Redesign and rewrite "Yandere Simulator" (Ayano, Taro, Info-chan)
Hello everyone, my name is Lottie and today I will be redesigning Ayano Aishi, Taro Yamada and Info-chan from Yandere Simulator. But before I start the redesign I will first explain what is wrong with character design and backstories.
What's wrong with their design?
1.Ayano Aishi:
I'll say it straight away, in this game she looks (in my opinion) literally cute, I don't even know why. But in this picture she looks, ah... Boring and a bit illogical.
Okay, let me explain why: because I don't like the hair color and I don't even understand why her hair is gray, and if you can make her hair darker and that's it. The uniform, I don't like her and that's it. Also, casual... Not bad at all, but I wanted to replace the skirt with shorts.
2.Taro Yamada
I don't like its design because... Just look:
I have two questions:
First: How? The question is HOW, 10 RIVALS ARE IN LOVE WITH HIM?!! IS HE SO UGLY AND BORING!!! (Okay, maybe they're in love with him because they think he's cute and innocent. But that is NOT an explanation, why?)
Second: Why does Taro look like a female version of Ayano? They look like siblings and it's weird...
3.Info-chan
You know, I adored this character but at the same time I hate her, because why? But listen to me more carefully: because first of all, for me the design is quite good, but the nuance is that her design is boring anyway. Secondly: Do you know why I hate her? Because she's interested in women's panties.
And I wonder why not money? Why women's panties? Just... Why?
What's wrong with the character description?
1.Ayano Aishi
Okay, the character description is not bad, but the main question is: what is the problem with not calling Aisha's condition but simply emotional numbness or alexethemia?Because it is quite logical in a real state, than it is better to call the state of Aisha (and okay I understand it was called this state because it was passed down from others in Aisha's family, but that will not stop me and I will consider THIS not logical).
2.Taro Yamada
What do we know about him? And what do we know? The only thing we know is: 10 rivals and Ayano in love with him for no reason, he has a best friend since childhood and an incest younger sister, a bookworm, sits on his ass in a fountain, reads books and admire the cherry blossom tree, listens to classical music, and he also looks like Yandere Dev. That's all, nothing more.
3.Info-chan
What about Info-chan? The only thing we know is this:Watching the students through the cameras and with Ayano's help getting rid of 10 rivals and that's it... More... Nothing. In two words: Clichรฉd character.
Well, we finally got to the redesign and rewriting of the character. So let's begin.
What did I change/fix?
1.Ayano Aishi
First I made her skin paler because I can. Also her skinny because that figure doesn't suit her because she doesn't always feel hungry and that's why she rarely eats (For example: twice a day). I decided to make the hair color darker because... I don't see that she has dark hair, and I also decided to make the hairstyle more cute like Yuri from "The Girl from Nowhere". She also decided to change her eye color from black to dark purple like her father's (fun fact: when she feels emotion, her eyes sparkle and her irises become brighter). As I already said, I DON'T LIKE this uniform, so I decided to change it, as you can see in the picture, I changed the color of the school shoes from black to brown and also added the school logo to the uniform. As I said, her casual clothes are not bad at all for me, but unfortunately I decided to change her casual clothes to the ones you see in the picture.I also wanted to add that: Ayana's dad noticed her behavior: when she just sits there without reacting to it, just looking at the wound on her leg, of course he wanted to find out from the doctors, and of course the doctors diagnosed her with emotional numbness. Fun fact: Aisha's family tree they also have emotional numbness but it happens differently: some from birth, some later, and for some it started with a childhood trauma.
2.Tara Yamada
So I decided to make him cute and attractive. How? Now I'll explain, let's start with the hair. I decided to change the hairstyle because the original version looks boring. I changed the eye color from black to pale yellow (because it's be like black cat vibe). Added a couple of elements: Piercings on the ear and on the lower lip, two moles under one left eye, glasses. Also changed the uniform you can see in the picture, everything is the same with school shoes and school log. And the same crap is on the casual, so you can see in the picture. But the main question is, where did they meet? Well, it all started with Ayano trying to find a history book to find information and not fail a test and Taro noticed this and decided to help her because of it She has new feelings and emotions, and this is love. I want to point out that Ayano is NOT stalking Taro, but rather communicating with him. Also an interesting fact: just so you understand that Taro and Osana are two cats, Taro is a black cat and Osana is an orange cat.
3.Info-chan
Well, for the rest of Info-chan. Let's start with the fact that I wanted to change her hairstyle and hair color, that is, I made her hair shorter and the color cherry or dark red. I decided not to give her a uniform (because she doesn't study here in high school), but just gave me different clothes like the one in this picture. Changed the color of the glasses from red to gray-blue. Also her real name:Mishiranu Hito (Translated means: Unknown). Her biological parents died in a car accident when she was 2 months old, and of course a journalist found out about the incident and took Mishiranu into his care. Also interesting fact: Ayano and Mishiranu were best friends since childhood, but then Ayano never saw her again, and then when Info-chan turned 16, she finally saw Ayano but didn't want to reveal it her name because she doesn't want Mishiran to know that she is Info-chan, why? Because Mishiranu knows who ruined the life of the non-biological father.
Also forgot to add that:
That Ayano, Info-chan, and Taro are not 18 because they are not of legal age, so that's it.
P.s:And don't worry, there will be art soon.
