Maybe I request Luffy x reader smut⊠he eats you out. Luffy seems like a muncher
a.n: Thanks for the request! I love how we as a fandom collectively agree that Luffy loves to eat someone out. It's AMAZING but i'll do us one better as well: Luffy NOT ONLY loves oral but he's a good listener while he does it HELLO. Sorry for the delay Iâve had writers block for DAYS.
Added more than just oral since I know for a fact he would not just end there. So itâs full on smut friend.
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Body Language: Luffy x AFAB!reader
Luffy missed you so he snuck into your sleeping quarters to be with you. Next thing you know, he's eating you out for the first time plus some more.
warning: Oral sex (eating out), mention of fingering leading to intercourse (d in v) that results in biting and marking. kind of rough but not intentionally.
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Listening to your body was your biggest strength.Â
When it came down to taking care of yourself, knowing your limits, your likes and dislikes, you learned a long time ago how to accommodate your own needs. Unapologetically, one of those non-negotiables was sleep. Especially out on the sea, where chaos had a habit of blooming without warning with a crew like the Strawhats, you always expected trouble every second of the day. It was only natural that you began settling into your sleeping quarters long before the rest of the crew did on the Thousand Sunny.
Zoro had teased you relentlessly when you first joined, calling you boring, that you were lame for checking in early. However, his words never bothered you. You liked the silence and isolation that it brought. The quiet hum of the ship at night felt like a lullaby, one that soothed nerves worn thin by battle and sea spray. While the others laughed and argued on deck, you slipped into routines that felt grounding. You were usually the first to shower, letting the warm water wash the salt from your skin. You lathered yourself with oils and lotions collected from passing islands, scents that reminded you of places you might never return to. Then you would curl up with one of Robinâs books, the soft weight of a blanket pulled to your chin, and let yourself rest.
That night had been no different.Â
You had already changed into your set sleepwear, hair still faintly damp, book resting open on your chest as your eyes fluttered closed. The grave mistake of reading and laying down on your side, your eyes started to droop midread. The ship creaked gently around you, the world narrowing to the quiet rhythm of your breathing. There was a fuzziness that utterly coated over you, your body slipping into sleep.Â
Then your door opened. It was just a soft, careful creak that lingered in, like someone trying very hard not to be noticed.
You stirred, half-awake, expecting perhaps Nami or Robin finally coming to bed. Instead, the mattress dipped right behind you. The warmth settled in, arms wrapping around you without hesitation. There was an elastic and intimate feel, pulling your back against a solid chest. You inhaled sharply, your senses snapping awake as a familiar scent surrounded you: rubber with a hint of sea salt. Unmistakably Luffy.Â
âLuffy?â you whispered, confusion threading through your voice but it came out like a small croak. Simply, your captain released a hum, already comfortable as his body sank against yours. His chin found its home against your shoulder as if he had always belonged there. As of lately, he had. The last few months, you found yourself in this unexpected tangible relationship with Luffy.Â
It wasnât intentional. Rather, it was an accident that just turned into routine with each other. One night after having too much sake, you found yourself in a situation with Luffy that was hard to turn away from: locking lips with your captain in the shadows. The first time, it was a sloppy mess in the best way, one that certainly made you view him differently. It was a kiss full of laughter in between moans and apologies, teeth and tongue knocking into each other, just the right amount of fluttering between your legs. Luffy was incredibly selfish when he kissed you, constantly greedy about how close he needed to be with you. And just like everything he got himself involved in, Luffy took control. Forward and deep, chaotic in a way that was intoxicating. Since then, it was evident that he would look for you when he was hungry for kisses and you melted every single time. However, it never went as far as kissing and groping.Â
You twisted just enough to look at him, eyes adjusting to the dim lantern glow from your attempt to read. He was grinning, straw hat discarded somewhere on the floor, eyes bright with a kind of pleased relief.
