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i’ve found i need a bigger text box than the one in the spacing generator by byluna, though this was most definitely inspired by it. other sites with text editors have distracting colors and look very cluttered so i decided to do something about it ^^
this is a full sized editor, simple and minimal to avoid any distractions with a wide text box and adjustable height.
the options supported by tumblr / that you can use to format your replies are:
source: copy and paste the code for your reply
B I U S : bold, italics, underlined and strike
styles > small : make text small
format: headline 1 and headline 2, h2 is the most commonly used headline
text color: like this. find the hex code for any color you want here.
numbered / bullet points
blockquotes
image (it has to be uploaded to tumblr!)
formatter link here!
i hope this is helpful ! liking and reblogging to share is appreciated ♡
updates log:
sept 7, 2022: general updates + night mode toggle + 2 text box options. log here.
sept 29, 2022: created a new version hosted on carrd instead of tumblr, which provides a better mobile responsive layout but can be used on desktop as well.
feb 10, 2023: mobile and desktop versions have been merged into one. read post here.
oct 6, 2025: removed warnings about bugs in the legacy editor from this post as the legacy editor has fully phased out at this point.
How to write liars
Liars make stories twist, characters clash, and readers question everything. But not all liars are created equal. If you're writing one, ask yourself: what kind of liar are they? Because there’s more than one way to deceive…
Many types of liars
the one where you know they are lying
the one where you never know that they are lying
the one who lies about everything
the one who lies to themself
Writing Tips:
Know why they lie
Every liar has a reason. Is it survival, manipulation, shame, love, power, or habit? Understanding their motive helps you shape their behavior and emotional responses.
Use subtext and contradictions
Liars rarely say "I'm lying." Instead, they contradict themselves, dodge questions, or over-explain. Let their words and actions subtly clash.
Let the lie shape the plot
A good lie should ripple through the story. It creates misunderstandings, false alliances, and dramatic irony. Use it to mislead characters and readers.
Use silence
Sometimes the most powerful lie is omission. What a character doesn’t say can be just as revealing as what they do.
Play with perspective
Use unreliable narrators or shifting POVs to blur the line between truth and fiction. This keeps readers guessing and deepens the mystery.
Show consequences
How are characters reacting to someone lying to them? What happens if people find out a character lied?
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Writing Ideas: Good vs. Evil Plot Twists
A supporting character is an intruder working for the villain.
It is revealed that the hero has an unheroic past.
The hero and villain each live dual lives — one where they are the hero and another where they are the villain.
The hero ends up being revealed as the true villain.
The hero is one of a triplet trio.
The hero is related to the villain.
The hero must die to save everyone else.
The narrator is the villain telling the hero's story.
The narrator is the hero telling the villain's story.
The opening hero is killed within the first act.
The protagonist is both the hero and the villain.
The strength of a character is actually their greatest weakness.
The supportive friend is the killer.
The villain ends up being revealed as the true hero.
The villain has a change of heart but has driven the hero too far over the edge and must stop them.
The villain is a twin of the hero.
The villain is an evil clone of the hero.
The villain is in love with the hero.
The villain is revealed to have been right under the hero's nose the whole time.
Two villains are two of a triplet trio — the hero is the third.
Your character is a superhero that lost their powers.
Source ⚜ More: Notes & References ⚜ Writing Resources PDFs
I’m stuck on a scene. I know what needs to happen, but every time I try to write it, it stalls. What can I do to get unstuck?
Every time I get one of these questions, I’m shocked at how relatable they all are! This is such a common thing that affects all writers. The moment your fingers hover over the keys and… nothing. It’s frustrating, and it can completely sap any creative momentum you had going!
The benefit of this being a common issue is that you can know for certain that you’re not alone. You’ve joined the ranks of hundreds of thousands of writers before you who have all had this shared experience. And the even better news is, we’ve all found our way through it!
So here are some tips for getting your groove back if you’re feeling stuck on a scene.
