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SUMMER CRUSH
Memory of a familly vocation
Part two/two
Water splashed almost everywhere. The music was loud,loud enough to be heard underwater. those type of pool evenings where everyone seemed relaxed and chill. No one looked ugly,nothing but perfect.
I jumped in the pool before the blondie fellowed after me.
âHey-â he fighted the water as he drowned closer to me.
I rested my arms against the pool deck watching him struggling to reach me.
As soon as he did he exhaled a heavy breath and wiped his face, few drips of water falls off his long lashes as he finally spoke;
âDo you have a name?â
The question made me wonder if i actually do have one like what the fuck do u mean,âwhy,you do?â
âYeah it's Lyle," he responded, very proud of his name. âwhat about you?â
I tried to study his stupid face like if he really like that or just mocking me or playing around.
âam hannahâ. but i shook my overthinking about that so-called âlyleâ weird demeanor. âSo where are you from-â
The old fat (also blonde) lady who stick to Lyle's side called him to come out of the water.
âSorry gotta goâhe got out of the water and lil ran to his mom,she put a towel around his shoulder and warmed him a bit.ever since we came here i never saw her without her sunglasses on it made me wonder are her eyes as blue as lyleâs eyes.
I swim underwater tryna enjoy the moment of a not so crowded pool.
Round after round. Corner to corner.
My mind went blank, all I could think about was how many laps I can handle before I lose my breath.
Once I felt my whole face squeezing and constricting from the lack of oxygen, I came up for oxygen and sat on the edges of the pool. I moved my legs slowly feeling the water against my calves.feeling that weird tension shiver in my body I glanced behind me to notice that sunglasses lady.
Standing,her chubby form in her blue beach dress draw in it weird old designs our generation will probably confuse it,she wore her hair blonde and short,her expression immune and her sunglasses only made it uncomfortably harder for me but even with them i could feel like empty eyes were staring into my soul, studying it as if she was thinking to own it.
FuckâŚ.
I stood awkwardly near the crepe ray in the buffet spread. My little brother Luke wanted a second crepe but this time with le beur de noisette and since they weren't ready yet the server said to just wait not even 5 minutes they would be readyâŚ..yes sirâŚfive minutesâŚ
Luke groaned impatiently âwhy is he taking so long!â
âHe said five minutes,â I repeated dryly.
Bored, I glanced around the buffet room. It had a nice terrace with a pool view. People seem to enjoy their breakfast if we ignore the sound of crying babies and tired poor mothers.
Toward the entrance,ugh the soudain appearance of the sunglasses lady made me shiver, fellowed with oww cute lyle. He at first looked at me but once I locked eyes he looked away.
âHannah i got ma crepeâluke holded into his plate as if his life belonged to it while trying to lick le beur de noisette from it.
âSuper now go to our table am gonna grab some brownies and a an ice teaâ
Lyle stood next to me as I put some brownies and cookies on my plate before the day went by and I didn't see him ever again in the hotel nor the pool,they had probably left after breakfast .
I donât know if it's desperation or something else but I have a pretty feeling we will meet again⌠probably not a very good one..
SUMMER CRUSH
MEMORY OF A FAMILLY VOCATION
Part one/two
âYeah mom-I mean no i just got boredâ i slipped my crocs, holding my phone between my shoulder and ear while folding up the towel to leave the tronzade âam heading to the roomâ
In fact, I just didn't like the vintage beach dress with stupid flower mom forced me to wear. It was too childlich for the mysterious vocation girl am tryna be.
I left the pool with my hair still dripping .
The moment I stepped out the exit faced me again, that blondie dude.
I didn't know him but ever since we came to this hotel for the stay he always stared at me as if i owed him something.
His intense blue eyes didn't left mines
What was that? Why does he feel so unreal?
My sister aria voices doesn't go unnoticeable trough the hotel corridors
It made me stop by our room number and wonder if maybe she invited someone. But no,oddly sis was just there laying in her cute purple bikini watching some SNL show on tv.
âI could have sworn I heard your voice talking in the corridorsâ I told her.
She glanced at me before looking back at her tv show as she took a long sip of her ice tea âfor the last thirty minutes, I don't remember talking to anyoneâ she chuckles at something chalamet did on the big screen, mumbling âdumb pretty timâŚâ
Aria, like every biology student, happens to rumble things to herself unconsciously.
I believe that the problem is in her and not me.
I took off the ugly dress so I could finally breathe and throw myself on the comfy bed, nuzzled my head against that angelic pillow. Where do hotels find good pillows that feel like clouds?
Later that night, we ate at a nice restaurant whish was built in a wooden hut style. The forest mixed with an expensive vibe was magnetic, I enjoyed the sound of footsteps on the wooden floor.
Mom started an argument with dad because she wanted to visit the cascade of kafrida tomorrow while dad wanted to relax in the hotel pool.
I didn't really care whether it was, am good, as long as she didn't force me to wear any of her awkward dresses. Part of me wanted to stay in the pool.
The night in the hotel feels like it never existed. I collapsed in the soft mattress of the bed and soudainly it was the morning.
sipping coffee,full plates of food just for the aesthetic (i will probably just eat half of it) and strangers brushing past us with trays.
Aria put the whole brownie in her mouth and let out a soft moan "those brownies are too good"
Yeah they were but what i craved right now is nothing but a latte.
If I asked mom her answer would be like always âu already had your cup of coffee of the dayâ.
It seems unfair to me.
My cousin milles who's the same age as me drink coffee like water and me i had to respect my stupid mom role of âonly one coffee cup by day cuz youre still youngâ
âWanna go swim,Hannah?â dad asked me.
And I nodded,I just have to go wear my swimsuit first.
I tapped on my thigh waiting for the elevator to come down..
I took a moment to admire the pretty decoration of this place before the doors of the elevator swung open revealing that blue eye blondie dude. He glanced at me over his dad's shoulder looking at me up and down (he was probably taking notes of my cool bershka tshirt and ridiculous crocs) ,i respectfully said goodmorning to his parents who just ignored me.
âWhat about going to the kafrida cascade?Would you want to,lyle?â
His dad spoke as they passed me.