âWhat are you doing here?â you asked quietly. âEveryoneâs still awake.â
âI know,â he said simply, tightening his hold like the statement settled something in him. Your heart stuttered but your body simply adjusted to face him more. He was so close, his nose close to yours. He was smiling but his eyes seemed low, as if the food that rested in his belly was making him sleepy. It didnât help that he was in between fluffy blankets on a proper bed. The girls always had larger beds in their quarters and it was ten times more comfortable, especially when he was close enough to bite you. His head slipped into the space of your neck. He nuzzled your skin, your skin immediately growing hot.Â
âYouâŠYou know Nami and Robin can come in any second.â You whispered, your hands eventually trailing around his neck. Your arms embraced him completely, your body melting against his.
âYeah, so?â he replied matter of factly.Â
âSo,â you repeated, incredulously, âTheyâll see you in my bed.â
âYeah,â he said again, unbothered. âIâm not hidinâ.â
âThatâs not the point.â
âYou always go to bed early. I wanted to be with you. Itâs no fun without you there..â Luffy nuzzled closer, his lips rubbing against the skin of your neck as he spoke. His legs tangled with yours, entirely unbothered by your growing bewilderment. You shifted slightly, heart thudding too loud in your ears. This was new. Not the closeness, not the familiarity. You and Luffy had been like this, limbs overlapping, space nonexistent. Somewhere along the line, affection had blurred into something warmer, something shared quietly in stolen moments while sailing through the New World. Friends who crossed lines but never named them. He pulled away from your neck to look at you, wanting to see you more. He frowned slightly, his brows furrowing in that way he did when things didnât immediately make sense. You could almost see the gears grinding. Then his expression smoothed, something softer taking its place. For some reason, when he was alone with you, his child-like nature shimmered down. He seemed sincere in a forward way, still staying true to himself but a clear development of wanting to keep you comfortable. However, he still held mischief in his heart, he still liked to see you flustered.Â
âYou smell nice, like, really sweet,â he said as his smile expanded to a larger grin. Your breath caught. Before you could respond, before you could argue or explain or push him away to get him out of your bed, he leaned forward. His hand cupped your jaw with surprising gentleness, thumb brushing your cheek. His lips met yours, warm and certain, like he had already decided he was going to staying with you in your bed that very night. Your protest died before it ever reached your tongue.
 The kiss held that usual hunger, the deepness that leaned into your body as he normally did. His tongue carelessly entered your mouth and found yours, your chest heaving in response. His mouth moved against yours with quiet confidence, and you melted despite yourself, fingers curling into his loose vest. His hands trailed down to his favorite part of you: your thighs. With a firm grasp, he gripped around the fat and pulled this up towards his side, allowing your leg to rest on his skin. It was like he didnât care that the world outside your door existed, as if no one would walk in. Like the only thing that mattered was the warmth between you, the steady beat of his heart beneath your palm. The heat between your legs began to surge, your heart pounding faster as his lips slipped from your mouth to your neck.Â
The one thing you realized about Luffy when you two began this endeavor was that he surprisingly listened to you. The very first time he kissed your neck, he instinctively bit it hard like he was actually trying to eat you in the heat of the moment. When you yelped and guided him, letting him know how it hurt, he looked at you as if he was learning something new in training. You only ever had to tell him to bite you gently once and he never bit you as hard again. Not unless you told him to. The years of training under Rayleigh taught him when to listen when he truly wanted to learn something new for someone or something he cared about. That habit naturally carried over when the Straw Hats reunited, at least when he saw fit.Â
