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OH! so now your noses will fucking work? man fuck this comic. Ranach couldn't smell rogioho at a very close location he was standing in, with the scent being fresh enough, but only could smell kargo. also seriously? what did these idiots expect. No one did the job as an adult or parent who's had history with an individual that is dangerous. Ronja did the bare minimum and rogioho just made it his own pity party. I'm sorry but I hate everyone of these characters right now :/ EDIT: Forgot to mention I find it ridiculously absurd, how they all wasted probably enough time to get dressed in armor. and how come Raun was the only dog on night watch duty. Nordegarde is a tribe of 16 members, have other dogs with Raun so they can keep a look out in other directions?, considering they have solar stag threatening them. Heck I thought the females from the previous MT tribe wanted equality and here they aren't doing jack shit. Why is everyone so goddamn stupid???

[zombiee-reviews]

BOI WHAT THE HELL + UPDATE

Ok, so we’ve all seen and read this page right? Many of us readers were actually excited that Kique FINALLY hinted at a F x F relationship in his primarily M x M comic. It only took 881 pages to finally get SOMETHING new!!!

So fast forward, waiting almost two years and almost 100 pages later for an interaction between these two, this is what we get???

So did Kique forget entirely about page 881? Well here is his stupid excuse for all of this:

Truthfully I feel like he does these repetitive “walk out in the middle of a serious conversation” scenes so he can further stretch the comic to a point of no return ( although we are already there lmao ).

So obviously, we know that Ferah may harbor some fear from her past experiences with relationships. But it was FERAH that mentioned her feelings first about Felidae. She seemed to mention and speak about it confidently, acknowledging her fears and Kargo offering support and advice.. Even though the advice was way out of character of him and just makes him look like another creep in the comic, but that’s a whole different topic.

Anyway, one would think that Ferah would leap and bound at the opportunity that SOMEONE reciprocated her feelings finally, but NOPE! Instead we are further dragged into this shit hole comic waiting for a proper F x F relationship… STILL. Not only this, but I don’t understand why Ferah didn’t just TALK to Felidae, because now they will have a whole awkward silence managing the kill and a whole awkward walk back to the tribe. That could give plenty of time to Ferah to talk to Felidae about why she is turning her down. Or idk, be honest? Maybe say something like “I like you.. I do, but I’m just not ready yet.” It’s also a bit confusing for Ferah to say “I like you… You’re a good friend” ( basically friend-zoning ) when she literally went on a whole ramble about Felidae to Kargo? Ok, wtf. I am also sick and tired of Kiques “one personality fits all” characters. Why is it that just about every character one here avoids serious conversations, or questions? Why can’t we have one that COMMUNICATES?

We could argue that Ferah still has her fears, or that maybe Kique wants to flesh their “relationship” out further instead of rushing it, but naaaah, I don’t buy that. This dude is all about rushing this comic, he just has hater energy for his female characters. Notice how we no longer see Aira?? Yeah exactly.

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Also life update, my posts may significantly decrease as Kique has ultimately buried his comic and it’s beyond brain numbing boring now. And my fiance and I are expecting a baby soon!! I will still review it from time to time and still be around, but my account may grow inactive for a bit. Thank you!

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Chapter 13 Breakdown: Watching the Hero Become the Villain.

Sorry this took a while to come out, I have had the script done for a while but never the time to work on the video side of things. I will be going over the three sub stories and explaining why Roamer was effectively ruined this chapter.

Chapter 14's script is also done for the most part, but I am projecting that will be a 2.5 hour video if my word count is anything to go by. Feel free to comment or give feedback.

[saltysplayt00ns]

HEY DUDES AND DUDETS

I'm NOT OUT OF THE WOODS YET Just taking a mini unannounced vacay but also been busy in other stuff not pertaining to here. more so writing, it takes focus ( research, edits, style etc. ) just as I pet it here. but most would know I make comments on DA in the Grasscake home discussions there. One thing you will know however is that I never miss a beat and what I learned apparently is that Kique/Runestorm is now putting the NSFW content and images up from Patreon to his furaffinity account

YA KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS FOLKS!!!???.

once a page is public its not obligated by patreons rules Now people will know what's up without getting the boot rip all them brave folks out there O7 lmao.

ALSO its a mature content so you'll need an account to see it. its a good thing I have an account that's been collecting dust for eons.

You can tell from this piece alone that I collected on how much the quality depleted as them prices be up.

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Why you may ask? don't know but their is speculations and theories I can put up.

He is losing Patreon by the day and needs relevancy and traffic.

He was reported on Patreon because it goes against Patreons TOS of NSFW content and now he has to find somewhere else to draw attention to him.

Its a place where people are less likely to know him and not get reticule/backlash. Cause its literally feral animals fucking with human Genitals . NSFW is already a sticky slope on a very thin line of what's appropriate to concerning. it's already weird he does the pages and poses as though its hentai/Pornhub. and trust you'll know when you see them.