First: diagnose the block
Before you try to force yourself to write, figure out what’s actually wrong. Are you blocked because of something personal, or are you blocked because of something in the scene you’re trying to write? Different problems need different solutions.
Personal blocks
Perfectionism paralysis: fixating on the “perfect” scene so hard you don’t write; fear of imperfection can get you stuck before you even start.
Analysis paralysis: overthinking plot/motivations/research until you avoid drafting; second-guessing yourself is a surefire way to stop yourself from writing.
Fear of starting: the blank page intimidates; infinite possibilities stall commitment and trigger procrastination.
If you’re stuck because of general writer’s block, we have some resources to help.
Scene blocks
The stakes are mushy: if nothing truly matters, there won’t be any tension. Revisit your stakes. Readers must feel the cost.
The goal is vague: if your character doesn’t have a reason for their actions, you’ll struggle to write. Make sure you know your characters’ goals and how the scene feeds into them.
The scene starts too early: you might have too much filler, so you struggle to get to the meat of the scene. If that’s the case, just freewrite, but consider cutting out the fluff you started with so the scene starts at a more active moment.
The conflict is external-only (or internal-only): pure action or pure reflection can stall your writing progress. Make sure your character has both internal and external conflicts that drive them.
You don’t know your character well enough: if their motives feel foggy, the scene will too. Make sure you have a grounded sense of who all your characters are.
Quick exercises to get unstuck
When it comes to writing exercises, their job is to stop you getting stuck and to generate ideas. So if you’re struggling with a scene, and don’t know how to proceed, hare are some writing games and exercises you can do to jumpstart your creativity. They might not end up being the actual scene, but they should help get some ideas flowing.
1) Clarify the scene’s job
Write one sentence: “This scene exists to _____.” Fill it with a verb and outcome (e.g., “force Maya to lie to her sister to save her job”). If you can’t, the scene might not be worth writing to begin with. Clarity of purpose can stop you from getting stuck.
2) Set a micro-stakes timer
Try a quick writing game. Give your protagonist a 10-minute deadline inside the scene (even if it’s unlikely to make it into the finished manuscript), like a call they must answer, a train they must catch, a boss walking toward their desk. Time pressure creates urgency, and creating artificial stakes can get you writing again.
3) Switch the power dynamic
If your character currently has the upper hand in the scene, flip it. Make them need something from someone who won’t give it. If they’re the underdog in the scene, switch the dynamic to give them more power. Power shifts create conflict, and conflict creates ideas.
4) Dialogue-only draft
Strip the scene to lines of dialogue. No description, no tags. Let characters argue, bargain, reveal, or conceal. You’ll surface the conflict fast if all your characters are doing is talking to each other. Then layer back action and setting when you’re ready to dive back into writing.
5) Write the ending first
Decide how the scene changes the story. A revelation? A broken promise? A new secret? Write the conclusion first, then reverse-engineer the steps you need to get there.
6) Change one variable
Keep the same goal, but shift a single element, like the location, the time of day, the weather, who shows up, or what your character is wearing. Small changes can unlock new ideas.
Structure-level solutions
Beat it out (lightly)
Outline 5–7 story beats. Each beat should move toward the goal, stakes, or conflict. If a beat doesn’t move toward any of those, cut it out, or combine it with another. Then write beat-by-beat rather than the whole scene in one go.
Use “doorways”
Give the scene an entry and exit:
Entry: What interrupts the status quo?
Exit: What can’t go back to how it was?
These doorways bookend a scene. If you know how it starts, and how it must end, you just need to take the steps to get from one door to the other.
Escalate, don’t repeat
Sometimes, the biggest problem a scene will have that results in getting stuck is pacing. You need to raise the stakes.
A lot of getting stuck ends up because of repetition, especially if you know your character really well. If they make a choice, then it’s likely they’d make the same choice again. So, if your character attempts the same tactic twice, the second try must cost more or risk more.
If the scene still won’t move…
Cut to the decision
Skip the lead-up. Start on the line where your character chooses something (yes, no, leave, confess). Many scenes only become interesting at the moment of climax, so as long as you know how it will end, you can write that and move on, fleshing it out in revision if required.
