Anna the Brave a snow queen story
•Disclaimer This is just a tester because I'm not far into writing this. But the first chapter might be the same who knows
I'm not making it to be popular or anything. I'm making this for fun. But I'm putting the first chapter out to see whoever is interested thoughts on it. Criticism is aloud but you don't have to be rude.
This story is based on the draft of Elsa freezing her own heart and being left at the alter. And Anna wedding Hans. Elsa was originally evil in
My story also is based on frozen itself, the snow queen, and my own version.
This is an alternate universe so it's focused on the platonic bond of Anna Elsa. But also features Hans/Anna as a ship. But I'll try and keep the dynamics interesting. So please if not interested just don't read.
More details here https://www.reddit.com/r/Frozen/s/oe9eCakgKh
I have dyslexia so I corrected what I could see
Anyways enjoy ☺️ And give your thoughts
Hans looked at himself in the mirror of the dresser in the dressing room he was given in the Arendelle dressing room. Today was the day, the day Hans had been waiting for quite sometime now.
The day Hans would be married to princess Anna of Arendelle. You probably would think he is excited because he's in love? Um well- him and Anna didn't really know each other very well. Though Anna would tell you it was love the moment she saw Hans face.
How the two met was completely by accident. Anna was so excited, there was a royal ball on her birthday. Ships came in from far and wide to celebrate the princesses special day. Some came even as suiters. But not Hans- of course not Hans, Hans just happened to be prince from a far away kingdom. Dressing his best and everything to just 'Happen' to come to Arendelle, on such a momentous accusation. Nope nothing suspicious about that.
Anna was at the docks talking to whoever would catch her attention. So pretty much anymore who would wanna talk to her.
But as she went to turn around suddenly there was a horse in the way that made her stumble back and fall into a smaller boat. The horse quickly put it's hoof inside the boat to keep it steady.
" Hey!" She said upset whoever was riding this horse she was gonna give a piece of her mind. Since she often just ran on impulse.
Then she saw him- a fine young man around her age. He looked like the way the stories in books she read mentioned. He had ginger hair. Side burns. He didn't look bad in his suit Ethier. But his eyes are what striked Anna the most. His pretty green eyes almost like a sea green, so striking and yet it did his features Justice.
" I'm sorry are you hurt?!" The young man said he looked all innocent. It must of been accident Anna thought getting lost to his gaze.
" Oh I'm fine, great actually" she muttered just sitting there in the boat like it wasn't a big deal.
He helped out from the boat. Luckily his horse let go of it once they were off. So things weren't to awkward. Nope just Hans being his charming self.
" I'm Hans, Hans of the southern isles." He bowed slightly.
" Oh, and I'm princess Anna of Arendelle." She curtseyed a bit awkwardly.
" Princess- oh my lady-" He bowed more.
" No-No no-" Anna said with a start. " You don't have to do that...I just happen to be a princess, but I'm completely ordinary."
Hans raised a brow. " Hmm, Alright." He smiled seeming slightly amused.
Anna again was lost to the depths of his eyes. They were just so captivating and the way the sunlight caught them was almost swoon worthy in her personal view.
" Your gorgeous" she said her eyes slowly widened in the realization she said that out loud. She went to cover her mouth.
Hans was a bit surprised at how bold the comment was. Then smiled and it looked almost like a smirk. Before he gently snickered. " And is that what you say with all princes you've come in contact with?"
She put her hand away from her face and let out a light nervous laugh. " Erm no, it just kinda slipped outta me. Sorry."
His smile was playful and his eyes very amused. Yet seemed to hold many untold facets of him buried inside.the way the sun shown on him now Anna could make out a small scar noticable above his eye lids and a bit over his brow.was it a battle scar?
"There's no need for apologzing. I appreciate the honesty. It's nice that someone for once notices the finer things. I don't just wake up looking like this trust me." He held himself up straight and proper, his hands behind his back as he looked out at the sea. Seeming pleased with himself.
Now it was Anna's turn to raise an eye brow at him, going beside him on the dock. Letting out a snort of laughter.
Soon Anna returned to the castle to get ready for the ball to begin. Once she spotted Hans again though. The two couldn't stay away from each other the whole night. Dancing, going to the gardens to chat. Anna felt so connected to Hans, like he was destined to be her dream knight in shining armor, he seemed almost like a fairytale. Too good to be true, yet he here he was.
