#be blunt

[doctor-who-crappy-aus]

Making this post on an old blog instead of my main for obvious reasons.

Buuuut I need to here some honest feedback.

I have an OC storyline that I’m working on. A group of 18-21yos gets kidnapped and through this they follow the leader of the group of kidnappers, the MC (Let’s call him H for now) to his gigantic, professionally built, hidden away treehouse in the woods, to escape their kidnappers.

Along the way theres conflict of course.

I’m gonna be blunt. Every single character in this story is white with blonde hair. The MC is blonde haired, blue eyed, and white. The only person who isn’t white is one of the main group characters whose Asian. That’s it. Everyone else is the same.

Should I add more diversity? It doesn’t seem right to not have any POC characters and EVERY other character including MC being white, blonde, blue eyed except for one.

Should I add a new character or make one of the pre-existing non-white?

I take criticism. Be blunt

[guiltycharge]

like for louise to bully your muse

[julygirl67]

I have said I am sorry when I should have said Fuck off and moved On

[n-tropy-f]

Note to self: Clarify everything completely for henchman Jacob. That man does not work well with metaphors.

[villaneve-bridge]

To be blunt I have no time for an Irina story now. There are only two episodes left they need to be about Eve and Villanelle. I’m hoping this Irina stuff will be brief and will just move Konstantin, and ultimately Villanelle’s, story forward.

Agreed. Like we already have so much going on and to add this when we have even barely seen Eve’s development is annoying. I feel like everyone is getting character depth but Eve. I just hope these two next ep really is Eve/Villanelle heavy and their journey back to each other

[a-wondering-wandering-brain]

Be Blunt

I will hurt myself more with my questioning of your kind vagueness than your disagreeable truths, or hateful lies. Your true honesty could never hurt as much as my inescapable serrated questioning.

[dr-leonard-h-mccoy-meme]

Apparently Ensign Nol is more observant than he let's on. He told me that someone has been subtly flirting with me, and trying to make me jealous. He won't tell me who it is. Here's the thing though.

As @jimemey-kirk discovered at the academy, when this one guy was flirting with me, that I don't recognize subtle flirting easily.

Jim had to nudge me and tell me, his exact words, "Bones you goof, he's flirting with you!"

Be blunt please. And if you're going to use any terrible pick up lines, at least try to use the better terrible ones.

Jim, do you know who it is?