Brackets and move on
Leave a placeholder: [X happens; Jamie ends up owing Rafi a favour]. Keep drafting. When it comes to revision, you’ll return to your placeholder with fresh context and better instincts.
Merge or delete
Two lukewarm scenes can become one strong scene if you combine the essential beats. Keep the essentials, but cut the fluff. If the story still works without the scene, consider cutting it entirely. Leaner is often stronger.
Getting stuck isn’t a flaw! It’s your brain giving you feedback. Scenes can stall when goals blur, the stakes don’t matter, or the conflict just isn’t interesting enough. Adjust those elements, and you’ll find it easier to get unstuck. You don’t have to write the perfect the moment in your first draft, you just have to give it momentum.
Common Horror Tropes
Good horror stories can still follow a formula, but great horror stories make it their own. Common horror tropes include:
Nightmare on Halloween. The one day of the year where the dead walk the earth is a prime set up for any ghost story.
Conjuring evil. A demon or evil spirit is summoned via a game (like a Ouija Board) or reading of an incantation, leading to a possession or haunting that wreaks havoc on the lives of all who play or dare get involved.
Found footage. Movies like The Blair Witch Project and Cloverfield, which feel like regular people recording unexplainable real-life events from a handheld camera, giving the audience an up-close and personal account of a terrifying ordeal from the main character’s own point of view.
Alone in a dark house. Abandoned or haunted houses are an extremely popular subgenre of horror. Fear of the unknown—what lurks around when the lights go out—is one of the most commonly used tropes in horror. We’ve all seen a character make the bad choice and go down a darkened staircase in a house they’ve never been in. We don’t know what’s down there, but we assume only bad things, and we feel that same pang of anticipation and anxiety.
The bad guy who won’t die. Like Michael Myers in Halloween or the serial killer in Scream, it’s scary to audiences when there’s no way to stop a bad guy, or the false relief of having vanquished them, only to see them come back in the final scene (or next installment in the franchise). Persistent danger and evil leaves your audience on edge, removing the idea that no one is safe, not even after the story ends.
Dead cell phones. They never used to be a problem in the horror world, however, it’s not all that scary when something is chasing a character and they suddenly call 9-1-1 with full bars and are saved by the police. Getting rid of the easy way out allows readers and viewers to come along on the ride with the character, and experience the panic they feel.
Splitting up. Writers love to do this in horror because it’s a chance to get their characters alone. Even against better judgment, characters will venture off to investigate a sound or mysterious presence alone, tapping into a great anxiety for viewers and readers who would most likely not want to be by themselves in a similar situation.
Tips for Avoiding Clichés in Your Horror Writing
More Writing Notes: Horror
Horror is a genre of literature, film, and television that is meant to scare, startle, shock, and even repulse audiences. The key focus of a horror novel, horror film, or horror TV show is to elicit a sense of dread in the reader through frightening images, themes, and situations.
In the horror genre, story and characters are just as important as mood and atmosphere. A horror story often shocks and provokes with its exploration of the unknown.
Subgenres of Horror Novels
Gothic: horror novels that focus specifically on death.
Paranormal: horror novels involving ghost stories or supernatural horror events that do not exist within the context of scientific explanation.
Occult: horror novels about ritual practices that are not considered religion or science.
Dark fantasy: horror novels that blend dark elements of fantasy.
Survival: horror novels in which the main character is being hunted and trying to survive within their circumstances.
Science fiction horror: horror novels that blend elements of science fiction.
Tips for Writing a Horror Novel
Pull ideas from real life and your own experiences. Reach back into your childhood memories and recall things that used to scare you or think of things you love and put a creepy spin on them. (This always works for Stephen King.)
Write the book title first. Most writers start with the idea for a story and figure out the title later. Try doing the opposite. Titles are great ways to quickly come up with a number of different ideas that can grow into an entire story.
Write the ending first. It may not always be possible, but once you start writing it makes it easier to fool people from the very beginning of the story and skillfully direct their attention away from what they think the ending will be.