The blondie walked a bit too close to me-his scent travelled me.
it talked to me like a poisoned hollow choking me in a way I wanted more.
âSorryâ he mumbled with an awkward smile before following his father.
I joined dad and Aria in the pool but i didnt feel like getting wet so i just laid on the lounge chair, looking at my dad's tanned skin i took a note of the fact that dad had more hair on his torso than his head (he's bold). He and Luke were splashing water at grumpy Aria. I closed my eyes and felt a shiver of excitement run down my body when i trough:
He said sorry to me???
In the afternoon,after dad had enjoyed his bath. Mom dragged us to the car and forced dad to take us visit those waterfalls she wanted to see so badly. So here we are; stuck in the traffic in the middle of a mountain road, dad is starting to lose his patience.Unfortunately for him, there's no going back. The road in the mountain is tight,cars squeezing against other cars and loud teenage boys everywhere. We are definitively stuck here for the next few hours
My clothes were clinging on my skin and I think I forgot to put on deodorant this morning.
What a beautiful day to be all happy and musty and fucking cheesy.
Dad's shoulder finally relaxed when he found a place to park the car.
I walked out of it and looked around. Yeah we were in a mountain but under that blinding sunlight I saw no drip of water. âAre you sure we are in the right place? Whereâs the waterfall?â
âWe are in the right place,Hannah, we just have to walk a lil câmon.â Dad put on his sunglasses and fixed his cap.
When dad pulls this combo of sunglasses and cap without forgetting the âcâmonâ in the end, just know we're gonna face a long walk.
The stairs we were walking in were slowly falling and trembling.everyone kept shoving me and clinging to the other.i myself got used to it and became one of them to survive.
Aria barked up at the sign of stalls.
Looking at them,they seemed blurred and old to me, as if they had been there a century ago but seemed like I was the only one who felt the unwelcome tension it had.Even though the yellowish and ripped umbrella seemed obviously stinky to me.
The skin of my arms brushed against the wood, it was so cold it made my hair stand.
âMom can i wait for u outside-â fuck i cant beleive i lost them in this full crowd.
The aggressive sunlight dimmed everyone's face to look like a punch of soulless people.making it impossible for me to pass- got pulled to some booths. The smells of that era gave me nausea. But it had only braceletsâŚ
Everyone was making so much noises it was all meaningless but the sound of aria voice gave me life again.
I quickly made my way to her âaria!i have been looking for youâ she held a ring between her hands..âsince when do u like to wear rings?â Ari hates to wear rings; she always says it annoys her when she does.
âYeah but i wanted to try this oneâ she handed it to me âwhat do u thinkâ
The moment I took the ring it fell from my hand âshit am so sorry-why was it so sticky?âit felt like jamm on my hand. I turned to the seller. He was staring at me in an empty way, his lips were pressed together in a fine line.
I couldn't think anymore. I need to get out of here.
I punched myself through the crowd. I couldn't look at anyone.
When I finally reached the end of it.the waterfall faced me and brought some comforting shadow to the place. I could finally breathe.
For a moment,I found myself lost in the rhythm of the water,the sound of the drips on the rocks and the softness of the green leaf left me confused how some people believe that all this beauty doesn't have a creator.
Well,all that was before I noticed dad.rolled up jean to his thighs with my little brother beside him fishing in the middle of the lake just after the sign of âfishing not allowedâ
But what can i say?bald dudes like dad are just bold.
I wiped my hand on my short still feeling that stinky jammy ring between my fingers before I noticed my empty pocket..
Fuck..my phone???
I turned mentally preparing myself to return to that market stalls and BOOM-
âOh shit am so sorryâ
The blondie dude gave me his hand to help me stand up from the floor.I just pumped into him.
I cursed to myself as I stood up.soudainly i hated everyone and everyone was fucking annoying.
I couldn't hold myself but gave him a dirty look for no reason. I was pissed after all.
âUgh, I'm so sorry I'm having a shitty day and I just lost my-â he handed me my phone âhuh?..â
He rubbed the back of his neck as he let out a small shaky breath saying âi saw it fall from your pocket in the stairs.iâve been running after u but u just keep movingâ he pause and then smiled âi also felt a bit shyâ
He spoke with such softness and timidity I wanted to bite him âoh gosh am sorry and thank you so much also sorry for glaring at ya i didnt mean toâ
âNo no thats alrightâ he shook it off âits nothing after all iâve been noticing u in the hotel and through that you uh really coolâ he said the last part so awkwardly i almost thought he was mocking me.
âEuh thanks?â
âNo problemâ âŚâŚthe silence felt to awkward i even feel awkward to name it as awkward
Dad called out my name from the lake âeyo hannah!Come take a pic of us!â
He glanced over my shoulder to look at the weird men who's calling meâI think it's your dadâŚ?â
I nodded slowly noticing the weirded out look in his face âanyway i like your eyes see u aroundâ
I said before I ran to dad.
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THE DEVIL FROM FAIRYLAND Pt1
The loud sound of the thunderstorm made my eyes open widely,
At that moment,i wish i could keep them shot forever.
Its was a few minutes later after we decided to have a sleepover and watch some movies our parents would kill us if they knew we watched. Since we were left alone at our grandpa house with no adults in sign, our curiosity pickedâŚâŚ
I opened my eyes at the feeling of a toe pressed against my cheek and a woman moaning in the big screen of the living room where we all fall a sleep.i In panic, I quickly stood up to grab the remote but i stumbled at sleepy nieve in the floor causing me to fall back at dewis who punched me away.
âFuck hannah-â
âGeeez u hurted me!Why are yall sleeping on the floor?â my complaint got interrupted by a big boom from outsideâŚand dani waking up harshly gasping âwhat did I do?â
âIts probably the rainâŚâ dewis buried himself in the sofa.
Dani stayed silent for a moment confusely looking at the tv âseriously yall watching porn in a big screenâ
I turned the tv off. âAm done am going to sleepâ.
Again
A loud sound this time from the garden of the house fellowed by someone sobs.
We all froze and looked at each other unsure of what to do.
âIs it only me but i think someone fell in our garden..â naive stated with a nervous playful smile. But dani responded with more worry âall the doors are locked right?â
âYeah allâŚâ
i remembred with dewis, his dad ben told us to close all the doors when they left. Weâve closed them allâŚ
âwait!âexcept for one.
