Writings & Reviews From A Rotten Girl.

Tumblr has been a lot of things to me... Right now it's a place to share my fanfics, orginal works, and my reviews.

[cubur]

for the one who deserves all the flowers〜 @snow124-art 💐 I'm grateful that you never give up sharing your creativity with us！

[extrarottengirl]

This art reminds me that I wanted to write a Naruto AU Challengers fic… 🤔

[extrarottengirl]

Pet by Deulsum

Status: Complete (3 chapters)

Rating: Grapefruit

Warnings: None

Additional Tags: Kink, BDSM, Master/Slave, Dom/Sub, Power Bottom, Bondage, Loving.

Summary: “A florist and his regular customer. On the surface, they seem normal but they have a very special relationship, restraints, handcuffs, toys, SM. The florist is a master and the other is a dog who listens obediently. However, things take an interesting turn when their already unusual relationship grows into something more.” - Mangadex

Review: For all the kinky fun that is packed into three chapters, this is surprising sweet and loving. The two characters are in a budding kink relationship where there is an opportunity for more to bloom. The art is detailed and stunning. The only thing I wish about this is that there were more chapters. 

The BDSM relationship feels appropriately negotiated. The characters despite the short length of this work have good depth. I definitely recommend it for those looking for something spicy without a dark twist. 

[jadenerd]

This is so me

[extrarottengirl]

Too real!

[extrarottengirl]

Stigmata by Takahashi Hidebu

Volumes: 2 COMPLETE

Rating: Ummm… A Lemon?

Warnings: Gore, Dubious Consent, Reference to Rape/Non-Con, Murder, References to Domestic Violence and Abuse

Additionally Tags: Police, Detectives, Investigators/Investigations, Supernatural Powers, Psychic Powers, Deeply Psychological, Criminal Investigations, Thriller, Uncertain Ending, Complex Characters

Summary: “Asako Minami has a "unique constitution." He senses the lingering thoughts of murder victims, and experiences the circumstances under which they died with his own body in a reaction similar to stigmata. This proves useful in solving difficult cases with the Metropolitan Police Department's Special Investigations Unit Six. Asako's partner is the reserved Superintendent Kuroiwa Hiroto, rising through the MPD ranks despite doubting his own abilities.”

Review: This not your typical BL plot. The major of the story surrounds the death of a Detective’s ex-wife and her unsolved murder. Asako our main character can relive the thoughts and feelings of a murder victim when he is exposed to items and people present when the individual died. This poses a problem as he is holding on to lingering feeling from a murder victim once married to his superior, Kuroiwa. Asako quickly loses track of what feelings are Kuroiwa’s ex wife and what feelings are his own in regard to Kurowia.

Incredibly suspenseful in the romantic plot and criminal investigation. If you like Law and Order and BL you will like this. The art style is highly unique and very interesting. I enjoy the complexity of the style and the extremely stylized panels.

The spicy scenes are captivating in my opinion. More so there is a lot of sensuality add to scenes that are not exactly spicy. This adds to the suspense of romantic plot line. Asako is drawn in a more gender fluid way than the Kuroiwa. In fact, he is drawn more feminine than other characters in other work by Takahashi which is interesting. However, I do feel there is a bit of inherent awkwardness as Kuroiwa is rather blunt towards the end of the second volume. All and all I love this work but it is not for everyone

[extrarottengirl]

Twilight Out of Focus by Janome

Status: Completed (8 chapters | has a side story— Afterimage Slow Motion)

Rating: Lemon

Warnings: Domestic Violence, SA, Past Unhealthy Relationships, Past Teacher/Student Relationship

Summary: “Tsuchiya Mao is roommates with Otomo Hisashi who is secretly gay; that's why they made three rules:

I. Mao must never reveal Hisashi's secret.

II. Hisashi won't look at Mao as a romantic interest.

III. Neither of them can get in the way of the other's "personal needs".

They had no problems living together until the movie club – which Mao is part of – decided to film a BL movie for their school festival project, casting Hisashi for the lead role.” - Manga Updates

Review: I am reviewing this now that there is an anime adaptation under the same name. I really like this work for its sweetness and authentic emotions. Mao, our main character, is not only adorable but relatable. His realization of his feeling for Hisashi is sweet and not trite like many BL “character that is not gay is suddenly gay” tropes. Hisashi is a delinquent but is not shown being particular badly behaved. More so he is an out cast that seemly doesn’t care he is an outcast. Additionally, it is alluded he is poor and from the country side. All the warning I wrote for this fic revolve around Hisashi misguided relationship he holds at the start of the story.

The spicy scenes are spicy but have a cuteness to them. To be honest they were a little too spicy for the tone of the story in my opinion. They are present in the anime too, just not as explicit.

