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This is a re-done version of the first 3 volumes of Shut Hell. Done by me - Relissi
I DID IT.
Here are the new versions of the first 3 volumes of Shut Hell with all the grammar and some phrasing corrections done!
The Odyssey (2026) a short review.
9.3/10
Very good!
It wasn't a 1:1 adaptation of the Odyssey but I was actually okay with this take on things. Especially considering I went in grumpy about the bronze age Aegean soldiers where essentially roman kit.
The sound design is phenomenal! I cannot stress this enough. The movie is worth seeing just for the score and the sound design. Itās all great. There this particular leitmotif that signals that one of the gods is near that sounds like a mix of static and the cracking laser noise that large bodies of frozen water make and its awesome.
I FOUND IT (SEE END OF POST)
This is the sound. It plays multiple times during the film and itās always right as the gods are showing their presence.
Also, I recognized a few pieces of jewelry as replicas of actual bronze age finds. Two of note being Penelope's necklace and her earrings so that was neat.
Highly recommend.
And the HORSE omg what a fucking amazing rendition of the horse, the whole scene is fucking great. Troy having to pull it out of the waves, that whole scene was so fucking good. Theres this part where they drop a torch over the wall of troy and it lights up the greeks waiting AND ITS SO FUCKING COOL. Also the scene with circe and her changing the men is ughhhh very well done and awful. and the cyclops *chefs kiss*
Tom Holland was probably the weakest overall and he was still top notch. I was wary about Matt Damon as Odysseus but he was great! And Hamish Patel was definitely a stand out for me. Robert Pattinson really plays a great sniveling weasel. 10/10 would hate him as a coward again.
Personally I LOVED the choice for Helen even if the poem mentioned her as fair I believe. She was there for all of a few minutes screen time and it was great. Same goes for Elliot Page he did great with his small role. Menelaus was did a very good job too. And ugh the death scene for Agamemnon. Holy fuck that was so good. The colors in that scene it was beautiful and I canāt help but think the way they shot it reminded me of one of the paintings of Judith killing Holofernes
Gah I could talk about the framing of the scenes for forever right now. Iāll stop. No one more, the set locations were ABSOLUTLY GORGEOUS AND STRIKING AND I WANT TO GO TO ALL OF THEM
Anywhoozlebee, I highly recommend and especially in imax. I have no Idea how the editors panned the footage for the regular showing, hopefully they did a good enough job, but there are quite a few scenes where there's something visually interesting going on everywhere on screen.
I'm going again this coming Thursday. I need to see it one more time in imax before that version is fucking gone forever (which is bullshit btw)
If the sound team loses any awards this next award season they were robbed. and thats coming from someone who thought Backrooms sound team was a shoe-in for winning.
In this scene, Clark says "Can you imagine how good that must feel?"
"There's no thoughts, no pain, no ego. No fear. They simply exist. Like furniture."
But then when he turns the light off, the wheelchair user turns his lamp on. When Mary hits The Pirate with the concrete piece, he yells in pain. Clark consoles The Pirate as though its feelings might be hurt. And when the memory of his wife sees The Pirate, she tries desperately to get away.
They have every one of those things. He just refuses to see their interiority. Like he always did. Like he refused to understand why his wife would kick him out, and keeps refusing, even now that he can see that she was terrified of him. Cause she's always been just furniture to him.
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They're both so fucking funny
Itās a special form of hell as a reader when a serialized thing youāve been reading for literal years update after update all the sudden takes a turn re-contextualizing the story as a whole and just completely ruining it for you.
Iāve built a tough skin to this being a reader of fanfiction, but every once in a while itāll sneak up on me and then BAM! I now feel like Iāve wasted unbelievable amounts of time.
Based on my experience as a Titania main.
And of course Hello Kitty.
And then you canāt even say shit about bc people start trying to put you in a jacket and shit. Like omg itās so strict???
Iām nervous this next story quest is going to somehow either be āeither orā or āsomething something drifter onlyā despite the ābig badā literally being Adis.
What Iām hoping for is:
Wally keeps attacking Lotus therefore the Drifter stays nearby because void laces Lotus arm thatās grafted to them.
What I, unfortunately, could see DE do:
NOIR is no place for a CHILD, the OPERATOR is but a SMOL LITTLE BEAN who can be allowed to SEE such HORRORS. Itās not like theyāre so MASS MURDERING, ANCIENT SOLDIER chalked-full of CONDITIONING or something wears MEAT PUPPETS around and has to constantly soothe said MEAT PUPPETS trauma addled brains.
NOIR has SEX TALK and INNUENDO and *gasps* DRUG REFERENCES not to mention that thereās GAMBLING in tau! D:
Iām just tired of the original protagonist getting sidelined by the AU!OC!MC2.0 amd put in a box labeled āchild forever, for all time no matter how much they go throughā
But also and more likely is itāll be yet another part of the story where itās either or which, given the player demographics on operator vs drifter usage means the operator will hear about Adis secondhand.
