A blog for reviewing Naruto ocs

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[vargonautic]

And don’t forget it! :D

[naitodenight]

[Naruto fc] Lian Shakunetsu reference sheet

I really made a lot of changes to her design but I really feel comfortable with this one. Finally I feel that incorporates most of the elements that inspired Lian, the main one would be one of my favorite characters: Alice Liddell of Alice Madness Returns. Little by little I am creating a story where I can show you how my character is incorporated into the world of Naruto, or rather in the life of Gaara :)

[beeffizz]

Some drawings of my Naruto OC, Koumori-sensei, during his Anbu days. This was before he lost his sight, obviously.

[its-yotsuba-chan]

Happy Holidays

Hey just came back from the dead to wish you Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays 

[shiroiraiha]

smol Kakashi & Gai because I mean look at them

[its-yotsuba-chan]

Okay, I’m curious and nervous at the same time…let’s just say I had a bad previous experience with a certain OC blog in the past (granted, I’m not the one who asked for commentary from them). Buuuut yeah. Here we go. Name: Kaiya. Here’s a pic: https://pre00.deviantart.net/6cde/th/pre/i/2018/139/4/4/action_kaiya__by_kitsmits-dcbyqiy.png

I’m so sorry that you had to go through that :( 

To tell you the truth I’m very nervous as well hehe. ^^

I want to point somethings before I start:

At the end of the day, it’s your oc and so you don’t have to take anything I say into consideration.

Take your time working on your oc.

Have fun and do what makes you happy :).

I’m going to review her design for now:

I really like her design she very pretty. So I only have a few small suggestions

https://www.deviantart.com/kitsmits/art/Kaiya-New-Reference-Sheet-747936909

I hope that you don’t mind me editing this drawing a little so that I can explain things more clearly.  

1. How does she close her belt? 

2.Colors suggestions

I thought that it would be nice to make her shoes color darker so it  would look different than the color of her gloves and pants 

Maybe change the color of her fishnet to make her top stand out.

Is she left-handed? Most of the characters have their Kunai bags on their right leg. Not that there is something wrong with making her left-handed :D that’s fine. 

I really appreciate the fact that as an Uzumaki she is not a copy of Kushina her hair color is different and even the eyes have a different color.

You could make the shading darker if you want 

Other suggestions 

Now about her hair length, most people would argue that long hair is not good for combat that you can’t do it and it is wrong bla bla bla but to be honest I think it’s subjective. Characters like Mei Terumi and Ino have very long hair. It also depends on your character fighting style. So I see no problem with her hair being long I think it’s fine  

That’s all I have to say I hope I was helpful. Always remember that at the end of the day, it’s your oc have fun and do what makes you happy.

[its-yotsuba-chan]

“ Hi, this is a blog dedicated to Naruto oc or Mary Sues. It's just here to review on some particular sues  and even help others with their characters.I don't take down posts.” 

You're so helpful  

[thecharactercomma]

Your Character: A Masterlist of CC Guides

Character creation and development:

Character creation questionnaire

Character foils

Core values

Core values 2

Creating a character from scratch

How eating an orange reveals character

Fears, weaknesses, and pet peeves

Flaws

Flaws and Vices (list)

Inventory

Nicknames

Outline for a distinct character

Personal effects

7 Key Traits of Enduring Characters

What does your character know?

Your character as a paradox

Your character’s closet

Dealing with large character casts

Types of Character:

Creating a likable villain

Strong Female Characters

Supporting characters

Throwaway characters

Mary Sue / Gary Stu

Loner Characters

Character Arc:

Building a character arc

Series Characters

Steps of change

Swoons and wounds

Character dialogue:

How your character asks for help

Character-specific dialogue

Cursing

Speech patterns

What we say vs. what we mean

Who has control

Relationships:

Power imbalances

Pacing your romance

How to avoid unintentional romantic subtext

On the page:

Creating a strong first impression

An exaggerated first impression

Characterization through appearance

Description

Showing emotion

Staging

Thank God I have (insert character here)

Torturing your Character (and reader)

[very-serious-writing-blog]

Which OC steps on leaves and expects them to make crunchy noises?

[stimman3000]

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[antodonatella]

Genderbender : Shion - [SHOUN] 

I like the new style that I am practicing, I will continue practicing more Here is the male version of Shion, SHOUN, also the female version of Neji If you realize, change the hair style and I guess some details of the clothes, that will be for later

[writersblockbecomesunblocked]

Remember to Change Paragraphs When….

•A new character comes along

•A new event happens

•A new idea is introduced

•The setting changes

•A new person is speaking

•Time moves forward or backwards a lot

•The “camera” moves

[its-yotsuba-chan]

I didn’t mean for this to happen 😅

[its-yotsuba-chan]

Headcanons time

Send me your oc and I will tell you a headcanon about them and you can tell me if it’s accurate or not 

[kugakura]

ヘビの巣 

[valtsv]

[celtic-pyro-deactivated20230725]

When will my reflection show who I am inside?

[more-oc-questions]

Which OC is a hopeless romantic?

Which one is cynical about love?

Which one appears to be cynical, but is secretly a hopeless romantic?