#yunze

[ourswordsmeandeath]

Looking for a beta reader (F/F fic)

A Legend of Yunze WIP has been troubling me for months now. Something feels off about it, and I can't seem to get it to a point where I would be happy to throw it into the void aka AO3.

Premise: A flirty dagger fight in second person POV Rating: T (though there is nothing really salacious, no blood drawn) Words: 635 Looking for help with any or all of the following:

- spelling, punctuation, grammar, tense being consistent throughout - continuity, flow - repetition (overuse of words or similar phrases I may have missed) - plot/scene suggestions (a few things have been troubling me in particular and are included in a note in the doc) I don't see it taking longer than maybe 30 minutes of your time. As for sharing, I would prefer to send you a private message to a Google Doc if that is okay, or maybe Ellipsus (though, I joined less than a week ago so I'm still figuring things out on there).

[agendratum]

[baifengxis]

To you, she might be no more than a sacrifice, but in my heart, she's the most important person in the world.

[16th-cornelia-street]

legend of yunze a GL C-drama that has been subtitled in english.. there are two seasons, with a special “modern au” in between teh seasons. if you havent’ checked it out i’d recommend it. it’s really cute. and hopefully if it gets enough views it can get a season three.

go here to give it more views from the original poster 

https://haokan.baidu.com/author/1716563029020963

and here for season 1 with eg subs (note that the episodes are out of order so watch it as  1 , 2 , 3 , 4 , 10 , 5 , 6 , 9 , 7 , 8)

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLQ66dDLt14SU-veIjGsnvjMxf3o31IqPI

season two is eng subbed here 

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL46Vdh6zwZ3V58iX6uWqKp5rjaD5Cipgy

[onceuponavideo]

[multi dark sapphic]

I’m a little monster ~

[agendratum]

Legend of Yunze (2021)

[sephstones]

Fic :: 云泽传 | Legend Of Yunze (Web Series) :: A-Ze/Jiang Zhaoyun :: A Deathly Thread

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

Title: A Deathly Thread Fandom: Legend of Yunze Category: F/F Pairing: A-Ze/Jiang Zhaoyun Rating: T Word count: ~7,000 Tags: hurt/comfort, post-canon, kissing, canon-typical violence

Summary:

Sometimes Jiang Zhaoyun looked at A-Ze as though she did not know her. A-Ze understood that. Sometimes she felt she hardly knew herself. And sometimes, she thought she'd never known herself so well.

Notes:

Written for gaensebluemchen for Yuletide 2025.

[ourswordsmeandeath]

Title: Some Wounds Remain Fandom: Legend of Yunze Relationship: A-Ze/Jiang Zhaoyun Author: ourswordsmeandeath Rated: T Warnings: Angst, Scars, Emotional Trauma, Referenced Death Words: 500

Summary:

Zhaoyun found A-Ze in their bedroom, standing before the full-length mirror mounted to the wall. She watched in silence as A-Ze dragged the pad of her finger along the uneven topography of her abdomen. With every centimeter traversed, the lines in A-Ze's face deepened.

Set during and after the special. For shadow of the sun, light of the moon. Prompt: some wounds never vanish