Hello everyone! \(^o^)/ I'm back (still on Artfight wowzers) to discuss some extra stuff about the protagonist...aka YOU.
More specifically I want to get some details clear about you, the former friends plus some extra stuff I may have changed or want to put in here for notes. This page includes my art lol.
First things first: I actually decided to change the Archon Quest's location for the story. Instead of [Name] coming after the Traveller during Fontaine's A.Q, the Traveller and [Name] will meet and have their journeys intersect in Inazuma. This is because I wanted La Signora (and her death) to be important to the plots...also the gnoses are going to be important to [Name]'s plan to get out of Genshin.
Also yes I see the winner now. Lumine will be the Traveler for this story. I did write these notes weeks before so any mentions of "Traveler," just think Lumine.
...and I really apologize for the long LONG rant on here, I just tried to bring together how certain stuff might work while trying to be realistic. Also there is a drawing of [Name] in here :D
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INTERMISSION:
Now we talk about You...aka [Name]. Now I don't want to have a lot of details of you set by me, after all this is meant to be a self insert story. However some details are written the way they are because it needs to fit with the lore plus helps write some potential plot points later.
Your name is obviously [Name] (first and last name if you wish). Your hair, skin tone, birthday, height, eye color, ethnicity and whatever you want is up completely to you. This is the reflection of you after all.
Now here are the concrete details about [Name] and the supposed friends (like [F1/N], [F2/N] and [F3/N]) that I have written out for the story.
(1)
When you were isekai'd to Genshin with your friends-- you and the friends were around the age range of 17-18. This is because you all were highschool seniors.
You were 17 at the time.
[F1/N] was 17, about to turn 18 in only two weeks.
[F2/N] and [F3/N] were already 18 for a while.
Another important aspect to this is that when you were all isekai'd, it happened before the full Snezhnaya release. So you guys don't actually know EVERYTHING everything.
With the adding of 5 years, this would make you 22 years old at the time of this story starting for [Name].
I also tried to figure out how long the Traveler would have been staying in Teyvat for but I couldn't find a concrete answer. Plenty of people say that the time for Teyvat is the same as irl so "since Genshin released 6 years ago then the Traveler (Lumine) was in Teyvat for 6 years" tyep of deal. But personally I feel like that is a bit too long? If the Traveler is really trying to find their sibling then I would assume that they wouldn't say in the same place for too long...and I'm supposed to assume that the Traveler stays a full year in each nation until they get access to the next one? I feel like that just doesn't work or make sense. I know people say that maybe the Traveler was training or getting better at stuff before they left but still a full year in each nation feels like too much. So instead, I'm going to do a maximum of 6 months in each nation unless there is extra time needed to stay for the plot.
So because of how the story will progress time wise now-- the timeline is like this:
Age of [Name] when they (along with friends) were isekai'd:
- 17 yrs
A/[Name] when [F1/N] and [F3/N] died:
- 19 yrs
A/[Name] when [F2/N] died:
- 20 yrs
A/[Name] when Traveller came to Mondstadt:
- 21 yrs (newly turned)
A/[Name] when Traveller came to Liyue:
- 21 1/2 yrs
A/[Name] when Traveller came to Inazuma (when the story truly starts):
- 22 yrs
(2)
Because you all had the rule of "Let's NOT get involved in the main plot until the Traveler gets in game," naturally there were three places/nations where you guys didn't create wave points (teleportation points).
Exhibit A: INAZUMA
This is due obviously to the military rule and government going on by the Shogun. Even though there is four of you guys, again the rule is in place.
Exhibit B: NOD-KRAI
Even though the nation isn't even really a part of Teyvat and is an autonomous region...plenty of Fatui are there. It was best to not risk it.
Exhibit C: SNEZHNAYA
Once again...the literal FATUI AND THE TSARITSA ARE HERE. This is basically a death wish. None of you guys wanted to even attempt it. Also because you all came before the full Snezhnaya region release, this basically felt like unknown territory with potential cryptids at every corner...so yeah no attempts even tried.
(3)
Neither you or your friends have actual visions. This is due to all of you being decsenders and obviously not being from Teyvat. None of you are recognized by Celestia-- thus it couldn't happen.
However...this doesn't mean that you guys didn't have elemental powers.
Because descenders' bodies can act as conduits for elements (like with the third descender used to create the gnoses...and also the Traveler can literally do this in resonating with elements), this applies to you and your friends. You all had eventually figured this out a couple months in your stay in Genshin so yes for plenty of the time, you all were using the elements.