Dewis looked at me with a terrified look..
Except the kitchen oneâŚthe one who leads to the garden.
âI give no fuck hannah u goâ nieve stood up already puching me out.
âWhat hell nah! It was dewis who ignoredâ
Neive kicked dewis out as well âexcatly u two go check on what was that soundâ
âWhy do i have to be the human shield??â dewis complained as i walked behind him he was definitively very tall but too skinny to hide anyone behind him.
âShut up cuz you're the menâ i glanced outside from the kitchen window my fingers wrapped around the spoonknife i was holding to protect myself from any danger.the rain had already calmed down a bit but it still didn't stop as my eyes scan the garden. âU see anything?â
Dewis eyes moved outside âno maybe we should go outâ
Ugh i dont wanna get wet. âYeah u should probably goâ i hand him the spatula.
He stared abit with a tared sulky face before he shook his head and open the door âwhish me good luck or look whateverâ he slowly step outside looking around the courtyard of the house, his black curl fall to his foreheadâŚ. he had announce nothing weird again before he soudainly froze and run back to the kitchen closing the door a clĂŠ as if he just saw a monster..
âWhat the fuck what what?â i tried to understand but all his words were heavy breath âwhat was that cmon say it!â
âI dont know its a boy i didnt look at it well but he had wings and he looked devastated and madâ his brown eyes trembled not sure if its fear or confusion âi dont knowâ
I scoffed, a dude with wings? What an angel? âU probably imagined itâ
âI swear to god i saw itâ he cried âgo see it yourself if u dont believe meâ
I glanced outside the kitchen; a boy with wings is probably dewis hallucination but the worry still crept inside me cuz if its not a boy what is it? And if its a boy how did he even fell hereâŚ
The rain poured me and i hated the feeling of my soaked tshirt clinging to my stomach, the sound of the sobbing was still present which is making it even hard for me to approach..i tighten my grip to the spatula and finally glanced at it..
Fuck
I runned back inside âdewis dewis!â i cried to him âu didnt imagined its a its a boy with wings!â
âI TOLD U!â
âWhat should we do?should we call someone?â i asked under panic as i stroke the back of my hair..wtf maybe i also didnt saw well no no it wasâŚâŚblonde crying with big white wings around him..
âTo tell em what? An angel fell in our garden??don't be ridiculous.â dewis said mockly, cracking his finger while he try to thinkâŚhe oponned the garden door again.
âWhere are u going?â i fellowed behind him.
âCheck on him..maybe heâs not harmfulâŚâ he tocked the boy with a wooden stick and he just brush him off as if he was already pissed by us. âWho are you?â
âLeave me aloneâ he spoke in a moody way.
I exchanged a look with dewis.
I think its too early too say i wanna punch him like why are u acting bratty when your literally crying in our fucking garyard.âU cant infiltrate in our garden and tell us to leaveâ
He just hid between himself even more, fellowed with some few sniffs.
âMaybe we can help you?â dewis waited a few second for answer from the boy but he just got nothing..
âThe fuck wrong with himâ i told dewis.
âWe can't even call the policeâ
The winged boy picked his head out and stood a glance at us. Curiously.
âCall who?â
We looked at him.
âThe policeâ
He stayed silent for a moment before he looked away again âyeah whateverâ
Dewis sigh and cursed under his breath âjust ask him why heâs cryingâ
I knee down not very close to him âat least tell us why are youâ despite my botherness by him, my question came out softly.
âBecause i just give her a kiss! And they throw me out" he cracked up causing both of us to froze to his burst out.
âEh-â and he interrupted me.
âWe didnt even had sex yet..â he soalked and wrop himself back.
I stood in silent with dewis cuz wtf?
Dewis looked up at the cleared sky now âwhere actually did they kick you out from?â
âI don't know,â he said. His behavior is still moody.âsomewhere upâ
Somewhere up? Heâs not helping at all.
I walked back in side.
âWhere are u going? We not gonna leave him hereâ dewis called after me
âTell him to come insideâ
âTell who?â Daniel and nieve popped bihind me before walking out.
âOh my goshâ nieve stared at the creatur crashed in our garden âis he alive??â
Dani tried to poke his shoulder.
And he opened his wings revealing his bare perfect body. âDont touch me!â
âWhat a dickâŚ.â dewis stared as he laughed âhannah! Bring him something to wearâ
âDont tell me his nakedâ
âBare nakedâ
âWhat should I even bring him? At least one of the boy come with me i dont wanna look through your underwearsâ
âOh my gosh u girls are so dramaticâ dewis turned his attention back to daniel and nieve who keep annoying the angel. âDani go with hannah bring him some clothesâ
âAm not gonna share my boxers with himâ
âAre we gonna tell the adults about him?â I asked from the kitchen.
âI dont know they will probably throw him outâ nieve stated. He stroke the boy blond hair.
âI dont wanna throw him out am pretty curious about him. Did he told yall anything about him?â
âHe said he fell from somwhere upâ
âAnd that he got thrown out because he kissed a girlâ
âDONT TALK ABOUT IT LIKE THAT!â
My breath made a backflip in my stomach when He quickly stood up and made his way toward me while blaming me and pointing me. His tears still fell as i tried my best not to look down his body.
âWow chill broo!â The boys tried to stop him and calm him down but i had already close the door a cleĚ.
âWe all have been dumped in our lives" the angel looked up at dewis surprised.
âSo u were also thrown out?â
âEuh nah it doesn't work like that hereâŚâ
THSHOW
Exposed pt2
Getting sam to the HQ wasnt as hard as i through after all treating him with all his dirty work he had done he do not have so much choices
Wane needed him to gather more information from someone he knew sam have been working for since forever.
He sat silently in the HQ large living room, shoulder tense , his usual amused expression was replaced by his pretty lips pressed together and norrowed eyes full of rushing throughs and his black hair as messy as usual.
âDrugs, murder of the prince lee, the jawery of seanâs spouse and alot of dirty work in those only two weeksâ wane named while showing proof and papersâpeople usually do all those in years but you're not as clever as you think you areâ
Sam didn't respond and didn't glance at me at all since the bar. Whish was a good thing cuz i also wasnt ready to face him but looking at him like that his situation and whats the future is preparing for him; i guess we've lost the old vexley forever.
