I love that Loid was diagnosed with an ulcer. I think we all knew he had one, but the fact that it's actually made an official appearance in the story and has temporarily disabled him, especially at this moment where Donovan is so close, is so good.
Besides that, Twilight starts out the story as a cool, highly competent, flawless spy. But then, as the cracks begin to form in his facade, the same happens inside his stomach. He's being forced to confront his vulnerability on two fronts. And, it's possible that this arc will be Yor's. She may finally get the chance to help Loid, even unwittingly.
I wonder if Donovan, realizing Anya's significance when he runs into her at the hospital, initiates a relationship with the Forger family, using Melinda and Damien as his in. I'm almost positive this child will get kidnapped at some point, probably as the series climax, but I don't think that's coming yet. However, I think this may be the start of a closer relationship between the Forgers and Donovan, especially because Twilight is at his weakest. It would be the most narratively interesting point to bring the two men into prolonged contact.
I'm very excited to see what happens next.