[F1/N] liked Anemo
[F2/N] was a Hydro main,
[F3/N] was using Geo as their main backer
And you like using whatever type of element is your favorite. This part is completely up to you.
(NOTE: Going back to Point 2 about not going to certain locations, this also means that neither you or your friends had ever dabled in using Electro, Pyro Cryo. After all the Traveler couldn't originally use Pyro due to the corrupted Ley Lines. So the rest of the elements like Anemo, Geo, Dendro, Hydro are free game). And yes, you guys can switch from element to element like with the Traveler.
(4)
You and [F2/N] had actually figured out a way to change elements in usage without even needing to go to the Statues of the Seven. Due to a mix of [F2/N] being a tech nerd and you remembering the extra lore on statues and gnoses...you two had created a little device that wraps around your wrist with the intention of pretending it is an actual vision. And whenever you intended to switch elements, the so called "vision" will change inside to accommodate it.
(However during the creation process was also when [F2/N] had died so you had to do the rest of it by yourself.)
I'm not going to spoil how on it works yet because that will become a piece in the plot later...but just know it does have something to do with descender bodies being an elemental conduit...
And...someone may have potentially helped you after you lost the help from [F2/N]...and now this leads to:
(5)
After all of your friends had passed, you did begin to bend the "Interfering with the Traveler (Lumine) Plot" rule a tinnny bit. While you didn't do Archon Quests or anything major, you did talk to a few characters who are important to said quests. As for who they are, that will be revealed in upcoming chapters. You also did a few World Quests because you wanted certain things that could only be acquired by said quests...one example is weapons.
(Key note here: You only spoke to the characters once or twice, you never actually made them your allies or friends.)
(6)
Because you and the Traveler (Lumine) are both Descenders...technically you both can do similar things though with obvious differences (such as using Waypoints, using Elemental Sight, etc etc).
However because you are most certainly human compared to the Traveler (we all remember at scene at the very beginning of the game) you have less endurance, defense and health compared to Lumine. So there are moments where you can definitely be vulnerable.
(7)
You might be asking "how did no one know that [Name] and their friends were descenders for 5 years?"
Well for one thing-- even in the first few months of being in Genshin, everyone pretended to be outlanders. People who weren't from Teyvat...basically saying everyone in the group was a Traveler from another country. Due to the accents, the clothes and the initial excitement of being in Teyvat...it was easy to convince others that you all were just tourists. This is also why the Fatui didn't jump you all when first spawning in.
But now that years have passed by, you'd think that maybe you would have slipped up at some point right? Especially because you are the only one left and you had began to bent the Big Rule a bit.
Well this is actually a still no. No one actually truly knows your (or your friends' identities) as descenders. This is due to you refusing to talk about your status to anyone, refusing to get involved in major events AND you constantly move around Teyvat (so akin to a constantly travelling explorer).
If anyone ever asked you where you originally came from, you always just say that you are someone from outside of Teyvat who decided to live there permanently (that covers the accent bit, your mannerisms and potentially clothes). You also give false names and use said names for the regions you go into while praying no one actually connects the dots. Some of the names you currently use depending on the region are the following:
Mondstadt: "Mika"
Liyue: "Lan"
Sumeru: "Finch"
Fontaine: "Laurence"
Natlan: "Anu"
Since you never get involved in anything major, are not a part of big organizations or factions, don't have an active social life-- no one really looks into you. And it is once again made harder by the fact that you don't stay in the same place for long and don't follow a specific pattern of where to go next. One day you may be in Fontaine, the next you are in a hotel in Natlan kind of deal. You also make mora by occasionally selling ingredients and stuff you have crafted. So you are not poor but you are definitely not rich either...
NOW the drawn reference for [Name] attached below:
(Since you are currently living on the rural outskirts of Sumeru, you are trying to look like you belong there. Also you are trying to pretend to be a Dendro used at the initial first few chapters of the story).
Any extra stuff I need to keep in mind I'll just put here so wow.
Also I'm trying to think about how the Wish system works and how to translate it into this story. Because obviously Lumine would have already had some people who they get in the character dossier (Amber, Kaeya, etc). And maybe they wish for other characters. So I'm trying to picture how would this work in the story. Like are the characters in her party just following her around and flanking her? Are they there is it to give defense? Do they leave the room when an important scene happens or are they like with Lumine in spirit??
Also if the Traveler can make wishes this does mean that [Name] can also make character wishes too? I'm seriously trying to figure this out oh god.
Anyways gtg and brb with actual Chapter 1