âWhat do u want from me?â sam finally lashed out.
âNothingâ the boss shrug nonchalantly âjust a few filesâ wane smiled proud of himself before it quickly drop again after sam vexley very serious question.
âFrom who?â
âParkâ
His eyes widened in terror âpark jae-hyong?â
He just nodded.
Sam vexlley face said fuck without really saying it.
âSince yall are close i guess u know what heâs preparingâ
Again, Sam remainded silent looking away from wane but his body language said something diffĂŠrent at all,more like fear and hisitationâŚ
âHm?âinsisted âhe might be planning to ruin something else? something way more bigger than he migh think isâ wane talked with a slow tone while eying nervous lil sam.
âSince u know what he planing why am i hereâ sam spoke coldly
âI dont really i just pretend i do u knowâ wane shrug and gave us a charming smile âbut i know u have been attending every week his sunday meeting so spell it outâ
Sam's defiant dark eyes scanned the room we were in; a simple rest room in the middle of a large working building.
âPark is starting a fake warâ
âC'est-Ă -dire?â fake wars are only made for distraction even a teenager would have guess it the real question is a distraction from what?
Sam turned his face to me when i asked and for the first time tonight he held eye contact with me, he stared at my eyes until they shiver.
âCreat the chaos and sell the cureâ he turned his look to wane âto erase his devilish act and become someone noble over again"
âWhat act this time?â my innocent question caused sam and wane to exchange a look which made confusion creep in me before wane answer it. âPark career is full of acts and dirt he got everything to hideâ he yawn âalright fellas its late, ace take sam to his new room we gonna talk tomorrowâ
THSHOW
EXPOSED part1
I would lie if i said Sam Vaxley was just another mission from HQ
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I wore a tshirt over my red dress, I looked too good in that dress to be seen, I had to keep it to myself. I accompanied it with my black boots and wore my hair down as I said in the bar with the connection of the world of crime, a drug dealer and a charming manipulator. Sam vexley had a dark reputation; he wasn't afraid to solve problems in a dirty way. At first he freaked me out when Wane proposed to me the mission. I mean who wouldn't freak out to be called to bring the killer of your best friend. It excited me at the same time I've always wanted revenge so why bring him in the easy way when u can date him and break his heart into pieces. But you know once i got to know him ive realise heâs just another fucker.
I let out a heavy sigh as I turned my face back to him âare u even listening to me??â
âOf course i am what making u think am not?â sam said confusely obviously tryna keep his composure with me. Poor guy ive been snapping at him the whole day for no reason hah after the end of the mission i will for sure miss this.
âNo you're not!â i complained âjust say that you don't love me.â I took a sip of my wine.
Sam eyebrow almost meet each other âthat's bullshit stellaâ he took a sip of my glass of wine âyouâre kicking up fussâ he runned his hand over his non-existent mustache.
I checked the time..only one minute left.
âSo why donât u ever say it to-â before i could finish my phrase he catched my lips in a soft kiss and i forgot i was just playing stella. He wrapped his arms around my head and spoke and his nose tickled mine as he spoke in a sweet voice âcuz i i love you so much that i forget toâ.
And like that the light of the club turns off, fellowed with an applause.
âMission completed;â Wane voice lingered in the empty club âproud of you alexaâ
Sam looked around not understanding a shit. He holded me close in a protective way. He glanced around to see if this guy was talking to him.
And here comes the moment.
The one ive been waiting since i started dating him and ever since Wane talked to me about him.
I pulled away from him and walked to chan trying to keep it professional cuz i know if i looked at him i would break out too.âenfin, youâve toke your timeâ
Wane smirked âive gotta wait intil the bar closesâ
âStellaâŚâ Sam blurted his widen eyes. I looked into those trembling brown holes and I hated to admit it made my heart shrink.
I did not respond nor showed him the satisfaction that I cared for him. Thereâs no more Stella, it would be too unprofessional for Alexa to show that weakness.
My boots tapped the wooden floor in a beat ive always loved how those ticks sounded.
âStay alex dont leave me alone with himâ wane called out.
âNon am dead tared-â
The club doors shot wide open âAlexa!â revealing ace screaming in my face again. He wrapped his arm around my shoulders draggin me back inside. âWhereâs the guy who stole our lil alexa heart huhh!â
âSay waneâ i blasted âwhats that prick doing here??â
âSorry a prick!?â Ace interrupted his tone always in high pitches âno one ever called me a prick!-â
My hand found her way and slapped his blondie head âshut up you seagull! Did u even brush your teeths before you come screaming in my face?â
âOf course i did!and what did wane told you about insulting me!â
âSorry you alway bring out the best insults out of meâ
âEnough or am gonna fire both of youâ Wane ordered in a furious tone the kind of tone that could break walls, i could already imagine the fire behind that well shaped body and handsome face.
I toke a seat beside ace.
âWheres Sam?"
Wane quickly looked around and groaned at his soudain absence âvoila thats what you wanted?âhis gaze moved between me and ace before he throw his arm in the air âget up go bring him back he got no here to go the guards are all aroundâ
THSHOW
THE MORALE PALACE
I don't remember anything else than fire
âAlexa where did mom go? We cant stay alone in this chaosâ my sister yapped as she holded my hand pulling me through our family enormous palace,running between corridors and trying to escape all the shots and weird mens,she was troubling and sweating so much but she didnt had another choice than to be brave sinon i remember my older sister was spoiled asf.
I didnt realise how traumatic the moment was until I was older and people randomly comforted me about it.
âgirls ! girlsâ uncle ben jumped waving at us to come over but the way his belly jumped with him distracted me abit âhurry!over hereâ he toke us between his arms and made sure we were okey and werent hurt before he murmured something very serious to my sister;all i heard was âtake care pretty everything gonna be okeyâ
Whish is the biggest lie of my life cause after we hided in the guest room and the fire got worst it started eating everything the moment we left the room; a boy holded the lifeless body of alex my alexa between his arms before he carried him inside the fire
âAnd whoâs alex?â the officer asked alexa.
