My writing changes for BD DISC 2
Just a lil post showing what changes I'd make in BD's scenes for disc two,I will be focusing on the main story. Alumaru village will not be a part of my rewrite since it's a sidequest.
:When the gang first see the moon laser fire off,shu says "what's going on here?" In this version jiro would add "it has to be nene! maybe he created the moon lasers with ancient technology?"
:once they escape the moon lasers and follow the robot hand into the bunker leading to baroy,in this version after zola says "I can feel it,we're being watched" and after shu notices yasato in the corner of the corridor,yasato will try and approach them saying "please,there is no need for alarm" but shu tackles him to the floor before yasato runs off,in the actual game shu does tackle yasato to the floor,but only after yasato runs away and says nothing,this rewrite is meant to show how welcoming the baroy robots want to be to their first ever guest in ages a little bit earlier
:The scene where hineto throws the party out of the temple is now altered so he throws shu out last but not before saying to shu "out of all you people,this one is the most annoying" and then he throws shu onto the floor,the rest of the scene plays as normal
:during the scene where the ancient factory is reactivated and the mecha robos awaken,the first line of them is rusty and falls apart upon walking,the newly made mecha robos push the older ones out of the way,this is meant to show the age of the factory and how the machines that were finished got rusty and old,with the newly built mechas showing the factory itself still makes machines of war in top condition
:The malfunctioning defense mecha robo simply breaks apart upon its failed attempt to power up it's shield and explodes,this skips an easy and imo Unnecessary fight,but the explosion calls the attention of eight defense mecha robos and you fight them instead,jiro would simply pick up the barrier device before the battle,jiro would comment "perhaps if I get this working,we can deactivate their shields to?"
:When the gang confront nene in the ancient prison,before the war mecha robos attack nene would say "if you surrender,I'll call them off,a simple choice that doesn't require much thought,what do you say?" And shu will respond "no way,I won't give up!" To which nene finishes with "so be it"
:A small change but when shu has blue dragon attack the green barrier in pachess town,he punches the barrier multiple times instead of only doing it once
:The encounter with the scything skull spider in the pachess town underground now has dialogue before the battle,the scything skull spider appears as normal and now speaks before battling you,saying "foolish mortals,leave this place or suffer the pain of death!" Then the battle begins *cue eternity 😂*
:A new scene where we see the silhouettes of szabo and the demon kings laughing and watching the party advance through the nene's fortress,they can be heard saying "revenge..."
:when the gang encounters grand szabo and the demon kings again,each demon king has a line before battle in the cutscene,silent ku would say "you can't keep silent ku down for long",kesu would say "this time! You,die!!!",heat-wave sai would say "heheh,I'm sure to win with my power and pals at my disposal!" And mai would say "if this szabo's last stand,then our determination will be greater than yours!"
:During the final scene of disc two when nene regains his power and youth instead of jumping into his squashtrich mech (personally I think that kinda ruins the scene a little) he summons chimera and attempts to crush the party with chimera instead,finally showing the player chimera and confirms nene has shadow powers to,shu escapes as normal tho by warping him and the party to Devour village.
:if I had to make another rewrite tho,I'd definitely have shu be kidnapped by nene instead and this would allow kluke to take the main role,we could also see how the supporting casts would act around each other without shu there,I know kluke,jiro,marumaro and zola are classed as main characters but it's obvious shu gets more attention than all of them.
And thats all for now,disc three tomorrow (or whenever lmao)