Hate, hate HATE when you're stuck at work all day being excited to write, then when you get home and have all the free time in the world you just.....don't. You still want to, but you don't. Like wtf, type the words bruh
Thank you @diabolical-blue for tagging me in this post!
My Words: struggle, sense, smirk, steal
This is my new WIP I reference in one of my most recent posts. It is a very recent work in progress, so I only could find a couple of the words.
Struggle
Blood and sweat drip onto the hardwood floor as he struggles against the men dragging him out of the chapel. A crooked grin expands across his face, âYou just fucking wait you bastards, Iâve got something coming for you.â
Sense
âWhat do you want to know?â He asks cooly, his cold front not hiding a yearning in his eyes. I sense he desperately craves for someone to care enough to know him - to really know him - and I want to be the one to satiate him.Â
Rules: Post excerpts from your WIP containing the words provided.
My words: look, hear, smell, feel
Your words: struggle, sense, smirk, steal
No pressure tagging: @leahnardo-da-veggie @finickyfelix @michellekarnold @tabswrites @lesleymoonwriter
Though Iâve done this tag game many times for Ambrosia Heights, this will be my first Find the Word tag game for Unfathomable! (Still hoping to get this WIP ready for beta reading soon...may just need one more edit first? Iâm not sure yet.)
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Look
Horrified, Marlo looked over his shoulder. Keeley was gone. His classmates were gone. The sub was gone. He whirled around with agonizing slowness, flailing limbs dragging through the water as he came to grips with the nightmare unfolding around him. His worst fear. He was floating on the edge of the shelf, suspended above the unfathomable depths, and he was all alone.
WellâŠnot completely alone.
He didnât want to look. But once again, something compelled him to turn his head and gaze into the void.
Hear
He snatched up the radio receiver and pressed the button. âKeeley? Are you there now?â
Every second of silence was agonizing. He didnât have time for this. Mom and Dad were waiting for him. Why wasnât Keeley picking up? Couldnât she tell something weird was going on? Was she really that mad at him?
âListen, Iâm sorry about what I said yesterday,â Marlo said, keeping his voice down so his parents wouldnât hear in the next room. âReally, I am. I know you probably donât want to talk to me right now, but this is serious. Please answer if youâre there.â
Smell
Something nearby smelled familiar. Engine oil. The sounds of Tinkerâs Alley were familiar too â the clicking ratchets, the clank of metal, the whir of the engines. Everywhere he looked was some sort of workshop or machine shop or garage or moonpool.
He was surrounded by a million things that reminded him of Keeley, and without anything else to focus on, it was getting harder and harder to ignore.
Feel
âHey, Evie, itâs alright,â he tried to say reassuringly. His voice came out a little higher-pitched than heâd like. âThereâs nothing to be afraid of, remember? Your dadâs place is just up ahead. You can walk that far, canât you?â
Evie shook her head quickly. Marlo sighed. It had occurred to him that his cousin might not be feeling so scared right now if not for the fearful behavior sheâd observed from him, and he felt terrible about that.
âAlright. Come on. Iâll carry you.â He knelt down and hoisted Evie on his hip. Without a word, she threw her arms around his neck and clung to him for dear life.
Everyone wish @jaydove-writes a happy belated birthday!!!
I wrote you a short story about a bad birthday to hopefully make yours the best one yet!
I used Mabel from Gravity Falls as our unfortunate protagonist in this story. I hope you enjoy!
(story below)
âPerfect! Donât you think Waddles?â Mabel says with content as she precisely places the last sprinkle on the eccentric cake she spent all night baking for Dipper.
Her beloved pig, Waddles, oinks - although unable to comprehend her question, Mabelâs face glows anyway as she is delighted by the validation of her efforts. She wraps her arms around his belly, pulling him into a warm embrace, but doesnât allow herself to grow distracted as she checks the time.
Despite the exhaustion from depriving herself of sleep, her selfless heart pumps with adrenaline as she anticipates her twin brother coming home at any moment.Â
Dipper had been distant. Sleepless anxiety ridden nights and misadventures taken alone, the only light being the moonâs beams shining on the cryptic journal he and Mabel have desperately attempted to make sense of.
Mabel, optimistically thought a surprise party would pull Dipper out of whatever funk he has been in. For weeks she crafted decorations until her hands were cramped with fatigue and purple bags appeared under her tired eyes; but with willpower, love, and the presence of their friends - she made it happen. The only step left in achieving the best party for the best brother in the world is for him to walk through the door.
Usually after these nightly misadventures, Dipper trudges through the door at 6 am - disappointed and exhausted. Being a minute until the top of the hour, Mabel zips into the main room. âEveryone hide! He will be here any minute!â She yells, toting the homemade birthday cake.Â
As everyone finds a place to take cover, Grunkle Stan sinks into his dilapidated yellow chair - scratching the whiskers on his chin.
Mabelâs heart beats profusely against her ribs as she anticipates her brotherâs arrival.
A minute goes by.
Then two..
ThreeâŠ
Before she knows it, thirty gruesome moments of silence pass - no Dipper.
âMabel, I am sorry, but I have to go.â Wendy says regretfully, running her hand through her thick ginger hair.
âWait! He will be here any minute. I know it!â Mabel pleads.
Wendy frowns and glumly waves as she steps out the front door. âI really am sorry Mabel.â
One by one, the party guests leave as the time passes without Dipper showing face. Mabelâs excitement turns cold as her plans fall flat. Her chest aches and tears cloud her eyes as everyone but Soos and Gruncle Stan remain.
âSorry dude,â Soos empathizes, as Mabel wipes her tears with the sleeve of her knitted sweater.
âHow âbout we have some of that cake you made. It is your birthday too, ya know?,âGruncle Stan suggests.
Before Mabel can respond, the door knob turns and a bright eyed Dipper bolts through the door. âYouâll never believe it!â He exclaims.
Mabelâs tears overflow as the final piece of her plan arrives - but far too late.
Dipperâs smile fades and he untucks the journal from underneath his arm, laying it down carefully. âWait, Mabel, whatâs wrong?âÂ
She pushes the cake into his hands.Â
Her palms, coated with icing and sparkles, cool her cheeks as she tries to hide the tears that wonât stop coming. As she escapes into her room, unable to control her sobs, Dipper beholds his sisterâs act of love and appreciation melting in his hands. The purple icing drips onto the floor and a droopy âHappy Birthday Dipperâ hand piped by Mabel, slips off the edge with it.Â
Overwhelmed by confusion and concern, Dipper faces Soos and Gruncle Stan who meet his gaze with disappointment.Â
âHappy Birthday Dipper, I hope you got what you wanted.â Gruncle Stan grumbles before abandoning the comfort of his favorite chair, and leaving Dipper left to sit with pieces of his sisterâs broken heart.
I am reentering the world of writing fanfictions and oneshots. YAY!
I am doing this for fun and to make a little extra on the side to fund my writing aspirations. I do have a few membership tiers open if anyone is interested in creating a little community with me :))
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