âWhoâs alex?â alexa let out a breath âalex use to be everything for me he wasnt just a servant in the palace he was my best friendâ
The officer took notes âAnd do u remember the boy who killed him?did u ever try to look for him?â
Alexa smile widen âof course!its my boyfriendâ
THSHOW
THE COUNTRY OF KIDS another part
âTake em anywayâ jack leaned in his seat boredly as he pointed at them âno take the boys keep the tall girlâ
The kids walked chris and leo to an escalator.Chris Wagner shotted alexa one last scared worried look before they escalade down.
The escalator swam down like an old man;old and fragile.Chris followed the kids and walked not even five steps taking a glance at the locked room next to them before the enter another escalator this one seems in a better state he went down they walked again toke another escalator walked toke another escalator but this one moved up right left we walked again toke another escalator passed by sleeping baby toke another escalator went down then walked and went up small corridors more messy room locked room toke another escalator to go down more sleeping babies and young children walked straight another escalator we go up end up to our first station but we walked to the left the found a wall full of yellow police tape.the kids toke un roulaux and tied chris and leo before locking them in the cage.
Meanwhile alexa waiting in the room with the chubby girl who bossed around and annoying boy jack who keep complaining.the baby sat next to her and rumbled unknown words as he showed her his guns collections;
The baby spoke holding the gun machine showing it to alexa âtshidub hzbyzy abezbduâ
âOh yeah thats the 47â she examined the heavy shooting iron âam not a fan of guns but dad use to be a huge one he brought me once the ak-12â
The baby nodded and brought her another weapon âbeubygeg tt hhbueâ
âA classic tt pistol.!through dad use to have lemat revolver 42 one of the best shooter ive ever seenâ
The baby's mouth fell open and eyes widened in surprise and jealousy.
âAlright boy wrap it around her armsâ the chubby girl commended the kids who came back from the cage and wrapped around arm the yellow crime tape.
Alexa began walking with the chubby girl. She was short but walked with her head up as if she owned and calculated every little and big piece that passed by us.
âSoâ she tapped her hands together whipping them from imaginary dusk âam Stella Eldegno am the main leader here before my cousin jack fellow me here we let him call himself also the leader just so he doesn't throw a montando en coleraâ she rolled her eyes before she look back alexa.
âAlexa triggerâ
Stella nodded.
âSo this is the country of kids where no one have to worry about dirt everyone do whatever they wanna do only if give something to our countryâ
âLike whatâ
âU soon gonna know-
I love how lonely people are in this app lol
THSHOW
THE COUNTRY OF KIDS part four or i dont know jsp
Our three characters open their eyes, hands and legs tied inside a large room looking like a basement or a cave. It had dirty old walls avec de la moisissure, toys and clothes,shoes thrown almost everywhere. Facing them a big chair between two small ones and here it comes; a pretty girl bigger than the other child's She had long hair, chubby body and wore a purple tank top and a jorts .She talked with another boy; shorter, dark curls and olive skin. He seemed more childlich and tryna act dominant since he kept rumbling and complaining about something he wanted. Alexa looked at her coworker who was still off but next to him the bold boy seemed widely awake, his expression exhausted like bored. Some small hands tagged on alexa shirt.a small big blue eyed baby still wearing dippers stared at her.
âBram?â the girl hurried to the baby and the other boy just smirked and put his hands inside his dirty jeans staring right at them.
âTien tienâ took steps closer;the bold boy quickly pretended he was still asleep."Look who's finally awakeâ he stood his face inches from alexa face she just kept it silent trying to nudge chris nudge chris who just snored even more.
The baby threw a gun at him.
âWhat?!â he gasped but quickly calmed down confusedly as he looked at himself and around before he looked at Alexa, his face translating understanding and a bit of insecurity.
âOpen your eyes leo i know you're awakeâordered the curly haired boy and bald boy obeyed. âWhere did you hide your stolen ds?â
âAt my placeâ
âLiar liar potatoes on your pantâ singsonged curly boy as he run his index inside his nose âi was at your place searched everywhere and i didnt found itâ
The baby laugh filled the room.
âJack, come here and take careâ said the girl as she settled the baby down but quickly got cut by the boy.
âDont command me i do whatever i want and if i want that ds and those cool rings imma have themâ shooted as he made his way to the chair and sat crossing his arms.
âSoâ studied them the girl "didn't know we have guest today huh leoâ
Her eyes shot at the two adults.
Chris gulped and Alexa just stared back unfazed. Before he whispered in alexa ear to tell them the tailor tyler sent them. âWhite Tyler or black Tyler?â she whispered back. â I don't know one of themâ protested chris so they just let them go.
âThe tailor tyler sent usâ repeated Alexa.
âAnd what do u need?â
Alexa looked at Chris to tell her they answer who whispered again in her ear.
âWe need the skinless tissueâ repeated Alexa.
âThat's all?â said the girl, causing alexa to exchange a look with chris.why was it so easy?
They nodded and the kids just scoffed and laughed as if Alexa and Chris were just total idiots.
âEuhâŚ.how much is itâ
The baby laughed so hard that he threw the gun at Chris again.
After her last chuckles, The girl shifted back to a serious tone âno adult are allowed to know about the country of kidsâ
âŚ.tension filled the room letting no word left to say.
âTake emâ ordered as two a few kids came to hold us.
âWhat hey hey!What do u mean take them!to where??â Chris complained as he dodged the kids.
âTo the cageâ said nonchalantly rolling straights of her long hair between her fingers âthen we see what we gonna do about u-â
âBut who told ya we are adultesâ alexa dead stared at the girl who raised her eyebrow at her.
âHow old are you?â
â25-â
â6â
Chris and the kids looked at Alexa confusely.
âTake em anywayâ jack leaned in his seat boredly as he pointed at them âno take the boys keep the tall girlâ
The kids walked chris and leo to an escalator.Chris Wagner shotted alexa one last scared worried look before they escalade down.
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ANOTHER LOOK AT THE COUNTRY OF KIDS part three
The country of kids was a big landfill but in an organized way, in a way a 6yo girl would tidy her room and build houses out of blankets and chairs. It had a big poncart with some rules written on it.
