Some sort of WIP/things I write on my phone while my laptop is away
Some of you mightâve notice that I write stuff, even tho Iâve never actually finished or posted anything original. Some people have asked me about my stories and I thought about posting this scene (that I wrote yesterday, for no apparent reason) as a little, like, taste of what I do? Itâs really just to see how it goes and if I should post the whole story here.
This is a small scene from an original piece Iâm working on, the portion of context I can have is that the characters are on opposite sides, one has been kidnapped and the other really enjoys it.
The whole story has a LOT of trigger warnings, this scene is a quite chill one, but Iâd say there are influences of abuse and, like, malicious influences? Be warned.
I took inspiration for this scene from the Unravelling series written by @the-darklings so I wanna thank them for being such an AMAZING writer and such an inspiration, holy shit, I love you and your work.
Be aware that English is not my first language so I apologize for any mistakes I mightâve missed, hope you enjoy it! Please let me know!
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Mackenzieâs body wouldnât stop shaking, she could feel the warmth coming up from her stomach and how it slapped her cheeks, she felt tears burning her eyes and the headache that arrived with them. She thought about how she would feel her legs shaking if they still had any movement, but those legs would be shaking out of anxiety for kicking the face that stared at her from above, how they wanted to break that victorious smile and smash that jawline.
Nathan, however, looked at her like an animal would at a wounded prey, and heâd love the opportunity to taste her. Mackenzieâs anger seemed to be the perfect spice.
He leaned in to shorten the distance between them, he loved to watch the panic growing inside her eyes. The feeling made something crawl and shake on his guts, some sort of colorful anxiety.
- Easy - he whispered, Mackenzie could see the second thoughts by the corner of his crooked smile - Thereâs nothing to worry about..
Nathan felt Mackenzieâs sloppy movements and grabbed her by her left wrist seconds before her open hand hit his face. Her eyes gave another hint of fear, he knew how to read it in her pupils. Mackenzie thought, not for the first time, about the mistakes sheâd made so far.
Nathan licked his lips and while shaking his head in disapproval of Mackenzieâs childish weakness. He knew all the differences between her and her sister, but he couldnât avoid noticing their similarities. Mackenzieâs nostrils would shake upon her feeling trapped, as would Madisonâs. He took torturing seconds to admire the freckles painted on her face, the images they formed and how they seemed to mirror the ones Madison had.
His fingers squeezed Mackenzieâs wrists and she felt that her nerves could snap at any given moment. Nathanâs gaze could undress her, and she hated being read like that.
Nathanâs smile became a vicious one, he came in closer until he could hear her heart running faster.
She was a prey, and the one he wanted.
- You wanna try that again, sweetheart?