How to Write A First Draft
What? I give advice? Even though I prove on a daily basis that I don’t know what I’m doing? Yes. Because this writing advice HINGES on you not knowing what you’re doing, so it’s well within my jurisdiction.
Treat your first draft like you’re doing nothing but taking notes
You’re not trying to make each paragraph all perfect and literary, you’re just letting yourself know what goes where.
Like, your first draft is 100% allowed to be:
The Room was square. It had purple curtains and the walls were white. It was cold and the floor creaked.
Like, that got the description down and out the way so you’re free to write the next paragraph, and the next, and the next, until you’ve stumbled your way into a full book. A book full of wooden descriptions and dialogue like [insert heartfelt response], but a book. As it’s been said before, it’s easier to edit a bad book than a blank page.
But you wrote that, so next draft you can sit down with and turn it into something that sounds, you know, less like cardboard, like:
She pushed the door open and peered into the hidden room. The perfectly square configuration was almost as cold as the blank white walls and the chill that cut into her lungs. Through her foggy breath she could see dusty curtains- faded purple, a color choice that made her frown. The floor creaked under each careful step as she made to examine them closer.
There. A paragraph that is objectively better than the last one.
My point is, don’t let the fear of writing ‘badly’ stop you from writing at all. Give yourself permission! Do it on purpose! Wake and up and decide you’re going to write everything that way as terribly as you possibly can, write the whole damn thing that way if you have to, revel in flat characters and and choppy transitions and missing subplots, as long as you’re prepared to revise it later.
Just let yourself suck sometimes. Life gets a lot easier.