Rule number one of the country of kids:
Never get attached to anyone
Another rule of the country of kids:
No kid over than 9yo
âAm living you hereâ said the bald boy âwatch outâ
âYouâre not coming with us?â chris stopped him when the little one turned his back.
The bold little boy hesitated, heâs expression still guarded as fuck before before he shook his head and frown and he walked in his little shoulder slightly tension.
Alexa and chris exchanged a look before they fellow him inside
The place was a big mess, few kids were there, all of them side eyed our bald one as they whispered among themselves looking at us.
Chris banded a bit trying to communicate with the bald boy âhey kidâŚwho are u really uh i mean like whats your name?â
The kid kept walking straight, shooting Chris a side glance before shifting away âdid I ask you about yours?â
â..euh noâŚâ
âSo mind your businessâ and big gunshots started causing alexa and chris to jumpscared.
âThe fuck was that?â Alexa complained and a little girl glared at her widened eyes and unreadable face. Otherwise, the kids stayed unfazed as they all minded their things.
âIn the country of kids;kids play with guns,â said the bald child.
âI hate gunsâ informed us Alexa since she had always been more like a physical person.
Chris stepped on a dark very red fluid fresh and new a bit sticky causing wagner to froze giving him nausea before more than three big shots sound fall at them-
THSHOW
LET'S TAKE A LOOK AT THE COUNTRY OF KIDS EPISODE part two
âI AMâ the scary man began talking in a stoic voice as he pointed to himself leaving small suspense with every word with a very black rapper accent. âthe famous tylerâ he stopped and stared at them âbig black guyâ he stopped again âwho sells tissue for tyler shopâ. His shoulder relaxed, the look in his eyes soften as he said in a more sweet tone âam not the famous tailor tylerâŚam blackâ
â i think jacqaline told u the tailor tyler was black..âshe then glanced up at chris asking in secretive way âdid she?â
âI don't knowâ
The tailor looked between us wondering âi dont think so just give it a callâ
Chris looked at alexa who just shrugged âi left my ipad at ELèNEâ
âIpad? What about a phoneâ
âI said i have an ipadâ alexa told him
The black tailor Tyler took them to the fourth floor,showed them the way to the real tailor tyler and left them in a very lovely way which made our characters miss him already.
But he was right, the tailor they were looking for wasn't black but a white young man with african tresses who smoked de lâherbe and try to act tough; unfortunately, the skinless tissue was an issue, its almost always off limits he said âthe skinless tissue is usual sew in the country of kids so there's only one way to have itâ and he shrugged,gave them the map and made their wayâŚ.
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âI feel like I got sand between my toes"Alexa complained with an exhausted voice every step was getting weaker than the last one.her heels hand ripped through her wideleg jeans.chris look like about to faint in any moment,his eyes almost shot from the sun hit,he raised his hand to point at something moving maybe an animal or something âwhats that..âthe words hardly came out like a husky tone. Alexa narrowed her eyes but the heat made her vision blurred before something came out from somewhere between all that sand,something standing it almost looked human as it stared at them small half alexa hight wearing a blue short and a dirty red shirt alexa toke some steps closer fellowed by chris until they finally saw it- its a kid!
âEy!-kiddoâchris sounded like a tared predator trying to reach for the little bald kid.
The little boy flinched as he stared at them as if he just saw a ghost. âwho are uâ asked in a defensive tone."They through us to not talk to strangersâ
âI knowâ Chris tried to reassure him âbut we j-â
Alexa cutted him looking closely to the boy âchris are u sure heâs real and not some kind of mirageâ
Chrisâno it cant i think mirage have something to do with waterâ
âIve got waterâ the lil kid said.
Alexa gave chris a bored look âcmonâ she pulled him by his arm âlets go we still got a long walk to doâ
âBut-!â he tried to complain.
âNo chris that kid is not even realâ
They turned their back to walk away before the kid called them out âthe country of kids is that wayâ.
The wind passed in slow motion. As the duo stare at the bald boy âdid u come from there?â asked Chris.
The kid nodded, keeping the cold and distant act as he stared right back at them.
Alexa dark layers waved in the air few âTake usâ
THSHOW
Let's take a look at THE COUNTRY OF KIDS episode
THEY SAID THEY EAT KIDS IN THE COUNTRY OF KIDS
BUT ALEXA IS A 21YEARS OLD ADULT
SHE COULD NEVER IMAGINE HER SELF KNEEING TO A BLONDIE ENFANT
PRESSING A GUN AGAINST HER FOREHEAD.
Ever since jacqualine shaw brought her asian ass to the label,
Coming after her was the finance dude Chris Wagner.
ELèNE is no longer faillite.
It got saved with jacqualine weird dancing mens add; i dont know what it has to do with bags.
âGoshh!i hate the bigus center i dont wanna goâ alexa complained as she drowned her whole body down her boyfriend rolling desk chair. âIt's empty, you can never find anything in it!â
Sam pulled his chair back revealing alexa pouting like a little girl âget up of my deskâ
Alexa wore a ripped Calvin Klein jean and some old thrifted top,she ruffled her brown layers back as she kept whining about the task in hand but as soon as jacqualine heels started knocking the office floor Alexa jumped at herâheres shaw! Why dont she go shopping in my place she seem in formâ
âU going to the bigus center?â jacqualine asked âif its a yes don't forget to bring me the skinless tissueâ
Alexa groaned âWhat the fuck is even thatâ
âJust tell the tailor tyler black guy he will give it to yaâ
Alexa whined again and punched an imaginary rock with her feet before she crossed her arms and sat on Sam's lap with a sulky face. âI am a model! And face of this stupid brandâ
With a long sigh vexley leaned his head back and wrapped his arms lazily around his girlfriend waist âwe knowâ
âSo why should i go shopping for bullshit tissue and not u or the asian boobsless girl or that finance dude chris who never leaves his deskâ alexa stopped then asked in a quieter tone âwait where's the âbritish womenâ?â mimic the british accent at the end.
Sam brushed his eyebrow with his fingers âI told ELèNE to fire her, she is too annoying but anyway-CHRIS!â he called out Chris who just leaned back his chair and glanced at them from his desk in the other end of the studio , answering him âyeah?â before staring back at his computer screen.