Luffyâs mouth softly bit your shoulder, his tongue licking the skin beneath it in between bites. The heat that rested between your thighs climbed to your stomach, allowing a moan to escape softly from your lips. He never seemed embarrassed of anything, especially when it came to you and your body. He never seemed flustered and probably because for Luffy, in the same way as eating, hearing you whimper and squirm gave him satisfaction and wanted more each time. Your mind began to wonder, the lust piling in your chest desired more. You needed him in the way you two never tried. Half because you were nervous, the other half because you werenât sure how much Luffy knew or didnât know. Just as your head was in the clouds, Luffyâs body began grinding against yours. There was a hardness that made you gasp into his ear, a small station of breath only for him. His crotch rubbed right on yours, your leg that was raised on his side squeezed against him instinctively.Â
âMmm, you taste good.â He hummed against your neck. You melted against his breath, the heat between you two becoming unbearable for you. The desire blossomed and boomed, his hips buckled and a groan to which you never heard him let go slipped. It almost sounded like a whimper, a plea as he pushed further against your clothing.Â
âYou have no idea what youâre saying,â You exhaled out as your hands lingered in his hair. The hardness that pushed through his shorts teased you. An urge so prominent that it ached you and you felt yourself become desperate. He pulled away from you and gave you a confused expression. He was so precious, his eyes practically sparkled when he looked at you even when he was oblivious.Â
âWhatcha talkinâ about. Iâm literally tastinâ you right now and youâre pretty tasty to me!â Luffy laughed out loudly to which your hand shot up to his mouth, trying to prevent his chuckles from leaving the bedroom. You shook your head as you scoffed, a giggle following right behind it. He moved his hips again, a gasp fleeing your mouth. Your fingers that sat on his mouth pressed down out of instinct. The way Luffy looked at you seemed like a haze. He looked like he was starving behind your hand, his eyes staring between your lips and your neck but he kept snickering here and there. Suddenly, his mouth opened slightly and your fingers slipped into his mouth. With a sly series of chuckles, Luffy began to suck on two of your fingers. The taste of your skin was something he enjoyed, especially when he knew you would get all red in the face like an apple. This time, however, there was a look in your eyes he never witnessed before. Mouth agape, your chest heaving with a heaviness that seemed serious. And that's when you said it:Â
âWant to really taste me?â You didnât even think about what came out of your mouth, not even registering the words nor their depth. Luffy nodded his head with an eagerness that was trifling. You stood very still for a moment. You werenât so sure if you two were ready for this, let alone if you felt confident enough to strip. But your hands moved on their own. Slowly, your hand moved away from his lips, slipping out of his mouth. They snuck their way down to the sides of your pajama pants. Luffy shifted his body away from you, trying to understand what you were trying to do. He pushed himself up to face you on his knees, his body slightly towering over you. His head tilted briefly to the side as you slipped your pajama pants down and then, eventually, your panties. When your hands flicked the clothing to the side, your legs stayed open just ever so slightly. Luffy wasnât entirely oblivious to what you were attempting but he looked at you with shock since neither of you tried this with each other. In fact, his expression softened as he looked at you with furrowed brows, his tongue licking his lips briefly. Still, as he looked at you, only the slightest hue of red coated his cheeks. When it came to naked bodies, it never seemed to phase him. However, when it came to you, it was something he didnât realize impacted him. He felt hot, bothered to the point his hands tugged at the waist band of his shorts. An impatience swelled in him, the same way he got when Sanji was taking too long to make him his meal.Â
âYou could really taste me down here,â you said as your legs opened a little further. Your words came out shy and breathless. For a moment, you thought he was going to stay still but he sank right in. He was almost animalistic, the eagerness over taking him just like everything he consumed. His hands pushed your legs apart selfishly, his head lowering between your thighs. His mouth landed on the part of you that was the most sensitive. His tongue slipped between the wetness of your folds, a deepened breath taken in as he did so. His tongue swirled around and over your clit, rough and hard.