The art style lends itself beautifully to the story. Its curved lines and ethereal shading are very cinematic in a way. Over all I like it work a lot, but it doesn’t translate very well to the anime to me. This is mainly due to their slight change is art style and over reliance on a slow frame rate.

[extrarottengirl]

The Queen and the Tailor by Scarlet Beriko

Volumes: 1 COMPLETE

Rating: Lemon

Warning: None

Additional Tags: Tailor, Some Age Difference (not creepy), Firey Younger Top, Chiller Older Bottom, Comedy.

Summary: “It is said that if you wear the suits from SHIDA, a shop located on the antique street, you will achieve success.

During a break at work, interior designer Jouno Oumi visits the shop and meets a frightening and blunt man. He is the legendary tailor, Shida. Seeing the appearance of Shida who takes pride in his work, Oumi begins to feel a longing for the man, and an attraction starts to form…

This is a love story between an obstinate interior designer and a hard-faced man.”

Review: This is cute and good and I love it! Classic rom com set up and perfect get together (imo). I like the age difference because it is not creepy but it is plot relevant as it is an implied small obstacle for the relationship. The younger character is more brash and less established while the older character is more warily. The art is traditional to Japanese manga and well done. There is nothing else to say really… Goes read it.

[extrarottengirl]

Chapters: 2/3 Fandom: 幽☆遊☆白書 | YuYu Hakusho: Ghost Files (Anime & Manga) Rating: Explicit Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply Relationships: Hiei/Kurama | Minamino Shuuichi Characters: Kurama | Minamino Shuuichi, Hiei (YuYu Hakusho) Additional Tags: Mating Cycles/In Heat, Mating Bites (mentioned), First Time, Ambiguous Relationships, Friends to Lovers, Alpha/Beta/Omega Dynamics, Omegaverse (sort of), Plot What Plot/Porn Without Plot, Bottom Hiei, Top Kurama, Voyeurism, Accidental Voyeurism Summary:

Hiei and Kurama's relationship has wained in the years after the War of the Three Kings. So when Kurama arrives home from work to find his old partner in a state of delirium in his bed, he more than a bit suprised.

[extrarottengirl]

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

Chapters: 1/1 Fandom: Naruto (Anime & Manga) Rating: Explicit Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply Relationships: Hatake Kakashi/Maito Gai | Might Guy, Haruno Sakura & Hatake Kakashi Characters: Hatake Kakashi, Maito Gai | Might Guy, Haruno Sakura Additional Tags: Angst and Hurt/Comfort, Emotional Hurt/Comfort, Nightmares, Hatake Kakashi Has PTSD, Gai is adorable, Friends to Lovers, Childhood Friends Series: Part 1 of My Rival and I (Missing Scenes) Summary:

After a traumatic mission to the Land of Waves, the first out of the village with his young genin team, Kakashi can’t sleep. A chance encounter with his Rival, Gai, changes that.

[extrarottengirl]

Not my usual content but here is my rec list for Challengers fics. [If you haven’t seen the movie get your fujoshi ass to the theatre.]

1) Ace of Hearts by sleepstxtic

Rating: Explicit

Ship: Art Donaldson/Tashi Donaldson/Patrick Zweig

Perfect closure for the movie ending. Very faithfully the vibe of the movie. The author seemed to be well adapted for writing in this fandom as they have a few Tennis RPF fics already under their belt. Kudos sleepstxtic.

2) symbiosis by congee4lunch

Rating: Explicit

Ship: Art Donaldson/Patrick Zweig, Art Donaldson/Tashi Donaldson/Patrick Zweig

Art and Patrick make a movie for their tennis queen. Congee4lunch says in their authors note “throuples now, throuples forever” which got me cackling.

3) a romeantic fool by spqr

Rating: Explicit

Ship: Art Donaldson/Tashi Donaldson/Patrick Zweig

Warning: baby fic???

Okay, I really liked this fic. The sex scenes are hot and the emotional bits are satisfying deep. However, it centers around Art and Tashi being parents to Lily and Patrick being Lily’s bio dad. So if that is not your yum, be warned.

[extrarottengirl]

Love or Hate by Yeong Ha & Bak Dam

Status: Complete (106 Chapters)

Rating: Lemon

Warnings: Incest (Kinda)

Additional Tags: Step Brothers, Love Triangle, Actors, Artists

Summary: “Haesoo is a cynical writer of a romance column, while Joowon, his former stepbrother, is a famous actor. The two go way back - thrust together when their parents remarried, their relationship is far from simple. Brothers? Soulmates? Friends with benefits? Or nothing at all? Theirs is a delicate balance between lust and loathing, dating and breaking up, irritation and infatuation. When the mysterious photographer “K” takes an interest in Haesoo, events begin to spiral out of control. As the lines between art and reality become increasingly blurred, what direction will this story take?” - Lezhin

Review: I did enjoy this manwha, though it was not a scandalous as I wanted. Part of the love triangle is step brothers for Christ’s sake— this can’t be a perfectly wholesome love story about finding yourself!

