Iicngyp is just so good. I love the way you write, it’s easy to follow while still holding so much emotion and giving each character their moment. I feel like there is so much to uncover. Jungkook is so stuck with this whole revenge plan that he can’t even comprehend that the reader is just as stuck in this life as he is. She gave him a second chance at life that time after the fight but i feel like jk is so consumed in having the power over everyone that actually starting over was never an option for him. I feel like he puts all of his angry and hurt onto the reader even tho she risked her own life to get him out, but he can’t see that. One thing that stuck out to me was when the reader picked him up from the bar and he said ”you don’t own me”, I feel like jungkook, in a way, viewed the reader as a owner stopping him from being free RATHER then someone stuck in a situation they never wanted to be in. Life as been unfair to both and now jungkook is taking it out on her. I think a big issue in this is that the reader is so emotional consipated. I hope we get to see her break out of her shell a bit more and that jk and her truly talk about the past but i feel like that won’t happen for a while. Im really interested to see what happens next! Sorry for the rant ldbfbkdbf Also!! i would love to be added to your taglist if it’s still open : )
Aaah I'm so happy you're enjoying it that much!! I'm trying to sprinkle in informations about how the characters, and Jungkook in particular, are feeling so that readers can piece it together and it's so nice to see you going through that 😁
You're hitting a very important part of Jungkook's character at that point in the story here! That line of his does say a lot about him and you're getting so much right!! It's so cool to see you thinking so much about my story gah I can't tell you how happy this makes me!!
Please don't apologize, this was such a cool message to read!! Thank you so so much for sending this, and I'll make sure to add you to the taglist for future chapters!