âU doneâ
âAlmostâ
âAmazing-â sam vexley tapped alexa thigh âget up,loveâ
âChris wagner gonna go with you to the bigus centerâ
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Chris Wagner drove with alexa to the bigus center;it was a larger and big cube written at the top âthe bigus center" .But first he stopped the car across the mall next to some small bar with small light barely noticeable. Alexa shot him a wondering look before he undid his seat belt and spoke nervously avoiding eye contact with Alexa "I'll be right backâ and he got out of the car and walked to the small discreet bar. Alexa took note of the sign of his kissable rossie lips and messy aussie hair she found very attractiveâŚ.
After less than five minutes,Chris made his way back to the car looking a bit more confident than he was a few minutes ago, he threw a gin bottle in the back seat and faced his steering wheel âalright let go.â
Alexa walked with Chris inside the bigus center;it was a very big center,filled with stores and unknown brands that weirdly seemed pretty known but unlike usual shopping center this one is immune to crown,our two co-worker seem the only crown thereâŚalexa eyes were all over chris she found his strong appearance and shy demeanor very cute and impressive. He so handsome through alexa to herself.
âWhat are we supposed to do?â Chris' voice broke alexa fantasies scenarios about him. She walked closer and answered âthe tailor tyler black guy..â alexa putted her hands around chris muscled arm,watching him with fascination before he glanced down at her quickly looked awayâjacqualine needed the uhâ she paused and through trying to remember what jacqualine needed âthe the-fuckâ she looked back at chris wagner,their brown eyes found each other,his lips his nose his eyebrow his jaw⌠alexa sighed âstop looking at me like that u make me wet.â
Alexa words caught Wagner off guard.caused him to blink twice and shook his head quickly âwhat no-alexa-am not ugh!â he looked away and shot his eyes close âam not looking at you okay?â
Gosh my name sounded so goodâŚ
Her hands brushed softly against Chris arms as she through out loud âi think its a skinless tissue..i dont knowâ
The tailor's tyler black guy tailor store was on the second floor, a dusty room made of fake wood named the famous tyler the tailor big black guy who sells tissue for tailors shops.
Alexa and Chris exchanged a glance before they entered the old shop. Like its name described; Tyler was a real black guy. He got that dirty interesting fashion style that screamed am African and proud black men, which Alexa really appreciated..
âAlexa u speak firstâ chris murmured to alexa nervously.his hands clutching alexa shoulder walking behind her but alexa quickly pulled back to push him first âno i dont want to!â.
Chris' lips disappeared in a tin line as he glanced down at Alexa,she could've swore she saw his pupils tremblingâokey okey we go togetherâ he said holding alexa arm as if she could protect him from the black men.
Alexa and Chris stood in the room full of tissue and threads,facing the black men's huge back. Chris patted on his shoulder nervously but the black men immediately aggressively turned and glared down at them causing the two co-workers to yelp and squeeze against each other.
The tailor glared at their faces letting out a loud huff waiting for them to speak but they just stared back awkwardly.
âH-hey d-dâ chris words catched his tongue as he stared right at thick black tyler guy intense green eyes âthe skinless tissueâŚâ Wagner's tone made him seem so small. Alexa didn't leave his arm; she clung to him tightly, staring at that dude.
âI AMâ the scary man began talking in a stoic voice as he pointed to himself leaving small suspense with every word with a very black rapper accent. âthe famous tylerâ he stopped and stared at them âbig black guyâ he stopped again âwho sells tissue for tyler shopâ. His shoulder relaxed, the look in his eyes soften as he said in a more sweet tone âam not the famous tailor tylerâŚam blackâ
Have u ever heard of Hannah story?
hannah lambert got a crush on a cute boy during her summer vocation with her familly fastforward he became her new classmate new nighbor and weird shift start to happenâŚâŚ
PART TWO
SUMMER VOCATION
In the afternoon,after dad had enjoyed his bath. Mom dragged us to the car and forced dad to take us visit those waterfalls she wanted to see so badly. So here we are; stuck in the traffic in the middle of a mountain road, dad is starting to lose his patience.Unfortunately for him, there's no going back. The road in the mountain is tight,cars squeezing against other cars and loud teenage boys everywhere. We are definitively stuck here for the next few hours
My clothes were clinging on my skin and I think I forgot to put on deodorant this morning.
What a beautiful day to be all happy and musty and fucking cheesy.
Dad's shoulder finally relaxed when he found a place to park the car.
I walked out of it and looked around. Yeah we were in a mountain but under that blinding sunlight I saw no drip of water. âAre you sure we are in the right place? Whereâs the waterfall?â
âWe are in the right place,Hannah, we just have to walk a lil câmon.â Dad put on his sunglasses and fixed his cap.
When dad pulls this combo of sunglasses and cap without forgetting the âcâmonâ in the end, just know we're gonna face a long walk.
The stairs we were walking in were slowly falling and trembling.everyone kept shoving me and clinging to the other.i myself got used to it and became one of them to survive.
Aria barked up at the sign of stalls.
Looking at them,they seemed blurred and old to me, as if they had been there a century ago but seemed like I was the only one who felt the unwelcome tension it had.Even though the yellowish and ripped umbrella seemed obviously stinky to me.
The skin of my arms brushed against the wood, it was so cold it made my hair stand.
âMom can i wait for u outside-â fuck i cant beleive i lost them in this full crowd.
The aggressive sunlight dimmed everyone's face to look like a punch of soulless people.making it impossible for me to pass- got pulled to some booths. The smells of that era gave me nausea. But it had only braceletsâŚ
Everyone was making so much noises it was all meaningless but the sound of aria voice gave me life again.
I quickly made my way to her âaria!i have been looking for youâ she held a ring between her hands..âsince when do u like to wear rings?â Ari hates to wear rings; she always says it annoys her when she does.
âYeah but i wanted to try this oneâ she handed it to me âwhat do u thinkâ
The moment I took the ring it fell from my hand âshit am so sorry-why was it so sticky?âit felt like jamm on my hand. I turned to the seller. He was staring at me in an empty way, his lips were pressed together in a fine line.
I couldn't think anymore. I need to get out of here.