The art is good but no panel really suck out to me. The “first season” of the webcomic was a page turner but I found myself struggle to get through the “second season”. Maybe my soul is tainted but I also felt the sex scenes was a bit too tame. All and all… I finished it.

[extrarottengirl]

Funny panel from Ice Man. Pfff

[extrarottengirl]

Funny panel from BJ Alex.

[extrarottengirl]

BJ Alex by Mingwa

Status: Complete (97 chapters including side story)

Rating: Grapefruit

Warnings: Rape/Non-con, general violence, abusive relationships

Additional Tags: College/University, Cam Boys, Sex Work, BDSM, Sun/Dom.

Summary: “Every night at 10, Dong-gyun locks himself up in his room, grabs a box of tissues, and watches a live cam boy show hosted by Alex, a BJ (broadcast jockey). Timid Dong-gyun admires not only Alex's r**ped body, but his candor in sharing his s**ual experiences with viewers. One night, Dong-gyun downs too many drinks at a school networking event and passes out. When he wakes up, he's in bed staring up at a shirtless hunk. A hunk who looks an awful lot like...Alex.” - Lexzhin

Review: Sooo… The truth be told I have been avoiding reading BJ Alex for a while. There is a lot of hype around this manwha BL that makes it feel underwhelming when reading it. Unfortunately, I hated Dong-gyan and Jiwon relationship. Jiwon is a toxic asshole and I do not like the character development to “good boyfriend” he is given. On the other hand… I am obsessed with Myung-Dae and Chanwoo who are the two protagonists in the side stories. They are the couple that has the hottest (and I mean steamy scenes full of BDSM and toys including a sounding scene— if you don’t know look it up) sex scenes and best relationship dynamic. I actually believe that Myung-Dae loves Chanwoo. I wish there was more of the two side characters and less of the Dong-gyan and Jiwon. Away, the art took me a second to get behind— don’t ask me why; it good art. The feel of the either plot plus the very comic strip-esque art is on the silly side. Occasionally it gets serious. Overall is was a fine read.

[extrarottengirl]

This gem is from Like the Beast by Yamamoto Kotetsuko.

[extrarottengirl]

As an aside, I will post funny panels from the manga/webcomics/etc I read. This gem is from Hopelessly Devoted by Yamamoto Kotetsuko. It’s the “Good Luck Me” for me…

[extrarottengirl]

Pornographer Playback by Marukido Maki

Volumes: 1 (Part of a series with the works, The Pornographer and Mood Indigo)

Rating: Barely a Lemon

Warnings: None

Additional Tags: misunderstandings, established relationships, heart felt.

Summary: “Rio, incompetent with technology, usually with a phone on 0% battery, and Kuzumi, a slave to his new job as an advertiser with no time to write to Rio, struggle to work through their long-distance relationship. Rio one day childishly runs away from home and, after a series of events, hurts his arm (again) and starts rooming with the instigator of his injury. Kuzumi, on the other hand, tries to confront Rio to do something about their relationship... but can Kuzumi find him and manage to bring him back?” - Futekiya Library

Review: Definitely worth the read after reading The Pornographer (it’s prequel). This made me feel things. Additionally, even though the spicy scene is rather tame, the emotional developments proceeding made it *chefs kiss*.

[extrarottengirl]

Silky Secrets by Gazealle

Status: On Going (36 chapters)

Warnings: None (so far, a little coy dubious consent dialogue durning spicy scenes)

Additional Tags: Lingerie, Panties, Crossdressing, Salarymen, Workplace Romance, Evil Ex.

Summary: “Kwon Chan-woong was off to a great start at the cosmetic company he was just hired at. Raving reviews from his coworkers, getting recognized by Park Young-in, the team leader and rising star at the company, things couldn’t have been going any better… until an alcohol abundant, rowdy work dinner complicates matters. Young-in has too much to drink and when Chan-woong helps him get home, he opens Young-in’s closet and discovers a major secret, one involving silk…” - Lezhin

Review: It’s been a long time since I did a Web comic review. This one by Gazealle is available on Lezhin. I really like the begin power dynamic between our two characters. Chan-woong is a innocent young himbo like protagonist that finds out a sexy secret able his kind but very “man in charge” boss. In the bedroom these two characters change rolls, leaving Chan-wrong in charge and Park in a more submissive roll. The spicy scenes are well drawn and flow well. However, I would get confused with some of the dialogue, especially in a spicy scene. In an attempt to make Park more submissive, I feel they missed the mark by making him too timid. All in all I will continue to read this one.