He was sloppy and fast, overwhelming you with the suddenness. There was a mixture of hums and groans that came from him as his eyes shut tightly, his hands gripping the outer parts of your thighs. Without warning, his grip around your thighs became painful, his fingers becoming rough against your skin. One of your hands went on his head, giving a slight push to make him halt. His eyes fluttered open and he lifted his mouth off of you. His face was glistening from you, from both the soaking sap you gave him and the pink hue that now painted his face more than you never saw from him. He looked at you, deprived, a look that was begging for more.Â
âYou okay?â Luffy stummered. It was almost like he was intoxicated but at the same time, impatient to go back to what he had started. You needed to speak but the quivering of your legs caught you off guard. The pain radiated from your skin, a burning you never felt. Your nerves were pumped and you tried to stay composed but even his breath near your clit made you shake. All you were able to do in that second was move your hand to his cheek, your thumb running across his scar.Â
âS-Slow down. Itâs a lot for me. Do what I tell you, o-okay?â You uttered. There was guidance needed here, a lesson to be learned as you both entered something totally and completely new. He was enjoying it, that was clear, but you knew exactly what he would like more. This was an ultimate test to see how much Luffy would actually listen to you, considering he hated being told what to do. He raised his right brow at you before he gave a small, light lick against your thigh. He was taunting, wanting to push back against your request so desperately.Â
âMâkay fine. You just..you taste really good!â Luffy squirmed as he went back in. His brows bucked as he concentrated with his eyes closed. A sigh fluttered from you, your back arching lightly against his tongue. Your hips adjusted, assisting his tongue movements to hit just the right spot. His thumbs, although the pressure eased, still held their firmness on your thighs before tracking up to your hips. He pushed you further against his face that caused a moan of approval from the both of you. His eyes opened up, looking right at you as his tongue mindlessly swirled around your hardened clit. Seeing you squirm, move against his mouth, it was exhilarating for him. Especially after you would instruct him on his pacing, when to speed up and slow down, where his tongue should reside and how hard he needed to focus on one spot. He loved to win, loved to know when he was getting better at something. And he knew just from looking at you, that he was winning. As for you, the moment you realized he was staring at you, you couldnât help but hide behind your hands. The flood of your vaginal silk made him grunt against you, moving faster for more. It went from a thoughtless adventure to something strategic that was leading to a goal and it tasted so good.
âR-right thereâŠfaster!â You pleaded, your heart pumping faster in your chest. With resolution, your fingers grabbed his hair. A fluttering surged in your core and your breathing hitched. Your knees pushed towards his head and his eyes widened slightly. He followed your instructions, his tongue and mouth moved faster for your desire. A series of hums and groans let from him as his eyes came to a close once again, your heart sunk as you felt your climax approaching. At this point, your mindfulness of your volume began to fade. Your moans spilled out of you like water, increasing with each swirl of his tongue. Your brain was clouded by lustful intentions, the pressure of your body wanting to go over the edge.Â
âL-Luffy! Your fingerâah, waitâI need your finger inside!â Luffy lifted his head from your clit and looked at you, his hand trying to figure out where exactly you wanted it. You found yourself reaching over, leading his middle finger right at your vaginal entrance, to which he slid his finger right in. With the guidance of your hand on his wrist, you instructed him to go in and out.Â
âK-keep doing that just l-like that and e-eat at the same time.â You took a deep breath as you locked eyes with him, pushing past your nerves to communicate what you needed. His eyes widened with amusement by your forwardness, your demands hidden behind squirms and moans. This was absolutely exciting for him, his crotch at this point had throbbed and ached for some sort of relief.Â
âWoah! Shishishi, Y/N. Youâre really liking this, huh,â Luffyâs words were a mixture of laughter and breathless pants. He knew he was starving but he never saw you as eager for something as you were in that very moment. His laughter trailed until he went back to your clit, his tongue and finger moving in sync with the occasional slop. Moans came out of your throat with each time his finger pushed in and out. The pressure paired from his finger and the flicking of his tongue made your back arch. Luffyâs free hand stationed itself on your hip, groping and releasing the fat that resided there. Without warning, your body came to its edge. A loud gasp came from you, the orgasm overcame you, your hands pulling Luffyâs hair tighter than you wanted. You shuddered, your moans turned into whines and whimpers. Luffy, without a care, kept going. The air in your lungs was tight, your knees pushing against his head. Thatâs when his head shook from side to side, his eyes narrowing briefly.Â
âNah-uh,â Luffy muffled. He raised his head as his tongue made one, long lick from your folds to your clit. The feeling that throbbed against your body was too much. The ecstasy that surged through your body made you practically squeal against his touch, melting into a mess that you never experienced in your life. Your pussy was weeping at this point, throbbing and shifting with each movement.Â
âL-Luffy! I-I canâtââ