I punched myself through the crowd. I couldn't look at anyone.
When I finally reached the end of it.the waterfall faced me and brought some comforting shadow to the place. I could finally breathe.
For a moment,I found myself lost in the rhythm of the water,the sound of the drips on the rocks and the softness of the green leaf left me confused how some people believe that all this beauty doesn't have a creator.
Well,all that was before I noticed dad.rolled up jean to his thighs with my little brother beside him fishing in the middle of the lake just after the sign of âfishing not allowedâ
But what can i say?bald dudes like dad are just bold.
I wiped my hand on my short still feeling that stinky jammy ring between my fingers before I noticed my empty pocket..
Fuck..my phone???
I turned mentally preparing myself to return to that market stalls and BOOM-
âOh shit am so sorryâ
The blondie dude gave me his hand to help me stand up from the floor.I just pumped into him.
I cursed to myself as I stood up.soudainly i hated everyone and everyone was fucking annoying.
I couldn't hold myself but gave him a dirty look for no reason. I was pissed after all.
âUgh, I'm so sorry I'm having a shitty day and I just lost my-â he handed me my phone âhuh?..â
He rubbed the back of his neck as he let out a small shaky breath saying âi saw it fall from your pocket in the stairs.iâve been running after u but u just keep movingâ he pause and then smiled âi also felt a bit shyâ
He spoke with such softness and timidity I wanted to bite âoh gosh am sorry and thank you so much also sorry for glaring at ya i didnt mean toâ
âNo no thats alrightâ he shook it off âits nothing after all iâve been noticing u in the hotel and through that you uh really coolâ he said the last part so awkwardly i almost thought he was mocking me.
âEuh thanks?â
âNo problemâ âŚâŚthe silence felt to awkward i even feel awkward to name it as awkward
Dad called out my name from the lake âeyo hannah!Come take a pic of us!â
He glanced over my shoulder to look at the weird me who's calling meâI think it's your dadâŚ?â
I nodded slowly noticing the weirded out look in his face âanyway i like your eyes see u aroundâ
I said before I ran to dad.
Have u ever heard of hannah story?
hannah lambert got a crush on a cute boy during her summer vocation with her familly fastforward he became her new classmate new nighbor and weird shift start to happenâŚâŚ
LETS TAKE A LITTLE LOOK:
INTRODUCTION:
 Finn livelaugher was a great clown.
He wore his red nose so well it made me wonder if it was actually his mom we killed this morning.
 engin sat next to me and leaned back, his long red tail twitching with every breath, his arms were tight, making every almost every muscle visbleÂ
He rubbed his face and grunt âlyle fucked us againâ Â
PART ONE:
SUMMER VOCATION
 âYeah mom-I mean no i just got boredâ i slipped my crocs, holding my phone between my shoulder and ear while folding up the towel to leave the tronzade âam heading to the roomâÂ
In fact, I just didn't like the vintage beach dress with stupid flower mom forced me to wear. It was too childlich for the mysterious vocation girl am tryna be.
I left the pool with my hair still dripping .
The moment I stepped out the exit faced me again, that blondie dude.
I didn't know him but ever since we came to this hotel for the stay he always stared at me as if i owed him something.
His intense blue eyes didn't left minesÂ
What was that? Why does he feel so unreal?
        My sister aria voices doesn't go unnoticeable trough the hotel corridorsÂ
It made me stop by our room number and wonder if maybe she invited someone. But no,oddly sis was just there laying in her cute purple bikini watching some SNL show on tv.Â
âI could have sworn I heard your voice talking in the corridorsâ I told her.
She glanced at me before looking back at her tv show as she took a long sip of her ice tea âfor the last thirty minutes, I don't remember talking to anyoneâ she chuckles at something chalamet did on the big screen, mumbling âdumb pretty timâŚâ
  Aria, like every medecine student, happens to rumble things to herself unconsciously.
I believe that the problem is in her and not me.
I took off the ugly dress so I could finally breathe and throw myself on the comfy bed, nuzzled my head against that angelic pillow. Where do hotels find good pillows that feel like clouds?Â
               Later that night, we ate at a nice restaurant whish was built in a wooden hut style. The forest mixed with an expensive vibe was magnetic, I enjoyed the sound of footsteps on the wooden floor.
Mom started an argument with dad because she wanted to visit the cascade of kafrida tomorrow while dad wanted to relax in the hotel pool.
I didn't really care whether it was, am good, as long as she didn't force me to wear any of her awkward dresses. Part of me wanted to stay in the pool.
       The night in the hotel feels like it never existed. I collapsed in the soft mattress of the bed and soudainly it was the morning.
sipping coffee,full plates of food just for the aesthetic (i will probably just eat half of it) and strangers brushing past us with trays.
 Aria put the whole brownie in her mouth and let out a soft moan "those brownies are too good"Â
Yeah they were but what i craved right now is nothing but a latte.
If I asked mom her answer would be like always âu already had your cup of coffee of the dayâ.
 It seems unfair to me.
My cousin milles who's the same age as me drink coffee like water and me i had to respect my stupid mom role of âonly one coffee cup by day cuz youre still youngâ
âWanna go swim,Hannah?â dad asked me.
And I nodded,I just have to go wear my swimsuit first.
              I tapped on my thigh waiting for the elevator to come down..
I took a moment to admire the pretty decoration of this place before the doors of the elevator swung open revealing that blue eye blondie dude. He glanced at me over his dad's shoulder looking at me up and down (he was probably taking notes of my cool bershka tshirt and ridiculous crocs)Â ,i respectfully said goodmorning to his parents who just ignored me.
âWhat about going to the kafrida cascade?Would you want to,lyle?âÂ
His dad spoke as they passed me.
The blondie walked a bit too close to me-his scent travelled me.
it talked to me like a poisoned hollow choking me in a way I wanted more.
âSorryâ he mumbled with an awkward smile before following his father.
         I joined dad and Aria in the pool but i didnt feel like getting wet so i just laid on the lounge chair, looking at my dad's tanned skin i took a note of the fact that dad had more hair on his torso than his head (he's bold). He and Luke were splashing water at grumpy Aria. I closed my eyes and felt a shiver of excitement run down my body when i trough:
He said sorry to me???