make the tracker pulse when you get nearer to it. 3 footsteps away mean THREE RINGS away (or more). 2 footsteps means TWO RINGS, one footstep means one ring and NO RINGS MEANS YOU CAN CLICK ON THAT POKEMON AND IT WILL APPEAR IN 10 SECONDS.
Battery saver mode, found in settings, works as follows: Once clicked on, if you drop your phone to your side as you walk, with the top of your phone facing the ground, the screen will dim so only the pokemon logo shows. It still tracks your steps for your eggs and it will vibrate and beep when a pokemon shows up. As soon as you lift your phone to your face (right side up) the screen will appear again as normal!
The higher level you get, the more rare pokemon you come across.
I think thatās all Iāve learned so far. Send me an ask or message if you want me to add or change any info here! Happy hunting!!!!Ā
āiām just one kidā
Ways to un-stick a stuck story
Do an outline, whatever way works best. Get yourself out of the word soup and know where the story is headed.
Conflicts and obstacles. Hurt the protagonist, put things in their way, this keeps the story interesting. An easy journey makes the story boring and boring is hard to write.
Change the POV. Sometimes all it takes to untangle a knotted story is to look at it through different eyes, be it through the sidekick, the antagonist, a minor character, whatever.
Know the characters. You canāt write a story if the characters are strangers to you. Know their likes, dislikes, fears, and most importantly, their motivation. This makes the path clearer.
Fill in holes. Writing doesnāt have to be linear; you can always go back and fill in plotholes, and add content and context.
Have flashbacks, hallucinations, dream sequences or foreshadowing events. These stir the story up, deviations from the expected course add a feeling of urgency and uncertainty to the narrative.
Introduce a new mystery. If thereās something that just doesnāt add up, a big question mark, the story becomes more compelling. Beware: this can also cause you to sink further into the mire.
Take something from your protagonist. A weapon, asset, ally or loved one. Force him to operate without it, it can reinvigorate a stale story.
Twists and betrayal. Maybe someone isnāt who they say they are or the protagonist is betrayed by someone he thought he could trust. This can shake the story up and get it rolling again.
Secrets. If someone has a deep, dark secret that theyāre forced to lie about, itās a good way to stir up some fresh conflict. New lies to cover up the old ones, the secret being revealed, and all the resulting chaos.
Kill someone. Make a character death that is productive to the plot, but not ājust becauseā. If done well, it affects all the characters, stirs up the story and gets it moving.
Ill-advised character actions. Tension is created when a character we love does something we hate. Identify the thing the readers donāt want to happen, then engineer it so it happens worse than they imagined.
Create cliff-hangers. Keep the readersā attention by putting the characters into new problems and make them wait for you to write your way out of it. This challenge can really bring out your creativity.
Raise the stakes. Make the consequences of failure worse, make the journey harder. Suddenly the protagonistās goal is more than he expected, or he has to make an important choice.
Make the hero active. You canāt always wait for external influences on the characters, sometimes you have to make the hero take actions himself. Not necessarily to be successful, but active and complicit in the narrative.
Different threat levels. Make the conflicts on a physical level (āIām about to be killed by a demonā), an emotional level (āBut that demon was my true loveā) and a philosophical level (āIf Iām forced to kill my true love before they kill me, how can love ever succeed in the face of evil?ā).
Figure out an ending. If you know where the story is going to end, it helps get the ball rolling towards that end, even if itās not the same ending that you actually end up writing.
What if? What if the hero kills the antagonist now, gets captured, or goes insane? When you write down different questions like these, the answer to how to continue the story will present itself.
Start fresh or skip ahead. Delete the last five thousand words and try again. Itās terrifying at first, but frees you up for a fresh start to find a proper path. Or you can skip the part thatās putting you on edge ā forget about that fidgety crap, you can do it later ā and write the next scene. Whatever was in-between will come with time.
@welcome-to-abnesia peRFE C T
Thereās a play submission call for Illinois playwrights and Iām likeĀ āYes finally a play submission for Illinois playwrights that is totally me letās do this I donāt even care that itās due in 5 days letās write this bitchā. but the theme isĀ āthe Nature of Masculinityā and all of a sudden Iām like.... is that too political for me? Usually ideas kinda come naturally. I find it kind of difficult to write based on themes that are inherently.... socially based. I do have a lot to say on the nature of masculinity but Iām not sure how creatively I can put it, itās more like a long rant/monologue....Ā
Iāll try anyway, weāll see how it goes.Ā
Iāve officially begun work on my second full length play. Of course, Iām not sure if it will be a full length, it may be a one act or something.Ā
Basically, Iām beginning work on my next major play writing project, and Iām kinda scared but also kinda excited. I really like this idea but unfortunately itās basically just a premise and an ending right now. I have a few scenes half written and I have no idea what I want to happen in the middle, so itās kinda large and terrifying. But Iām still excited about what can happen.Ā
Yay writing, cause unfortunately Iāve half given up on acting in St. Louis, mostly cause work is killing me slightly and Iām also gonna have two jobs in June. I donāt want to give up on acting overall, but the way work is going itās just easier for me to do writing to keep me from going theater crazy, instead of acting.Ā
Danās life update: Done.Ā
Note to self: Do not write poetry/lyrics when drunk and angry. It gets very angsty, very fast.Ā
Because this is the best idea ever, the Kickstarter has already been fully funded!Ā
But if you know you absolutely MUST have one, you can still back the project and get your notebook at a discount :)
Source
Just finished a short play, which was ironically based off of a short story I wrote a few years back. Iām semi-happy with it, I need more time to get used to it. Cause I really liked the short story, so seeing it in play form is weird and Iām not sure yet if I got everything I wanted out of it.Ā
Just thought of a new play idea. It actually sounds awesome and badass and I think I'm definitely gonna start writing it tomorrow. I took a whole bunch of notes down to remember, so I have a solid base. I'm excited to write again.
oh and when i was a year old, after i got my foot amputated my parents were pushing me around in a stroller at a street festival in miami and i was chewing on my foot or whatever and this street performer came up to us and was like āaw i bet that tastes good!!ā and my dad was like āyeah look at what she did to the other one!!!!ā and pulled back the blanket covering my left leg to show a stump with a huge scar on it and iām pretty sure my dad terrified that poor man
A friend of ours worked in a movie theater.Ā One night, a rowdy little boy decided to kick over all the stands that held up the red velvet cords.
After several attempt to stop him, she finally declared, āIf you keep kicking those over, your leg will fall off!ā
No sooner had she said this than she looked up and was mortified to notice a man standing on a pair of crutches with one leg.
Before she could apologize, he looked down at the boy and sighed, āI used to love to kick those.ā
The kid ran away.
Looking for a random cause of death for a character? Click here.
Looking for a random city? Click here.
Looking for a random city that people have actually heard of? Click here.
Need a random surname for a character? Click here. (They also give prevalence by race, which is very helpful.)
Helpful writing tips for my friends.
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OH SHIT.
A couple more resources I have open constantly:
Random motivations for your characters here!
Need some character quirks? Here and here!Ā
Having trouble with backstory? Here! (They have an option for fortunate and unfortunate backstories)