Hook the reader right away. Start with a shocking first chapter to set the tone and quickly introduce the who, what, when, and where of the story. Putting the key elements into play early allows the rest of the plot to unfold.
Use cliffhangers. Pique the reader’s interest in events to come and compel them to keep reading to see what happens next.
Add plot twists. Carrying the reader through the middle of a story is challenging, and there needs to be enough excitement to keep them reading to the end. An unexpected plot twist can help.
Plant a false lead or throw in a red herring. Include details that purposefully mislead the reader and prevent them from predicting the outcome.
Borrow from your influences. You can generate a lot of ideas by absorbing story concepts from other authors. Watch horror movies and read other horror books to improve the quality of your writing. Find a horror writer you admire and study their body of work. How do they tackle things like surprises, twists, and cliffhangers? How do they set the mood and create suspense?
Classic Horror Novels & Short Stories to Read
For further inspiration, track down these great horror stories:
Frankenstein by Mary Shelley (1823). A horror novel about a scientist who accidentally creates a monster when his experiment goes horribly wrong.
Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde by Robert Louis Stevenson (1886). A horror novel about a man who drinks a serum and transforms into his sinister alter ego, a wild, unpredictable killer.
Dracula by Bram Stoker (1897). A gothic horror novel about a vampire who wants to spread the undead curse to as many people as possible.
The Rats in the Walls by H. P. Lovecraft (1924). A classic example of Lovecraftian horror, a horror genre that emphasizes man versus nature short story about human cannibalism.
Psycho by Robert Bloch (1959). A horror novel about the caretaker of a motel in the middle of nowhere who commits a series of gruesome murders.
The Exorcist by William Peter Blatty (1971). A horror novel about a young girl who gets possessed by an evil demon.
It by Stephen King (1986). A horror novel about a group of kids who are terrorized by an evil being that hunts them by transforming into what scares them.
The Corn Maiden and Other Nightmares (2011). A collection of spooky short stories by Joyce Carol Oates.
History of the Horror Genre in Literature
The horror genre in literature dates back to Ancient Greece and Ancient Rome, where horror stories explored themes related to death, demons, evil spirits, and the afterlife. Examples include:
The ancient Greek tragedy Hippolytus by Euripides, a gruesome story about how jealousy and a lack of empathy can lead to tragedy; and Parallel Lives by Plutarch, a series of biographies highlighting the many moral failures of man.
The gothic novel, a genre of horror that focuses specifically on death, originated in the eighteenth century and is exemplified by the author Edgar Allan Poe.
Horror literature in the 19th century and 20th centuries often focused on tales involving occult ideas, like Mary Shelly’s Frankenstein (1818) or Bram Stoker’s Dracula (1897).
Modern horror novels have expanded the genre to include new elements and contemporary themes, like serial killers and slasher stories—Stephen King’s The Shining (1977) is a perfect example—as well as genre mashups that combine horror with historical fantasy, and modern interpretations of fantastical creatures, like ghosts, vampires, werewolves, and witches.
Source ⚜ More: References ⚜ Writing Resources PDFs ⚜ Part 1
This obviously needed its own post and here it is, a collection of blog posts and resources I have found and used for my own writing, I hope they help you too! Go forth and write that spice!
The Smut Writers Dictionary By @maybeeatspaghetti Seriously, how many different way are there to write cock? Does anyone else wonder if they've used the word 'lips' too many times? Well, this is a good place to start!
The Ultimate Guide to Writing Smut This is the first one I found and I go back to it frequently! There's also some great information about specific areas of sex that may not be common knowledge for first time writers!
How to Write Smut By @urfriendlywriter Another great source of information from different verbiage to use and a few tips to hel you along (giggity)
Smut Thesaurus By @prurientpuddlejumper just what it sounds like and you can never have too many words at your disposal.
6 Steps to Writing Better Sex By @chaoschaoswriting If you're at a loss or just want some more help this is antoher fantastic blog!
