#oc criticism

[rosie-autz]

ok so.....I'm making a yo kai watch oc, and I need advice

so basically, this oc is a priestess, and a daughter of the royal Kitsune family.....and I need some advice on an outfit for them since I'm having a hard time designing it TwT

so pls feel free to answer & tell me if I did anything wrong. I'll take any criticism since I just want to be respectful ^w^

[doctor-who-crappy-aus]

Making this post on an old blog instead of my main for obvious reasons.

Buuuut I need to here some honest feedback.

I have an OC storyline that I’m working on. A group of 18-21yos gets kidnapped and through this they follow the leader of the group of kidnappers, the MC (Let’s call him H for now) to his gigantic, professionally built, hidden away treehouse in the woods, to escape their kidnappers.

Along the way theres conflict of course.

I’m gonna be blunt. Every single character in this story is white with blonde hair. The MC is blonde haired, blue eyed, and white. The only person who isn’t white is one of the main group characters whose Asian. That’s it. Everyone else is the same.

Should I add more diversity? It doesn’t seem right to not have any POC characters and EVERY other character including MC being white, blonde, blue eyed except for one.

Should I add a new character or make one of the pre-existing non-white?

I take criticism. Be blunt

[mahvash-mirta]

((Oc character design possible help))

((Hello I haven't had the chance to update this blog for a while because I am struggling with character design(drawing) and development. Idk if anyone wants to help or know any overwatch oc blogs that include critiques. I don't want yes men. I want like blunt critics and etc. Dm me if you wish! Please I will need some help with Mahvash)