"She’s enthralled by him and in thrall to him." what a great sentence!! i'm loving this thread with hopper and brady already but that especially really struck me, it's such a neat construct and has such a fun rhythm to it that says so much about hopper's cadence and way of thinking it's just so lovely!
thank you!!!!!! i was v happy w/ that lil line! i love alliteration, espec when it has a profound sense of meaning or contrast b/w the two alliterative words.
im absolutely LOVING this thread too!!!! sammy @bonnmot wrote such a banger starter, having brady and hopper’s first thread set post-conscience is??? so fascinating? and adds such an ethical, complex, suspenseful layer to their relationship.
im glad hopper’s way of thinking is coming through, and coming through in a striking way! since she’s such a Think Oriented character (i mean, it’s her job) being able to get across how she feels and views and thinks about things is Important!!! and ive been worried i havent shared enough of that so this is! great!!!!