Patreon subscribers are just not into the NSFW content ( Shocker I know ) not surprised. he had bonus pages and stuff showing worldbuild content. when he started getting more patreons from making NSFW Sentient feral content is when he abandoned his promise.

He is not producing in the rate that he usually does. he's been pumping and dumping pages left and right, now its staggering and losing fumes. Its like giving someone water everyday and then slowly ceasing giving them water. if there is no water their, people is going to migrate elsewhere or die of dehydration.

Deadbeat Chris and Kique decide its an idea to upload what is ' one of the most ' controversy ' up to the public. after all they literally the only ones to rely on each other since one left everything in disarray from their wife and tried to steal money to do that while the other pulling the strings and want a drama filled world. both not right in the head but are also not the brightest ( his close knights may have also suggested it as well though really didn't think it through ).

I have more but these are the one's that popped up. And the fact he didn't do it because it was iffy from both DA and Comicfurry, and ADDING THAT HE STARTED POSTING ASMUNDR UP TOO!!???.

*inhales* ah the smell of desperateness.

[thewramblingwebcomicreview]

Asmundr

Disclaimer

Wow, for whatever reason Kique decided to put the entirety of Asmundr on ComicFury. I enjoyed this comic when it was active, and it was one of the fateful reasons why I decided to give Home a chance. Pushing that enjoyment aside, Asmundr is an a average story at best. That still puts it heads and shoulders above what its sequel would become. The irony in Kique's disclaimer for the comic is something else, as he's become worse as a storyteller.

That said, yes Asmundr is heavily traced. The story was ripped off from 2008's Outlander, and there are swaths of the story that were never explained or ended on a confusing note.

Yet, when I go back I still find myself enjoying the story. And I'm marveling at how Kique is now so lazy with Home when he actually put effort into his first comic despite its flaws.

Characters that can actually be friends. Better yet, Niita asks Kainan to clarify his feelings for her, and comes out and says they're just friends. No weird sexual undertones. Just two dogs being friends.

A man stepping down from a position of power to make room for women leaders? It's more likely than you think in Asmundr! In theory this doesn't work out for Niita and Lifa, but I can't see this happening in Home. Plus, some of the women in this comic actually have agency and don't seem lost without a man telling them what to do. Mind-blowing given how the sequel would treat its female cast.

Remember when speech bubbles actually indicated if a character was shouting? Yeah, I miss those days too.

We actually had characters who weren't bland doing interesting things. Poor Vilda, she never got to say a single word in Home. Given how everyone's character has been ruined, that's probably for the best.

It's kind of a shame that given the last time I read Asmundr, that it's surprising to see common practices that Kique used to do in his older comic, but stopped doing for his current comic. I wonder how many Home fans who never read the original will go back to it, and see how much Kique enjoyed Asmundr, versus the lack of care or interest that plagues Home. It's telling that comments have been turned off for his OG comic.

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Khan, Venus and Bifa. Traveller, witch, warrior... Nice doggies 🐶✨

These characters are at least 5 years old. They are very old and very important to me. Nostalgic moment haha!

A long time ago, I was interested in the comic Asmundr — a story about dogs who fought with spears, communicated with spirits and created tribes (packs). The comic was original and creative. I still follow of the comic, but the story... It's getting worse :(

Most readers are waiting for the end of Asmundr. The comic has stopped being interesting.

However, my characters no longer have anything to do with the Asmundr, I created another universe for them. But more on that later, if you're interested 🔥🔥🔥

[souli-magines-arts]

Can you help me find some old pages, the pre-edited pages when the character "Marduk" was called "Khellir"? (Edit: they're all found!)

I remember this character's design, one that I really liked from this comic.

I managed to find only these pages through pinterest and "time travel" sites. (Pre-edited)

I can't find the pre-redesigned of these pages below (these are edited) :

If some you may have these or at least remember the name of now called Marduk, I would appreciate it. It appears that there are some dialogue changes, too. I noticed the gaps in the bubbles.

I looked for Nabisco home parody pages, too, but they're lost, and their tumblr page appears to be deleted.

[assmundr]

I've been sitting on this site for many years, choosing not to speak of it publically because I know how people feel about leaked Patre0n content, but since we already have someone on here that's releasing Home Patre0n pages, I'm gonna pitch in with my own tiny goblet of smelly gold.

On this site, not only can you find yet to be released pages, you can get anything from Kique's brushes, tutorials, story drafts, QnAs, bonus pages and content (yes, that includes all the NSFW extras) as well as the dozens of sweet sweet doggy bases y'all are after for some reason.

The site is easy to find and rhymes with "Bemono" all you have to do is replace the first letter of the word with the 11th letter of the alphabet and you're golden.