Writing Prompts NSFW By @seidenbros Need some dialogue? Or a story idea? Have a look!
#100 NSFW/Smut Dialogue Prompts By @a-cure-for-writers-block More? More. This is also a fantastic writing blog with lots to offer!
Intimate + Sexual Headcannon Questions By @petalsprompts Good questions to ask your characters to get to know them better and make more well rounded characters!
Smut & Mature (18+) Master List By @pendarling A great list dialogue prompts, scenarios, and helpful bits!
Poly NSFW Alphabet By @smaoineamhsalach Another great way to get to know your characters and maybe a handful of ideas for story ideas.
Kink Prompts Another from the previous blogger above and I didn't know what half of these are! I'll work on a kink dictionary next!
Writing Smut 101: Overcoming Smut Shame @slightlyrebelliouswriter23 There's a lot to be said for this particular subject! It's hard to write stuff like this, so how do you get over it? Start here!
How to Write a Kiss Scene By @youneedsomeprompts Yes!!! I still struggle with this one! There's a thousand ways to kiss, find your favorite!
Smut Oneliners By @deity-prompts you can never have enough one-liners!!
How to Write a (Great) Sex Scene Another great article for new smut writers
9 Tips for Writing Steamy Scenes More tips to help you wirte good steamy stuff!
How to Write Erotica and a Damn Fine Sex Scene A WEALTH if information on writing, structuring, and helpful tips!
@saradikahas a fantatic blog with graphics for you to use to add some fun to your posts. Things like MDNI Banners, 18+ Content Warnings, Support Your Favorite Writers and Reblog banners! They are free to use but she does ask that you reblog her stuff if you do! She's also a very talented writer and she writes some AMAZING Din Djarin stories!
Gay Sex Positions Guide This is a WONDERFUL adition and thank you so much @b7bubby for bringing this to my attention, I didn't have any resources for writing M/M fairings but this is a much needed addition to the spicy community! i've never written an M/M pairing and I feel like such an idiot for overlooking the need for a resource like this!
Writing the Perfect Kiss Scene provided by @writers-potiona fantastic little guide to writing better kisses!
If you find any other great smut writing resources feel free to tag me so I can add them to this list! Good luck with your writing! Now go write that story and LET THE SPICE FLOW!!!!
No matter what type of fantasy world you're writing, it's easy for the setting to feel one-note if you don't practice worldbuilding.
Hand-to-Hand Combat: It takes more than just “he punched, she kicked.”
1. Physical Accuracy Leverage & Technique: Real fights aren’t just about strength. A smaller fighter can drop a bigger opponent by using balance, angles, and momentum (think judo throws, joint locks, sweeps).
Range Matters: Fights transition—long range (kicks), mid-range (punches), close-range (elbows, knees, grappling). Switching ranges is realistic.
Breathing & Fatigue: Real fights gas people out in seconds. Characters don’t trade a hundred blows like a Marvel scene. Show them panting, arms heavy, desperate.
Injury Consequences: A single well-landed strike can change everything—broken nose, dislocated shoulder, busted knee. Don’t have your character eat ten hits and shrug it off unless they’re superhuman.
2. Sensory Detail Sound: Flesh on flesh is a dull thwack, not a sharp crack. Bone breaks? Wet snap. Breathing becomes ragged, teeth grit, knuckles scrape concrete.
Pain & Body Feedback: A hit to the ribs feels like fire spreading across the chest. Blood fills the mouth metallic, vision blurs after a head strike.
Environment: Walls, tables, gravel, furniture; fighters use what’s around them. Getting shoved into drywall or a counter is as devastating as a clean punch.
3. Psychological Realism Adrenaline: Tunnel vision, shaky hands, slowed perception, explosive bursts of strength.
Intent: Not every blow is meant to kill. Some fighters try to incapacitate, intimidate, or escape. Make the why of their fighting influence the how.
Fear vs. Training: An untrained brawler swings wild. A trained fighter stays tight, efficient, economical. That contrast alone can tell the reader who they are.
