i finished fine structure
it ended on a real fucking whimper but i mean after all of THAT any other way would have been crass.
the whole thing (and really this could be said of every web story serially published that i have read, such is the nature of the medium) could stand to the revision of an editor but as it is,it is really good
is more than good, is literally the biggest story i have ever read, i know i said that of worm and i said that of homestuck and what is with this ultra positivist, mega geek, hard sci fi genre of fiction that its defining quality seems to always be “go bigger”.
they always have to end with some anime fight for the fate of the multiverse, always go for the singularity, the end of the world, the destruction of reality, do all these writers really think that the ultimate extrapolation of humanity is “become super god squared inifinity +1″
but once again i liked it so much, i especially liked how subreptitiously and subtly it ended up creating a system of magic with rules and everything, the curve of increasing powerlevels was not a steep one, it felt well paced and earned the lofty heights at which the story rised.
i also really really liked the anachronic and disorganized way the whole picture is presented, it felt like a jigsaw puzzle the reader had the chance to put together on his own, it took me back to my young days when i watched lost for the first time, it feels a lot like LOST in fact, or a mix between LOST, HEROES and worm. it feels like all those mystery puzzle plot shows that came out around that time.
it also feels a little too divorced from any human emotional reality or proportion, the real human stories of the everyday person on the street, as most of these stories tend to be. and that is fine, that is how those stories go, but i think im going to need a chance of pace, i got satisfied and more, i got my fill of highly conceptual sci fi for now, ill maybe have to take some time off from it.
gigantic story, i loved it, 10/10
now to search far a wide through the internet for fan art, community discussion and shit like that