Hopefully Iām just completely wrong on this.
My last worry is that somewhere down the line Adis becomes a romance partner for the drifter. lol wouldnāt that be totally fucked. āHey so Iām dating the person who have their soul to you but also Iām dating the cause of the genocide of his people lol tee heeā
I feel the need to add that Iām not looking for the Op to have a romantic interest. Honestly they read totally aroace to me. BUT if there was ever going to be one Adis and the Op are like the best way to do that without it being weird in my opinion.
Anyways thatās my rant I guess
But.. she wants to be a hero :(
being a f!byleth fan is so hard because you'll see the most beautiful fanart of her ever and also that fucker dimitri is there too
On Monday one of the floaters came to me saying āhey do you want any time off this week Iām looking for shifts.ā
I said sure what the hell and took my last shift of the week of (tomorrow night) because why not free longer weekend.
He confirms it, sends it to all the management people.
THEN TONIGHT
Motherfucker has the audacity to call my manager during his shift and say he canāt do my shift tomorrow night. No communication to me whatsoever.
So Iām calling his bullshit. I just sent an email with his previous confirmation email attached, to my supervisor, my manager, the float workers manger and my managers manager. Asking for āclarificationā as to who exactly now needs to look for coverage for tomorrowās shit, given he confirmed heād take it ON MONDAY.
Either way, they now all know he didnāt even have the courtesy to inform me why he suddenly couldnāt. Iām not letting him get away with any of his bullshit scot free
Holy shit am I irritated. What a bastard.
Also! Apparently heās DONE THIS BEFORE TO MY MANAGER PERSONALLY. And my manager was just like āoh okay :(ā
Like what the hell dude stand up for yourself.
So, after clearing out the map area, setting up outposts and supply lines and aid etc etc we beat the big bad and....
All decide to go to one location for a party? During which an entirely new faction 'steals' the president who just go his briefcase macguffin back and takes over all of the DC area in a single evening and now I'm supposed to what reconquer everything AGAIN.
I wasn't expecting much from a game with the most blah plot ever but Jesus Christ.
Obvious evil president is obvious.
We just all go hit with the stupid stick and left EVERYTHING UNGUARDED
What a way to kill any want to play further.
I will, because this is my exercise game for exercising too. But good god what a lame plot point.
The only interesting mission has been the OSS bunker.
Oh well, it keeps my attention well enough to make me forget I'm exercising so I'll leave it at that.
Sure would be cool if ānoā was respected more.
Itās pushed and pushed and pushed everywhere and in everything.
When was the last time an electronic let you say no to something? No now itās āremind me laterā
I was just on twitter and there was this clip from some anime and in it character 1 is trying to recruit character 2 and character to says out loud no, no, go away, and leave me alone. Then starts to run away before eventually attacking character 1 in order to scare her off.
Its such a dumb thing to be essentially triggered by but for fuck sakes she said no leave her the fuck alone.
Or the EUās no chat surveillance law where they fuck voted it down said no twice then some fuck change the procedure so now it had to be majority voting it down otherwise it becomes law. Why is that allowed? Why is everything just an application of force?
Itās so fucking frustrating to see peopleās autonomy anonymity etc all just taken away by others.
The way no is so easily made a suggestion argh AHHHH
I fucking hate it here
Itās always the fucking drifter huh?
No I get it, the drifter literally has her arm it makes sense that theyād be the one to pull the Lotus out,
Still.
Also obvious Adis was obvious. I called that back with the teaser.
Itās a shame they were lied to by Wally.
Also damn why is Albrecht always so fucking hot. Look how messy he is. (I say this asexually as an ace) but his voice is just oomf so good.
Also we might finally get to know how fucking long itās been since the old war which would be neat.
Other thoughts
New Matt Mercer frame seems fun. Although Iām not sure I like this trend of more and more frames having survived with their minds intact. It cheapens the Stalker and Umbra. Jade I was fine with. And the boys make sense because they were never really human to begin with except in the womb. Although I guess if anyone couldāve figured it out it would be Entrati. Idk I like the body horror of these were people and the process to make them this destroyed them.
I LOVED all the different Sentients (Especially big dancer lady šš„¹)
Also FINALLY a populated city area. Sure most of it is in the background but thatās still cool
ALSO THE BANSHEE SKIN OMG FUCK HOLY WOW AND A REWORK
ALSO FROST LADY YAY!
I hope sheās a āice queenā
Also I like that we seem to be using the big people from the labs again
Qorvex skin looked sick too I havenāt played him much tho
Soul frame looked fun, Iām still gonna wait a bit longer before diving in.
I will admit I am bummed we will see tau before there were unique tile sets for each solar system planet but honestly that wasnāt likely anyways
Amirwave sounds neat
I think thatās all I have to say
still be thinking about her. shadow monster emily my beloved
I haven't the slightest clue what's going on here but I'm a fan of the general unhinged energy