4. Writing Style & Flow Clarity over Chaos: Avoid blow-by-blow play-by-play (“He punched. She blocked. He ducked.”). Instead, group actions into beats that flow. Example: He lunged, fists hammering wildly; she stepped inside the swing, and jammed an elbow into his ribs. The air rush out of him in a brutal wheeze before he could recover.
Pacing: Keep sentences shorter, sharper, when the fight is intense; mimics adrenaline. Then expand after a takedown, when the moment stretches.
Character Voice: A soldier’s internal narration won’t match a street kid’s. One notices openings and guard drops, the other thinks in scrappy desperation (“Hit him before he hits me”).
5. Things Writers Screw Up (Don’t Do This) ❖ Endless choreographed exchanges with no fatigue.
❖ Ignoring injuries until convenient.
❖ Making every move clean and elegant. Real fights are messy, clumsy, brutal.\
❖ Forgetting recovery: sore knuckles, bruises, limps after.
⚔️ Pro Tip: Watch real sparring or self-defense breakdowns (boxing, Muay Thai, Krav Maga, BJJ). You’ll see how fights collapse into chaos fast, and how even trained fighters don’t look like Hollywood superheroes.
Check out 👉 Bad vs Better Fight Scene 🎬🩸 for more!
Congrats, Your Character Needs Therapy: Trauma Dumping on Your OCs
So you’ve given your character a tragic backstory. And another. And another. And now they’re carrying enough baggage to fill an airport carousel.
Question is: does it work, or did you just trauma dump all over them for vibes?
🧠 1. Does the trauma make sense? ◈ Is it believable for their background, culture, or world? ◈ Does it tie into who they are, or does it feel like a random dartboard of misfortunes?
📖 2. Is it relevant to the plot? ◈ Does it shape their goals, fears, or relationships? ◈ Does it change how the story unfolds? ◈ If not, it’s just decorative angst.
⚖️ 3. Are you balancing the weight? ◈ One or two defining wounds, written with depth, hit harder than a grab-bag of suffering. ◈ If your character has more issues than WebMD, readers stop caring.
✍️ 4. Execution > Quantity ◈ A single, well-integrated trauma is more powerful than a grocery list of tragedy. ◈ Explore it, don’t just stack it.
👉 Bottom line: Trauma isn’t seasoning—it’s character architecture. If it’s not building something in your story, it’s just noise.
“I have characters/a world, but no plot, what do I do?”
Here are some options!
☕️ Disrupt normalcy
What does a normal day look like in your world, or to your characters? What are ways that could be entirely thrown off track?
If your characters go to a magical university, maybe the magic becomes corrupt, or there’s a mysterious death. If your character is an assassin, maybe they recognize one of their targets, or they fail to eliminate a high-profile target, and now they need to decide if they admit their failure to their bosses. Think about how your characters would react to this, how the authorities in your world would respond, etc.
🍂 Wants/goals of your cast
Do your characters actually want anything? What are they working towards in their everyday life? What’s a dream goal they’d take if it was presented to them, but can’t get right now? Figure out what they want, and then figure out why they can’t have it. That is the core of conflict.
Does your magical university-goer want to graduate in their major, or are they doing it because their parents insist, maybe they want to study something else entirely, but there’s a lot of external pressure on them? Maybe your assassin wants to be the top of their organization, but to do so they need to kill someone dear to them? Maybe they fail to catch their high-profile target because the target they were trying to kill was their boss, in order to take their job, but they got found out?
🕰️ Systemic issues
Think about your world. Are there any issues you’ve established that you can explore in your conflict? Is the government over-controlling, is there prejudice against any members of society, are there forms of slavery, is there a large class distinction or a strict caste system? You could explore how your characters exist in a world that experiences these things, how your antagonists use them to their advantage, or how the protagonists try to fix these issues. Not every society is going to be perfect, so play with it!
To get into their university, does your magician need to pass an elitist certification exam? Are there laws about who can perform magic? What does your assassin think about other laws, not just the ones about murder? Is there a reason assassins as a business are being explored here, is there a lack of other ways to deal with inter-personal conflict supported by authorities?