âIâm not done yet,â Luffyâs mouth sucked against your clit as his hand kept you anchored. His finger kept pushing through you, despite the tightness that clenched around the limb. All that swarmed your mind was how selfish he was being with your body, the greed engulfed him as he indulged himself in you. The heat that radiated off of him seemed like annoyance, like he didnât appreciate you trying to stop him. He softened up as he kept going, as if you were making him melt by your throbbing vulnerability.Â
âSo good. MoreâŠgimme more!â His words were like music to your ears. Who knew that Luffy would enjoy this as much as he did. Tangible and physically edible food was one thing, but orally pleasing you was a completely different thing. Your eyes wandered to the door, your ears perking up at the sound of footsteps and voices approaching. Before you even could warn Luffy, his hand shot across the room and slammed the bedroom door shut, locking it quickly. It was perfectly clear that Luffy said he was not done and he meant it. A knock came from the door and a voice from behind it, Namiâs voice, creeped through.Â
âY/N, you okay in there? We heard some whining. Are you feeling okay?â Your face was burning hot as you covered your mouth, your hands squeezed tightly around your mouth to prevent your moans from coming through. The knocking against the wooden door and the twisting of the door knob made you shutter. With panicked hands, you clumsily pulled the covers over your and Luffy, hiding his body underneath the blankets completely. Luffy was not giving up, he was ravenous at this point and replaced his finger with his tongue. He dug deep, his method becoming a sloppy mess as he practically painted himself with you. Just by looking at him, you knew there was no end in sight. His gluttonous ways were not going to stop until he was satisfied.Â
âY-yes! Sorry, I just need some space r-right now!â Your words came out like cries and embarrassment coiled in your chest. You pleaded to yourself that she and whoever was next to her would take your word for it and leave. There was a pause, your hands trying to push Luffyâs head to ease his jaw but there was no prevail. Just the gentle noises of him slurping you up. After a moment, the voices and footsteps walked away as a burst of laughter boomed down the hallway. A sigh of relief uttered from your chest before your head fell back, resting on the pillow behind it. The mixture of anxiety and arousal truly hit you like a truck. Surprisingly, Luffy only began to laugh as he lifted his head up again, this time his body lifting away from between your legs. The blanket sat on his shoulders like a cape as his body adjusted under it. You couldnât help but notice the bulging erection that outlined through his shorts, his hands tugging and shifting the waist band to make him more comfortable.Â
âA-are you uncomfortable Luffy?â Your words came out like a whisper. Poor Luffy, his shorts seemed so tight from that position. He was practically drooling over you, you couldnât tell was from him or what was from you in the dark. He nodded but the smile on his face filled with excitement as if he was looking at his favorite thing in the whole world. His hands rubbed his mouth and jaw, his hands coating in your juice as he leaned forward. His lips collided with yours again, his tongue hungrily licking your lips. It was literally like he wanted to eat you alive.Â
âIâm good. I just need sâmore.â He panted against your lips, his hands pulling down the waist band of his shorts and his underwear. His cock practically bounced out in heat, tapping against you lightly. There was no point in worrying about how this was going to go considering he had already made you cum for the first time. Your arms wrapped around him as you went in for another kiss. There was no time for you to think, he simply pushed himself in. It wasnât gentle, instead it was a rough shove as if he was itching to do it for a while. Your body jumped and settled against him, a curse trembling out from his mouth.Â
âShit!â auuughâ Y/NÂ sâgood. You feel so good!â A deep groan released from him as your body tightened around him, a shuddered gasp leaving yours. The two of you locked eyes for a moment before he started to nod, his ecstatic eyes practically glowing. He was absolutely excited simply because you felt so good. Never did Luffy think that something like this was going to be fun for him, he never even considered going this far with anyone. But when he saw how you reacted, how you pushed and pulled with his touch, it made him hungrier to understand you and your body language.Â
With a primitive instinct, Luffy thrusted into you without warning. He positioned himself as his cock curled inside of you to grab a hold of your legs, spreading them just enough to fully take you in. All he knew was that the wetness that covered his shaft sent chills in his body that forced him to move. To push himself so deep until that feeling in his abdomen carried to his hips. An instant rhythm was formed, his breathing deepened with the whimpers he kept inside.Â
You were shocked, not even knowing how to react as his hips began to slam against you. As your eyes trailed from his sculpted abs to the scene of his cock sliding in and out of you. You realized that there was this sudden adoration that sprouted inside of you. Moans wanted to jump right out of your lips but you covered your mouth so quickly that it pushed them back in. The drool that bubbled in his mouth slightly began to trickle to the side of his mouth since it was parted open. He kept watching the way your breast began to move underneath your shirt with each of his thrust, slowly rising up just above your belly button. The pounding of his hips began to increase and with one critical hit, a moan spilled out of your mouth. A loud, naturally floral moan. Your face was hot, pinkness swimming across your face as his cock deeply slammed against your cervix. There was no point in keeping quiet any more. Luffy had increased his speed with his laughter blossoming from it in between grunts. It was like he was a bubbling mess, the ecstasy hitting his core as his shaft was covered from your velvety walls.
