My director’s cut on TROS
(AKA how I fix TRoS reusing its own plot. If you want to write an actual fan fiction with this just message me).
Prologue
We discover Snoke was amassing a fleet and projecting ships equipped with Star Killer cannons.
He could achieve this goal because he accessed Palpatine’s old “secret fortess” on Exegol, the planet of the Sith
Kylo Ren gets this informations shortly after becoming Supreme Leader. Hux (now first general) knows this too and gets worried about what this could mean for the whole galaxy
Meanwhile the Knights of Ren have come back from the unknown regions (they were destoying all the Jedi temples and killing every possible Jedi still alive such as Ahsoka)
Kylo goes to Exegol to investigate with the Knights of Ren but the spirits of the Siths (the voices in his head) force him to obey them and convince him to bring to Exegol the last Jedi, Rey, to have the order finally destroyed for good and start a new line of Siths through the Knights of Ren
Kylo, being the Supreme Leader, accepts and tells the Sith he will bring Rey to Exegol. Deep down he wants to turn her and make her supreme leader along with him. He plans to get rid of the Sith Arena too.
The Knights of Ren want desperately to be full Sith so tha will do anything to reach their goal
Act I
The resistance gets a message from a spy that the First Order has found (somehow) an additional fleet to its already vast attack forces. They get to now this fleet is kept on Exegol and will depart in a matter of days
Rey, thanks to the Jedi texts, knows a way to reach Exegol: use a Sith wayfinder. She descovers it may be on Pasaana
Pasaana is the last known planet where a wayfider was forged. The forging (happened thousands of years before) made Pasaana a desert but did not erase life.
Rey + Finn + Poe + 3PO + Chewie travel to Pasaana while Leia and Rose try to assemble an attack fleet with the help of Lando Carlissian
They make it to an old hidden sith temple and retrive the wayfinder
Kylo connects with Rey, understands where she is. He is going alone to try to turn her but the Knights of Ren stops him. Helped by the voices of the Sith they extort Kylo the Rey’s position.
Chewie gets cought, Rey and Kylo fight over the convoy and destroy it, Knights of Ren gets the wayfinder
Rey, Poe and Finn flee from Pasaana. C3-PO was damaged in the process. To save him they need to visit Babu Frick and Zorri Bliss
Act II
C3-PO is restored but the Knights of Ren followed them
Rey, Poe and Finn enters the First Order ship. While searching for the wayfinder, they overhear that Chewie is alive. They split to save Chewie and retrieve the wayfinder
Poe, Finn and Chewie get caught but are saved by a bunch of Stormtropper deserters. One of them is JN-2109, one of Finn’s former friend
They escape. But a ploton of loyalists to the first order blocks them. They call Zorri for help
Rey fights with Kylo and isn’t able to retrieve the wayfinder; he asks her to join him another time but she tells him to revert to the light instead. He has almost answered but Zorri and Babu Frick get the MF in the landing strip and save the day
They rescue Finn, Poe, Chewie and the rogue StormTroopers
Rey has no choice but to flee leaving Kylo behind
The Knights of Ren take this all in and doubt Kylo’s true motives (they thought he wanted to kill Rey alone to take all the glory)
Act III
Rey searches on the texts again but can’t find nothing about other wayfinders
Rey calls Leia to have a confrontation on what to do
Finn hears a voice (Obi-Wan) that tells him they need to go to the relict of the Death Star
Finn tells Rey (in private) he is Force sensitive and they travel to the Death Star
Meanwhile the Knights of Ren are not please with Kylo. They tell him he let Rey go on purpose and send him to kill her to show his true fealty to the first order. They do so because general Pryde found a damaged footage of the day Snoke was killed and, even if it is not clear, it seems Kylo was the one who killed their master, not Rey
The Knights sends him away to make sure he won’t ruin the their plan to become full fledged Sith. They now fly back to Exegol and wait for Kylo
Rey&Co travels to the sea moon of Endor. After some searching they find what could be a secret Sith “room” in the throne room of the Death Star. Only Rey is permitted to enter though, cause only Force users can enter there
Kylo, thanks to the Force bond, can sense where Rey is and flies there
Rey actually discovers another wayfinder but has to face the “ghost” (in reality it is only a security sistem) of the dead emperor. She is lead to believe she is his secret granddaughter and that is destined to be the ruler of the Siths. She faces a Dark version of herself but is able to snatch the wayfinder away
Kylo, after knocking Poe, Finn and Jannah (she was renamed by Poe) off, talks with Rey and explains her his true plan: get rid of the Knights of Ren and be Supreme Leader next to her
Rey is shaken because of the vision she had. She attacks Kylo multiple times to get the wayfinder back.
