Best Presentation
First I would like to congratulate my class on doing an exceptional job on project 3! In my opinion I think that Rebecca’s presentation was the most effective. Her topic on natural cosmetics is something that definitely needs more awareness. Her poster in particular made me question what products I was using and what I was putting on my face. it made question whether or not the creams and makeup I was using were healthy for my skin and has me now considering using more natural and organic cosmetics. Her website was beautiful and creative, and I loved how she created a testimonials page for people to share their thoughts and to interact with all people in this community. Her proof page was something that I thought was unique, and it was something I never thought I could use as a genre. Overall it was was interesting to see how she came about with it and how she executed it. Lastly, I liked how each of her genres encompassed a different rhetorical appeal to promote her message. With a little more distribution and promotion, it could definitely become a successful campaign and gain a lot more circulation! Great job.
I enjoyed her presentation and her wix website too She did a great job with staying upbeat and positive through her presentation Maybe advertise her genres a little more The poster was good, but simplifying it may be more effective #bbenc2135