Hans had stayed a few days, and kept going to meet with Princess Anna. After three days he had purposed. And Anna of course said yes.
Now the two would soon be Wed and Anna was ecstatic. She had always wanted a love story, a connection. Something that could hold strong no matter the time or space.
Her parents never explained why but for much of Anna's childhood the gates were kept shut. Even most of her teen years we're spent inside. Those times we're hard to think about. Once her parents had died she felt so alone. They were the closest to her and her only family, her only friends. Other than the servants of the castle of course.
" How do I look then Greta?" Anna spoke to the older servant women in her bride dressing room.
" Oh Anna, aren't you a vision" Greta smiled sweetly at Anna.
Her gown was white with some gold hints and trim. It had a pink flower like design on the top middle part and a few more the bottom on the bottom of of the dress.
“ Thank you, Greta. It feels like I've been waiting for this day for forever.” Anna heard a knock on the door and clumsy almost tripped over her dress as she went to answer it.
“ Careful Anna” Greta said which made the princess laugh a bit embarrassed “ Sorry Greta. I'll be more careful- it was my mother's wedding gown after all.”
“ Hello my love, I found a flower cart earlier this morning, This sunflower bouquet reminded me of your smile.” Hans gave her a bouquet of lavender with orange and yellow sunflowers, and one rose in the mix. “ I thought they'd suite you pretty well.”
“ Oh Hans, there beautiful.” Anna spoke looking down at them with a smile smelling there sweet scent. “ Wait what are you doing here?”
Greta came over “ Now prince Hans, your not supposed to see the bride before the wedding.”
“ Oh but I just couldn't resist Greta.” He took gretas rickley hand and kissed it shortly. He then after Anna put the flowers on the dresser of the room, paused taking both Anna's hands. “ Soon to be my lucky bride.”
Anna and Hans looked at eachother for a moment longer then nessary. Anna then sighed. “ You are handsome in that suit, it's like it was made for you.”
“ It is, the Arendelle royal Taylors made it custom. I wanted to make sure I looked pretty solid so you don't the turn away at the alter.”
Anna laughed slightly. “ We wouldn't want that.”
“ But I don't hold a candle to you Anna.” Hans Said softly, his forehead lightly resting against hers.
“ Oh” Anna giggled lightly blushing. It really was a fantasy she was marrying her fantasy prince.
The wedding soon was under way. Hans waiting at the altar. The wedding was set in the castle. They had it in a room where big events like, cornations, weddings and fancy formal events usually took place in Arendelle.
Anna was in the doorway of the room looking to a picture of her parents on the left side of the wall by the doorway. “ Mother How do I look? This is your wedding dress I kept it, and luckily it fits just fine. I hope I give the look some justice” she laughed slightly before wiping her eyes at a few fresh drops on her face. She glanced at the man beside her mother, an arm around her. “ Father, I found the one, I did it father I found the one for me” she spoke only above a whisper wiping at her eyes “ isn't he handsome?” She looked over at Hans. He really was a site for sore eyes.
His upper half a white dress shirt with some gold and gray designs. His pants are a darker cyan shade of blue. His hair done up a little with some natural curl on the end of his bangs.
The little flower girl no more than seven giggled jumping and twirling around as the little one made it down the aisle.
Anna tried her best not to run up to him from excitement. And instead slow enough but not to slowly made it across the aisle.
She was grinning from ear to ear as Hans gave a soft smile her way as she made it to the altar. The ceremony was indeed underway.
But before Anna could give her vows about how there love was unlike anything she ever could of imagined. Suddenly something shot out between them. And Hans quickly took her and they fell to there knees in shock.
Anna's eyes fell on a big amount of ice now on the altar behind her and Hans.
“ Oh look at that.” A voice that seemed rather cold and uncaring said. “Guess I missed” Anna looked over to a young woman who was beyond anything she had ever seen out of the ordinary. “ Or maybe I just thought I'd steal the attention for a while.” The women looking only a bit older than Anna smirked as the flower girl went to hide behind her mother.
It sure felt chilly suddenly. The woman was in a dark royal blue elegant dress, though some of the dress was tatored covering all the parts it should. And yet if Anna squinted she would see half the dress seemed to be made of ice particles, and don't ask her how but they somehow weren't full on see through. Like the ice and snow was manipulated somehow. Her hair was short and struck up on her head. It seemed to have just a touch of ice to keep her hair sticking up in a weird fashion. She also had a collar on the dress that reminded Anna of a peacock putting out it's feathers. But those indeed we're made of ice almost like those pretty painted on glass windows.
