Did I mean for my silly crack fic to turn into a fix-it/Fives Lives/AU? No. Is that what ended up happening? Yes. Am I mad about it? Absolutely not! Iâve been having a kriffing BLAST with this fic. Itâs been such a fun style to write in, and so out of my comfort zoneâŚbut itâs been so fun!!
Hereâs an excerpt from Chapter Six of my fic Of Scene Breaks and Plot Twists:
Fivesâs eyes snap back to mine. âWhat did you say?â
My mouth feels like itâs full of sawdust. Why did I say that? Why did I say that? WHY DID I SAY THAT? My mouth works like a dying fish out of water.
âEcho is dead,â Fives continues when my own voice refuses to cooperate. âEcho has been dead for a long time. And Iâd sure as kriffing hells know if he knew someone who was absolutely karking insane!â He is nearly shouting and Omega stirs.
Fives and I go still until the girl falls asleep again, her breathing steady and deep.
âYou have every right not to trust me,â I tell Fives, keeping my voice low. âThereâs a lot I canât just tell you. Not yet. Not withoutâŚâ
Without potentially changing the course of history in a direction I cannot control.
âEcho isnât dead,â I say instead of whatever I was about to spill. Fives opens his mouth to protest, but I put up a hand to silence him. âHeâs a prisoner of the Techno Union.â
Fives shakes his head, his expression a furious storm.
âI would not lie to you, not about this,â I tell him, pouring every bit of certainty and honesty into my voice as I can muster up. âNever about this. Iâm notââ
Yes, I am both of those things. Or I was.
Fivesâs throat bobs, and he glares in a different direction so that he isnât facing me. âYouâre saying we left him? At the Citadel? All this time?â His voice is flat but not emotionless. Restrained. Painfully restrained.
I hesitate, but the truth is there whether I voice it or not. âYes.â
Fives sniffs, scrubs his hand roughly over his face, and looks back at me. âIf youâre lying to meââ
Fivesâs eyes gleam in the dim lighting as he watches me for a moment, as if trying to assess on visual alone if Iâm to be trusted. Weighing the risk of putting fragile, shattered hope in my hands. I would understand if he refused to believe me, I would. But itâll hurt when the blow comes.
âOkay,â Fives says at last with a sharp nod. âWhat do we do now?â
My breath whooshes out of my lungs, and I almost burst into tears at the sheer relief. But if Fives can maintain his composure, so can I. âWe find Clone Force 99.â
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