#po3 rewrite

[thunderc1an]

an excerpt from my po3 rewrite

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Important Warrior cats rewrite question, The Tribe of Rushing Water

The Tribe in warrior cats is racist, like hella racist. So it needs to be completely rewritten or trashed.

Pros of keeping:

Fleshes the world out more and gives the clans neighbours to visit.

Mountain/cave cats are cool.

Could give it a name like kingdom or colony

Pros of trashing:

Can get rid of many no plot travelling books.

Racist cats go bye bye for good.

Pretty easy to patch up in dawn of the clans, just say the ancient tribe got wiped out by winter after gray wing and co left.

Not really Cons or Pros just things I’d have to do:

Lots of Rewriting, I’m talking renaming characters, titles and changing what their group is called.

Coming up with a cat culture that’s different enough from the clan cats cause the canon tribe is big yikes.

Cons of keeping:

the canon tribe has such rancid vibes that it may be irredeemable

A con regardless of answer:

What the fuck do I do with the mountain lion

Tribe of Rushing water, keep or trash?

Keep

Trash

Voting ended onApr 12

[mommyclaws]

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Hello. Thunderclan being Starclan’s favorite child has always annoyed me so I made an AU back in middle school where the three are split up between the clans. (It starts with the second series, all of the journey cats are alot closer + There's no tribe so tbh Feathertail might survive.)

But anyway, when Leafpool finds out shes pregnant, Starclan pressures her into pulling a Moth Flight and she gives her kits away between the clans in secret. She tells Squirrelflight, begging for help and since the journey cats are all so close, they are willing to take the kits to protect Squirrelflight's sister and Crowfeather's kits. So the po3's heritage secret isn't just "one-sided Thunderclan-Windclan" business, it's a massiveee scandal because it's a secret spread throughout all four clans, when it comes out it's a MESS. But-

Crowfeather takes Hollyleaf and raises her in Windclan with Nightcloud and Breezepelt as her brother.

Tawnypelt takes Lionblaze and raises him in Shadowclan beside Rowanclaw with their kits Flametail, Dawnpelt, and Tigerheart.

Mothwing takes Jayfeather. She isn't a journey cat but she is very close to Leafpool (yuri💕), so she takes him and Mosspelt raises him with Willowshine. (Mosspelt nursed Featertail and Stormfur so I think she would be more than willing to raise Jay to protect him from the violence that Feather and Storm faced for their heritage.) ((Also also Brairlight is in Riverclan<3 Bc Feather is alive, I want her dad to be less. Terrible. So Greystripe stayed in Rievrclan and brings Millie with him))

And I haven't thought about it in a longgg time but I am just rlly attached to these sibling and parent dynamics<3 How the three might have changed being raised in different families and environments yknow.

[dog-leg]

I briefly mentioned Sol’s cult in my po3 rewrite post so here’s a little more insight into them. I plan on calling them the Cats of the Garden as most were originally kittypets who left to follow sol’s teachings. Once they have proven their loyalty he gives them a new name to symbolize their rebirth, they’re all given flower/plant based names as they grow under his (the sun’s) light. yeah this is full cult type shit. feel free to send in asks about them!!

[its-a-battle-cats-world]

Just a quick idea I need to spill out while in mah head:

"There will be three, kin of your kin, who hold the power of the stars in their paws. But be warned Firestar, there will also be three, kin of your kin, who hold the power of shadows in their paws."

This is just a random idea that popped up in my head, but I think I might want to make something of it. I had this thought, like.

So Dove, Lion, and Jay are obviously the 3 with stars.

But (and this may be obvious), the three with shadows would be none other than Holly, Ivy, and Breeze. Yes, Breezepelt. Idk why he just seemed the best fit and it could help explain why hes so intent on harming Jay and Lion. Or if you have better ideas, he could be a red herring of sorts with everyone on team stars thinking that it's obviously Breezepelt cuz of all the times he attacks Lion and Jay and his raging anger.

To be fair, he is kin to Holly, Jay and Lion, who are Fire's kin so, technically could work, but maybe not best option since not also Firestar's kin.

Any ideas or suggestions?

[m1smatched-starsigns]

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Title: Power of Three, Rewrite

"There will be three kin of your kin, who hold the power of the stars in their paws..."

Not Lionblaze, Jayfeather and Dovewing.

But Hazeltail, Mousewhisker, and Berrynose.

Who could have ever known that Daisy was a daughter of Luna, Firestar's other sister? That her three barn kittens where in fact, his grand-nephews and niece? It's knowledge that only StarClan has, until the Three are visited in a dream.

This was an idea that I had several years ago. I never gave it any serious thought so I don't have any of it plotted, but every now and then, I do think about it.

It would obviously be a massive AU. These three being The Three flips the entire Clan on it's head!

For starters, StarClan does not pressure Jayfeather to train as a medicine cat. Instead he is free to train as a warrior; but who must take his place? And what other ripples does his new role send out? (And where do Lionblaze, Hollyleaf, Dovewing and Ivypool fall here)

Secondly, they've just been told that they're descendants of Firestar, and they have to keep that a secret! Nobody sees this litter as anything special; whereas when Squirrelflight has her kits, cats can't stop commenting on what their futures could possibly hold. Bitterness definitely takes root when the other Clans, and sometimes even their own Clanmates, remark on their kittypet heritage.

Thirdly, they have some research to do. They didn't grow up hearing stories of StarClan or magnificent battles or legendary leaders. Sometimes the key to your future lies in your past, and in this AU, they need to uncover some old secrets.

And maybe it isn't their fault when Tigerstar begins to walk in one of their dreams; they weren't told the Terrible Tale of Tigerstar, after all... 

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This is definitely a fic that I would have to put a lot of thought into, if I ever wrote it. I don't see that happening anytime soon, but never say never!

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Some fanart for Tennelleflowers amazing po3 rewrite :3

[scrollingfan]

Lion boy for my rewrite, and a better Holly