They fight (Rey is trying to kill him while Kylo defends himself). Kylo has the high ground, he has almost vanquished Rey but he stops: he has gone too far and does not won’t to hurt her
Leia connects with him through the force. He sense her and lets his saber go.
Rey snatches the red saber and hurts him. She senses Leia’s death and the light in Kylo Ren.
She is shocked about her actions. She heals him and takes the wayfinder; using Kylo’s ship, she flies to Exegol
She doesn’t know that the Knight of Ren are waiting Kylo there and are going to slian her
Kylo finally redeemes himself, sees Han, and goes by Ben Solo again
Ben calls for another ship, but not before telling Jannah (that stood up to confront him to save Rey) that the Knights of Ren went to Exegol to launch the new fleet and try to achieve full Sith powers.
Act IV
Poe Finn and Jannah flies back to where the resistance is to inform them of the new plan.
Leia is dead and practically everyone has lost hope
Rose gives an inspiring speech with the help of Poe
Lando comes to them saying he has gathered a modest number of ships
They think about a strategy to block the fleet on Exegol
Meanwhile Rey has gone to Ach-To to have some answers from Luke
Luke appears as force ghost
She asks him why she and Ben are connected
We get a satisfying explanation of the heck a Dyad is
Rey now knows she can truly redeem Kylo and uses Luke old ship to fly to Exegol. She gives the route to the resistance
The Knights of Ren meanwhile have managed to rise the fleet. They ordered Pryde and Hux to come and bring the full armada on Exegol to unite the two and assemble the Star Killer cannons on the old ships
Rey goes inside the cube because she senses a dark presence there. Here the spirits of the Siths try to enter in her head
Rey is found by the Knight of Ren. Sensing she is hanging in the balance between light and dark, they try to revert her to the Dark Side.
She has almost given in when Ben arrives
The Resistence has come to Exegol to stop the First Order Fleet
Pryde tries to destroy them with a Dtar Killer cannon. Hux fights with him to stop him. It is reveled Hux is the spy.
After the resistence successfully enters Exegol’s atmo Hux contacts them and tells them how to destroy the first order ships
Pryde regain consciousness and fires him. Hux dies in a satisfying and not ridicoulus way
Lando comes with others ships from all over the galaxy
Ben and Rey fights the Knight of Ren. The Sith spirits try to overcome them.
The jedis speak to both Rey and Ben and give them the strength they need to kill the Knight of Ren and destroy what remains of the Siths spirits
Rey dies, Ben brings hat back. He is almost dying to but we see Leia’s corpse fade away. Ben hears his mother voice one last time: she gave him enough living force to not stop breathing
The resistence wins and destroys the whole first order fleet
Rey carries Ben to the ship and they reach the base of the resistence
Epilogue
Poe-Finn-Rey reunites and hug each other
Rose gives Chewie his medal. Maz Kanata tells her she will surely be a great general, as Organa and Holdo were.
Ben gets out of the ship
Everyone wants to kill Ben. He says the first word as Ben solo:”I am a monster. Do as it is right.”
Rey explains them that he was manipulated by the Siths all along, since he was a child
There is trial. Ben is exiled on Tatooine & is forbidden to use the force ever again
Rey goes with him. They bury Leia’s and Luke’s lightsabers.
Anakin ghosts shows up and tells them they are the true legacy of the Skywalkers
Poe and Finn gets medals, they officially becomes leading generals.
They ententes the Falcon and before the door closes they share a kiss. Here’s the lgbt kiss we were all waiting for and, if someone has issues with it, they can cut it out in their country but it is still canon.
Senator Rose and senator Janna watch as the Falcon departs through the sky
Zorri and Babu frick giggles as they load a ship to go back home
Rey and Ben watch the double sunset on Tatooine (no yellow light saber because both the Jedi and the Sith orders are now unexisting).
End of the Skywalker saga
Here. I fixed it.
