a collection of my thoughts

writer, reader, guardian of animals

[fairiemom]

Stacking washers and dryers are a good design for small spaces.

[kelsville]

Peer Review 1

These are my angry fan comments...I'm not sure if I am portraying anger enough? Any suggestions on what might make these comments more angry feeling?

[fairiemom]

I think you've done a great job with these comments. I don't really have any improvements to add.

[kelsville]

Peer Review 2

For one of my "Tv Movie Studio Co." responses I have them announcing a new show, called neighbors that is similar to the show that is being cancelled... Is this something that would be appealing to users to replace the cancelled show?

[fairiemom]

I think announcing a new show is a good way to try to appease the fans.

[bmanzel]

Design Project Request

This is one of my responses to an angry fan post, I'm asking

1- is this too generic?

2- what could change, how would you change it?

[fairiemom]

I think this is a really good post.... just remember we are supposed to use Favorite Show as the name of the Show.

[fairiemom]

Here are some of my tv studio responses. Am I addressing the things that need to be addressed?

[fairiemom]

Here are some of my angry fan posts. Am I hitting the right level of angry vs community building?

[fairiemom]

Is this a good cancelation post or do you have suggestions for improving it?

[fairiemom]

Part of the appeal of long form podcasts is having something to listen to on road trips. I listen to a long form, true crime podcast called Crime Weekly. They discuss both current and historical crimes, some of which are unsolved.

Another reason people return to podcasts like crime weekly is how deeply they research and the indepth discussion that they have.

[fairiemom]

A youtube channel that creates long form videos that I watch is Emily D Baker. She has worked very hard to create a strong fan community. Some things that she does as a lawyer youtube creator is to discuss and explain the legal things behind a lot of popculture lawsuits. She also does live commentary on livestreamed court cases.

People are drawn to her content because she is kind, compassionate, and explains legal things in a way that non-lawyers can understand. She also sets a standard in the chat on her videos that attacking people is not acceptable.

[fairiemom]

A show that really enjoyed that was canceled too early in my opinion was the show firefly. As a fan I really feel like the studio mishandled so many things about the show. From airing the episodes out of their intended order to putting in a bad timeslot to canceling before the end of the first season.

It was really disappointing to have it end the way it did. But it was fortunate that it had found a dedicated fan following who organized fan events and kept it's memory alive. The fan base was so strong that they eventually made a movie to give the show the ending it deserved.

[fairiemom]

Check in

For the posts we create for the design project are you looking for everything to be separate posts or posts and replies/comments?

@npfannen

[fairiemom]

What gets me into the writing mindset and ready to draft is my coffee and my computer.

[bmanzel]

peer requests 1 & 2

Hi trying to see how I can make this title page more interesting and on theme, my write guide is for true crime story YouTube creators. if you have any ideas I'd love to hear them

2. I wanted to get opinions on my introduction please let me know if it is readable and if I should change anything.

Thanks!

[fairiemom]

Overall I think your intro is well written. The main thing I might suggest is breaking it into multiple paragraphs to make it easier to read.

[ad-designs-21]

Peer Review #1

Do my graphs have enough information? Can you look at them and know what the caption is and how many likes each photo received for each person? It was hard to create graphs for all three dancers I chose since they each have a huge difference in what they post and the amount of likes they post. My research question is how different dancers with different styles connect with the dance world. Looking at the comments and likes I was able to see who people relate more too.

[fairiemom]

The topics/titles for 2 of the graphs was really helpful. Just having the dates on the middle one makes it stand out. Could you write a bit of what the post is about instead?

[brettblankley]

Peer Request

Intro Help

Hey everyone! I am using canva to make my how to write guide and found a great template to fill out. My only problem is that I can not come up with a good into at all for this guide. Should I talk about the three accounts at all or just go right into my tips? How much of my analysis do i mention?

[fairiemom]

I wrote an overview of what I was going to talk about as an intro to my guide. I didn't really mention the accounts I researched at all.

[fairiemom]

Peer review

I feel like I need a better way to end my guide. How can I do this effectively with out simply repeating my tips?

[fairiemom]

Peer review

Have I stated my tip clearly? Have I explained it well?