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Rest in Pieces Michael Jones

#rt #MAJOR WARNING:#tazer #tazing #injury #just fyi just in case

brashtea

when ur friend gets the good jelly bean but u had the skunk scent one

#fckin me #rt

isa-ah

i am sinful

#yessssssss #also if u read this #im the study blog that just messaged u btw #idk if u care but ye also idk if ull see this #true hero #homosuck #rt

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#nature #plants #pretty things

novanovelist-deactivated2020060

Essay basics.

See my previous powerpoint post on note-taking and thesis statements for additional advice.

Contact me if you need clarifications.

EDIT: With regard to paragraph structure, I was describing one body paragraph - assertion, context, evidence, commentary - with two slides. Don’t devote an entire paragraph to the assertion and context and another to the evidence and commentary - that’s a little nutty.

spookedword

Good tips, except for the passive voice. It is absolutely right that you should avoid the passive voice, but “was running” isn’t the passive voice, it’s the imperfect tense.

The passive voice isn’t a question of time. It’s about the verb’s effect on the subject. Is the subject performing the verb? Active. Is the verb happening to the subject? Passive.

My mother told me to go buy eggs. Active I was told by my mother to go buy eggs. Passive

The first one is more streamlined and clear. The second one contains all of the same information, but it sounds clunky and awkward. The passive voice does have its uses, but when you’re writing an essay that will be graded very quickly, you want to wrote every sentence in its clearest possible form.

#im taking ap eng lang this year and ap eng lit senior years so aghhhhhh #school #study