Luffyâs nails began to dig deep into the skin of your thighs, a hardness that burned your skin hot. His nails made crescent moon type shapes on your skin, the redness radiating on your flesh. Suddenly, he leaned over, a small laughter type moan planting itself in shoulder. His mouth opened and his esurient bites were incredibly hard. You wanted to protest, wanting to make him stop from leaving visible marks but you felt that familiar rise pile in your stomach. The pain was actually turning you on more, his hunger driving you with the same animalistic desire. His jaw clawed from your shoulder, to your neck and eventually his lips planted a sloppy moan-filled kiss. You pulled him in closer, the desire of wanting him as close to you as possible as his teeth sank in your lips made you so unbelievably wet. Muscles, sweat, and heavy breathing in your ear from him fueled the fire that had built up in your stomach.Â
âOh my goâwait Luffy!â Before you knew it, your body began to climax all over again. Your moans turned into a sea of whimpers, half covered by your hands and the other hands spilling into the air like stars in the sky. You noticed through your own throbbing walls, that Luffyâs hips started to become messy and his grunts became more like whines. The ache in him was reaching a high in between kisses with you. The shudder of his cock made him groan, his pacing increasing with an anchor-like speed.Â
âY/N I-I think immaâoh sh-shitâ haha imma cum, Y/N. I-immaââ Luffyâs groans came out stiff, like it was hard for him to vocalize to you. The clenching of your quivering walls made him shoot such a hot load inside of you, you both hissed with satisfaction. His lips sat right on top of yours, his hyperventilating pants easing down into gulps, an attempt to catch his own breath. Sweat slid down his chest, coating his abs, and shimmered into something beautiful as his thrust slowed down. He, eventually, pulled out of you with a stroke. His body fell right on top of yours to which you gasped, your arms locking around him. You two laid with each other like that for a moment, your pants syncing into each other in a way that only your hearts could allow. You didnât even realize it until he faced you, but laughter spilled out of you. Real, gut living laughter filled the air. Luffy looked at you, his eyes jumping from all over your face until he joined you.Â
âWhat?â Luffy laughed back, his words coming out like a child wanting to know what the joke was. You shook your head, your hand covering a portion of your face as the laughter kept booming out of your lungs. Maybe it was the fact you knew that when Luffy unlocked that door, that Nami would come barging in with a vengeance so hot that it made you laugh. Or maybe it was the fact that you unapologetically just slept with your captain for the very first time and now the whole crew most likely heard. Either way, when your laughter subsided and all that was left was a long sigh. You looked at Luffy with sincerity.Â
âNothing, Nothing Iâm fine.â You reassured him. Luffy flashed you his usual gummy smile as he gave you a quick kiss before burying his head in the space of your shoulder and neck. Just next to his check, a mountain of marks coated your skin revealing an interesting story on your body.Â