☕️ Character flaws
Look at your characters, their pasts, their general personality. Why do they act the way they act, and what destructive behaviors do they have? Is there anything that could cause inter-personal conflict, or just regular conflict?
Does your magician cheat on tests to get better grades and impress their peers/parents/teachers? Does your assassin have trouble trusting people, are they always planning a way to end the relationship at the drop of a hat? How would these character flaws affect their relationships and how they interact with the rest of your cast? Maybe two characters have flaws that really rub against each other in the wrong way; someone is brutally honest because they think lying is wrong, and someone refuses to say anything critical because they can’t not people-please. Does person A think lying is wrong because they were lied to very badly in the past? Is it just related to the way their brain and sense of justice works? Does person B have a past of being insecure, from friends or from family members? Maybe they have abandonment issues and don’t want to say anything that makes people leave them again?
🍂 Scale of your stakes
There are many different kinds of stakes and conflict, and not everything has to be world-ending superhero action movie number five hundred. The stakes of a romance novel will usually be centered around the main characters getting together, or falling out. There’s plenty of cozy stories about being unsure if they’ll be able to raise enough money to buy back the family bakery. Any level of stakes are viable, as long as they’re important to your characters. If your character can leave and never do anything to further the plot again with no consequences, your stakes are nonexistent. You need to find a reason they can’t walk away from this.
If there’s a murder at your magician’s university, maybe they’re a suspect and need to clear their name. If their magic becomes corrupt, maybe they have a clock ticking down on how long they have to fix it before it corrupts their soul and they die. If your assassin recognizes their target, they have to weigh what’s most important to them; completing the job successfully, or keeping a person they know alive. They could leave, but that would be a failure too, and they would probably be pursued. If they fail to catch their target, maybe they’re put on probation, maybe their employers are starting to question their worth, and they need to complete this next mission perfectly in order to avoid getting disappeared.
🕰️ Themes
What is the story about? What conversation are you having with your readers? What ways can you incorporate that into the plot?
Maybe the magician’s story is about coming of age, maybe it’s about the elitism of academia, maybe it’s about pursuing your own dreams instead of what your family wants/generational trauma. Maybe the assassin has to learn it’s okay to open up and be soft, maybe it’s about revenge, maybe it’s about the cycle of violence. These can inform the direction your story goes, and what sort of choices and development your characters have. Every story will have several themes, but thinking about a few of them to inform your plot direction can be a good start.
☕️ Genre and tropes
What genre does your story fall into? There are different expectations for each genre (for example, romances need to have a happily ever after/happily for now to be considered a romance), and there’s a lot of common tropes and themes in each genre. Most stories will fit into 2-3 genres, some of the most popular being crime, fantasy, romance, sci-fi, and horror, each of which have many subgenres within them, I recommend doing research into these yourself. For example, my main project would fall under fantasy as a main genre, since it uses magic and is in a world different than our own, but more specifically would fall under dark fantasy for darker tone and horror elements, and gaslamp fantasy for a Victorian-inspired setting that involves magic. If I wanted ideas, I would want to look at common dark fantasy and gaslamp tropes, prompts, and themes.
There’s hundreds upon hundreds of tropes, because tropes are just, things that happen in your story. You cannot make a story without utilizing tropes. There’s a lot of tropes that can be used regardless of genre (found family, villains and heroes working together, redemption or corruption arcs, etc), or tropes that are more genre-specific (enemies to lovers in romance, chosen ones in fantasy, the final girl in horror, etc). There’s plenty of lists of tropes in each genre, and finding ones you’re interested in may help spur plot ideas.
The magician’s story is going to be fantasy for sure, because magic is involved, but could fall into a number of subgenres; urban fantasy, fantasy of manners, dark fantasy, magical realism, etc. The assassin’s story has a lot more wiggle room, it could fall into grimdark, contemporary, thriller, or mystery, as well several others if we were to add fantasy, sci-fi, romance, historical, etc. elements.