Hans always kept his helm on him. Anna didn't always see why, sure for protection it seemed great. But Hans in a way always seemed on guard, sure he acted calm but Anna never really saw the tension in his shoulders subside, not once.
He pulled out his sword letting out a cry of brutness, their new guest seemed unfazed as he charged at her.
Hans was a very good swordsman but it almost seemed like Elsa knew his every move. And stopped the sword between her fingers after a moment of dodging the attacks made towards her. “ So predictable” The women said not amused at all by the looks of it.
“ Are you really just gonna let a man fight for you, I thought you'd be better than that Anna. Especially considering who the man is.” The ice women scoffed and pushed him to the side with ice-THAT SHOT OUTTA HER HANDS!! She only went to trip him so it was like she purposely missed him.
“ w-wait how- who are you?” Anna said in shock the women's cold stare now on her.
Hans was breathing a bit outta breath he then saw some guards run from outside the room into it.
“ P-perfect timing!” Hans scoffed
“ We're sorry your Highness- She had gotten to many of us, even blew some away literally with her powers- we would have warned you but we were down in arms -” Hans noticed as they we're speaking of course they only spoke to Anna. He was just the prince marrying the heir. He hung his head.
“ Enough” This women said almost to calmly. Ice shot up from the ground toppling the guards down. By this point many of the guests we're in panic and started to ran out from the room.
This person whoever she was, this ice women stepped quietly towards Anna. “ I brought gift for the bride.” She grinned her eyes holding a thrill yet emptiness to them.
Anna backed away so quickly that she fell back against the altar.The women took her hand and pinned her more so she was standing to the altar. Anna cried out in pain as she felt something like ice- maybe it was ice thrusted to her chest. “ Congrats from your Queen, Queen Elsa. And believe me it's quite the gift. I don't give it to just anyone.” Her lips gave a wicked smile.
Hans was the first man down to get up. Running towards his princess. He harshly nudged to Elsa's chest, He didn't miss so at least his efforts weren't in vain. “ Back off my queen!” That line had a dark edge to it that Anna wasn't used to. He kicked Elsa to the ground with a dangerous look in his eyes as he held his sword above her.
“ Hans!!” Anna called and she began crying as it hurt her chest to even speak.
Hans at first looked like his sole focus was on Elsa. But it was almost like he had to drag himself outta the state he was in before looking up at Anna.
That was all Elsa needed Elsa put her legs out from under him, tripping him and making herself a seat of ice and snow, that wasn't much but sturdy enough to get her off the ground. Before starting to walk her way outta the room. “ Tell the king and queen I give my deepest condolences. And no I'm not talking about you two, to the ones upstairs I mean.”
Anna gasped then glared darkly as she got up only to fall back down holding to her chest.
“ Oh and don't worry Anna, it only hurts a lot at first.” She hummed as if she found that somehow funny.
“Oh please don't tell me you all are serious” Elsa said in a way that was sickeningly sweet as the guards blocked the entryway to leave.
Hans sat up as he saw Elsa knock the guards off the ground and to their feet and knocking them out cold literally.He then noticed the crown she wore on her head. No it wasn't made of ice it was a simple regal design, a crown that seemed to come from Arendelle…his gaze was still hard but that crown-
Hans then noticed Anna from behind him and got up running towards Anna still on the ground. “ Anna-” he helped her sit up once he had sat down beside her.
“ H-hans-” Anna Shivered as she was sat up. But his hands around her at least made her feel a little more stable.
“ I shall attack your kingdom in 7 days” Elsa spoke smiling back at them.
“ What?” Anna asked…7 days?
“ 7 days to prepare for my snow army. It's quite a generous amount of time.” Elsa said a matter of factly.
“ What…why are you doing this?” Anna couldn't believe any of this…one her wedding to her perfect prince was ruined. Two She felt cold as ice, her heart feeling almost like a rock. Three this was an attack on the people of Arendelle. From some woman she didn't even know!
“ I mean I could freeze all their hearts, but that would take a long time. Not really worth it- an attack that seems like the best option.I should have made it long ago” Elsa spoke as if any of this made sense.
She then walked out leaving those around and conscious conflicted, and concerned even terrified with the news.
But who was this Queen Elsa….Anna wondered and why was she attacking them?
