Strengthen
In my essay, I will strengthen my point by using clear language and words that are strong but not confusing. I do not want to use too many words however, I also do not want to fall short on the amount of words I use to get my point across. Since we are writing about the concepts we have learned and much more, it is important to revise each part so that you are not repeating yourself over and over again.
I like this approach! Being repetitive has been a struggle of mine so I like the idea of paying close attention to each section to be sure it stands out and flows without repeating yourself.


















